AsYa Two-shot: Secret Desires (Updt Ch 2 pg7)

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

This is so good. you are a very good writer.. i wish you would continue this as an SS... Describing Dilshad's and Najma's reaction to their love and Ayan's feelings when he comes to know that Zoya has fallen for Asad.. it would also be wonderful to read about Asad's reaction when Zoya tells him that she also loves him.
Please continue it. 😃

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you!??

Why must you go and make me dream up all sorts of fantasies with you brilliantly beautifully written work?! WHY!?

Haayeee, I'm in LOVE with this TS. I LOVE it. PLEASE do write more! 😳

-Raina

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Loved it! That was amazing!

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

it was awesome...loved it!! u write beautifully...

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Superb.. One of the best i have ever read..

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

This was a lovely two shot. Very sweet with its slow progression.
I love the end too

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countingstarz

@countingstarz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Not gonna lie I was definitely fangirling at the terrace scene. You're such a good writer ! I wish you would write more, and if you do please PM me :)