AsYa Two-shot: Secret Desires (Updt Ch 2 pg7)

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Shabana0786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Lovely two-shot!!!...

Enjoyed & loved both parts...

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princess14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

that was great...i wish you would write one more part so we can see how everyone reacts especially dilshaad and najma!

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Noor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Oh dear, that was sooo romantic, u r such a good writer, I was imagining everything while reading this wonderful OS. Do write more,and plz let me know when u do, bcoz I love the way u write, u r good my friend:)

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I was gushing like a teenage schoolgirl through the entire thing! :D This is just amazing! You've played it out so well, it's just fricking amazingly awesomely cool. :D

Please please please write more!

I beg you.

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aashshhs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Beautiful story...loved every bit of it :) :) :)

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Oishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Loved the way u described & wrote the part...really amazing..

plss write more ...would love to read

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

OH MY. This was just so great! A pleasant and mature read 😊 Please do continue... love how you portrayed and went into details of Asad's feelings and Zoya's confusion of feelings 😊