RIZREET FF- Paradise CHAPTER 1 updated pg3

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

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Unres 😆
Jan 🤗
Fantastic. You have me intrigued :)
Update fast 😃

Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 9 years ago

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Res!

UnRes!⭐️

DD!🤗 I loved the first chapter!The plot is intriguing and the flow is good.👏 I loved the PJ cracked by Ishan!😆 Add to it,both are reporters!Superb.😎 I liked the effect 'THE VOICE' gave.A very omnious feel.👏 Waise who is that guy??😕 Do Ishaan and Rizwan have the same face??😕 Answer these questions pls!😆

You are an amazing writer!👏Update soon.😃

Edited by EternalStars. - 9 years ago

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Lovely plot DD. Please continue but yes, you have already said after a month. OK, have no choice but to wait 😊

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Dear please continue. It is intriguing.

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CutiepieAD

@CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Oh Man Janavi

You are Pyaar Ko ho Jane Do fan 😲

Ohhh Janu I loved this show

Ishan and Preet what an intense love story they had

Never seen before on TV and i have to say no one can imitate such a story

Only dhang ki story Ekta ji made in recent times, I guess 😆

These cross the border, terrorist related stories are something which excite me the most 😳

First it was Rangrasiya (though it lost its plot towards the end ), and then Pyaar ko 😳😳

Awww a terrorist is not always bad, its the circumstances which plunge u to do something you are not willing to, sometimes knowingly, sumtimes unknowingly.. And Rizvan was such a guy, trapped in the web of terrorism.. Preet, just love her yaar, country and love what a dilemma 👏

And Iqbal and Mona did full justice to the characters... 👏👏👏

And you are getting the Ishreet chemistry so well, i could see the scene playing before my eyes.. 👏⭐️

Ahh loveddd ittt ❤️

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Read the first chapter

Its really good

But thoda sa confused with this Kavya and Preet...

Are they same girls or Ishan gets reminded of her when he sees Preet

Edited by aditi97 - 9 years ago

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Aditi the story is from kavya's POV... 😆 not ishan.

Ek baar phir se read karna maybe u r confused.. 😆

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CutiepieAD

@CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: daydreamers
Aditi the story is from kavya's POV... 😆 not ishan.
Ek baar phir se read karna maybe u r confused.. 😆

ok😆

BTW in the show Kavya was his daughter right?

Is it same Kavya ?

I forgot the character names a bit

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

The story is a lil confusing for all those who could not catch up with PKHJD epii regularly,as I see.😆

Apart from that,I never knew you could write a story,and that too so professionally.😲

But its a thriller I suppose,atleast for me.Just like some detective series 😆

Undoubtedly,its amazing :))

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: LakshMila
The story is a lil confusing for all those who could not catch up with PKHJD epii regularly,as I see.😆
Apart from that,I never knew you could write a story,and that too so professionally.😲
But its a thriller I suppose,atleast for me.Just like some detective series 😆
Undoubtedly,its amazing :))

i'll improvise it for others if psbl 😆

@bold 🤣 kuch bhi...