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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

I am lost..

A little confused??
Kavya and preet are different right?
Sometimes you said preet and others kavya which is confusing..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon


They are different... The story is from kavya's perspective and her past... 😉 uske past me preet toh ayegi hi na 😉

She's reminded of certain things from her past thru connections in the present...

If the doubt is cleared read the chair wala part again... The storeroom part where preet sits is the flashback and hence the dialogue is in italics...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: daydreamers


They are different... The story is from kavya's perspective and her past... 😉 uske past me preet toh ayegi hi na 😉

She's reminded of certain things from her past thru connections in the present...

If the doubt is cleared read the chair wala part again... The storeroom part where preet sits is the flashback and hence the dialogue is in italics...


Thank you.. My confusion is cleaned now
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
wow jhan it's pretty intrigue filled. You're a great writer. If you don't mind me asking what genre do you classify your story into ?. im so Pleased to meet a writer of a great caliber. 😳 😳
Edited by -Destiny- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Thank you for the PM 😊 though i hv not opened it yet 😆
First thing first...loved the disection of Shergill by Ishaan 🤣🤣
After reading first part, got the plot of ur story...not whole story but got an idea k what ur story is all about(i hope mere intuitions, thinking sahi prove ho) 😆

It was the nice story, you are a wonderful writer ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

wow jhan it's pretty intrigue filled. You're a great writer. If you don't mind me asking what genre do you classify your story into ?. im so Pleased to meet a writer of a great caliber. 😳 😳


Hi lekha ji.. Long tym...🤗

To be very frank I don't c myself as a writer... 😆 coz am not a pro.. But if u say the plot is intriguing then thanx a lot 😳

Ummm to classify my story 🤔 (becomes difficult for a nonprofessional like me 😆) u may put it in mix masala bolly movie 😆

But yeah its more towards suspense and romantic drama

Yaar aapne ek sawaal puch liya and m so lost 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: peeyara

Thank you for the PM 😊 though i hv not opened it yet 😆

First thing first...loved the disection of Shergill by Ishaan 🤣🤣
After reading first part, got the plot of ur story...not whole story but got an idea k what ur story is all about(i hope mere intuitions, thinking sahi prove ho) 😆

It was the nice story, you are a wonderful writer ⭐️


Naseem pm kholo na kholo story jarur padho 😆

Writer ka pata nahi par me wonderful jarur hoon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Nice update! Loving it so far.. Pls update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Loveforlife

Nice update! Loving it so far.. Pls update soon...


Thank u raveena... Shall update soonest 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: daydreamers



almost getting done dear... stay tuned...


and u r there...😉 don't spoilwa please 😆


Haha, come on yaar, mera dimaag overtime p chalta hain😆 ismein toh hum phamouswa hain. Lol

How are you doing?

And I see you updated 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings


Haha, come on yaar, mera dimaag overtime p chalta hain😆 ismein toh hum phamouswa hain. Lol

How are you doing?

And I see you updated 👍🏼


@bold ap to mere sibling hi nikle...😆

am good... may i know ur name? what should i call you?😳

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