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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone..
im nikki... this is my 1st attempt at writing a ff...hope you guys like it..

Prologue

5 years

So much had changed...it had been 5 yrs since he had last seen her...did she ever think about him?

Did she miss him?

Did she hate him?

Would she ever forgive him?

These were the questions that plagued him... had plagued him every hour since that fateful day...

How he missed her...missed them...his wife...his daughter...his family...

His daughter...His Kavya...his doll...

How he missed her...how he wished he could hug her once and tell her he loved her...that she was his angel...

His Preet... his wife... His life...

She was his soul mate...the person who made him want to be a better person...who helped him choose the right path.

Would he ever be able to win her forgiveness?

His bade papa...badi mummy...Neeti...Trisha...Sid...his family...people who loved him unconditionally...

Would they ever forgive him??

5 years of confinement...5 long years of confinement and solitude...

It was a long time for him to reflect on his past, his choices, his decision...his regrets, his failures..

After 5 long years...he would finally be a free man tomorrow..

But would he really?

Would he ever truly be free?

Sooo...howz it?? Should I continue?? Or should I completely forget about it and pretend I never wrote anything so stupid/

Feedbacks welcome...rotten tomatoes welcome as well..

Didnt realise there was another ff by the same name...so edited

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A RizReet story 😃
I m so excited to read it 😃
The prologue seems very interesting šŸ‘
Really anxious to know what happens next šŸ˜†
I always wanted to read a story like this on RizReet 😳
Thank u for writing this story and pls continue soon šŸ¤—
M eagerly waiting for d next part šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz do continue...
Nd if u can, do leave me a pm when u update next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What an awesome start!!!!
Always wanted to read something on RizReet. Absolutely fantastic<3

Please continue😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update soon and please do pm me when you update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MidnightMusings

Update soon and please do pm me when you update :)


Lia 😃
So happy to see u šŸ¤—
Lagta hai poora nauc forum yahan shift ho raha hai šŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya


Lia 😃
So happy to see u šŸ¤—
Lagta hai poora nauc forum yahan shift ho raha hai šŸ˜†


Mihiii šŸ¤— I knowww, so happpy. šŸ˜† I saw your name here and was like omg you are here tooo. And I saw Ritu while stalking old threads šŸ˜†

I AM HOOKED to PKHJD Just Imagine mera kal submission hain and am having a marathon of episodes abhi 😳

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