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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

part 10

nice update
hope they both confess soon
thanks for the pm


Thank you Niki! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

HI jezmine,

First,i wish to appreciate u for the greatest effort u had taken for creating this awesome story.👏.

I had look through the entire updates u had given till now...oneword to express my feelings is simply WOW👏😃.

I loved to read family-associated stories very much as it would add more beauty to the theme by including various sentiments...u gave me such the great one...thank u so much..

Loved the pankuri's easy-going and supercool nature😛...in each update,her secret traits r coming out..such a multi-talented girl she was..

Adi...good name... i liked his jovial attitude😉..indeed it is very needed one to all

The best highlights of the 10 chapters r,

1)adi n pankhuri studying in same university

2)adi and pankhuri residing in the same place (ie. adi's home)

3)avantika's pure affection to pankhuri as mom like😳

4)adi's repentance and pankhuri's forgiving nature

5)kaira's thought of adi as thief😆

6)AP's bike ride😳

7)feelings which r slowly converting into love between AP😉..

8)their decision to perform project together...

Jezmine,i enjoyed these chapters to the core...very pleasant and wonderful writing...n no doubt u r such an expert writer😊.

Edited by shiningstar77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

HI jezmine,

First,i wish to appreciate u for the greatest effort u had taken for creating this awesome story.👏.

I had look through the entire updates u had given till now...oneword to express my feelings is simply WOW👏😃.

I loved to read family-associated stories very much as it would add more beauty to the theme by including various sentiments...u gave me such the great one...thank u so much..

Loved the pankuri's easy-going and supercool nature😛...in each update,her secret traits r coming out..such a multi-talented girl she was..

Adi...good name... i liked his jovial attitude😉..indeed it is very needed one to all

The best highlights of the 10 chapters r,

1)adi n pankhuri studying in same university

2)adi and pankhuri residing in the same place (ie. adi's home)

3)avantika's pure affection to pankhuri as mom like😳

4)adi's repentance and pankhuri's forgiving nature

5)kaira's thought of adi as thief😆

6)AP's bike ride😳

7)feelings which r slowly converting into love between AP😉..

8)their decision to perform project together...

Jezmine,i enjoyed these chapters to the core...very pleasant and wonderful writing...n no doubt u r such an expert writer😊.


Thank you so so much Shiny! You definitely made my day! Do keep reading and continue to give me your support and input 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
continue soon!!
wen wil u update next part??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..waiting 4 the next part..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 11

After dinner, Adi and Pankhu return back to their rooms. There was a strange feeling for both of them.

Earlier that day, in class,

Mrs Raj: Good Afternoon class. Please stand with your partners. I will be going around with the glass bowl. Please pick the chit for your team.

Adi: Pankhu, I'm feeling nervous

Pankhu: Adi, relax

Adi: Pankhu, you pick the chit

Pankhu: No Adi, you pick the chit

Adi: Let's pick the chit together

Pankhu: How is that possible?

Adi: You pick one, I pick one and Mrs Raj shall pick from that two

Pankhu: Okay deal!

Student A: Comedy...

Mrs Raj: Wow! I expect my ribs to be tickled! Now, Adi and Pankhuri please pick yours

Adi: Mrs Raj...

Mrs Raj: Yes my boy!

Pankhu: We were wondering if...

Adi: If you could do the honour of picking it. Pankhu and I will pick one each and you choose between it.

Mrs Raj: Oh! You are the first pair to get me to choose in my entire career. Of course I will!

Adi and Pankhu look at each other and take a deep breath. They put their hands into the bowl and search when Adi's hands meet Pankhu's. Immediately their eyes connect and sensing their teacher's gaze, they take a chit.

As their hand emerge from the bowl,

Mrs Raj: Adi my boy, you leave me with no job.

Adi and Pankhu look down to see both of them holding the same chit.

Mrs Raj: What genre is it?

Adi opens up and the two of them read it together.

Mrs Raj: Romance... Wow! Adi and Pankhu, you are the lucky pair in this class. As I have said before, there is only one chit with romance. I expect some passionate and fiery performance!

Now as they recalled the incident, the hidden feelings began to take control.

As they walk over together to the study, they steal glances at each other.

At the study,

Adi: Pankhu, I have a plan in mind...

Adi and Pankhu spent some time discussing their project. Over the next week, they begin to juggle studies and dance practice. It was soon time for Kaira and Rubel to leave.

On the morning of their flight,

Rubel: Adi, take care! I'm so gonna miss you

Adi: I don't believe you Rubel... When Payal is there, why are you going to miss me?

Kaira: But I will miss you Adi Bhaiyya!

Adi : Aww... Kaira, I'm gonna miss you too!

Pankhu walks in to see Kaira, Adi and Rubel seated in her room

Rubel: Finally Pankhu, you're back

Adi: Where did you go?

Pankhu: To the mandir...

Kaira: Pankhu, I'm gonna miss your company

Pankhu and Kaira share a hug.

Adi: Rubel, gimme a hug...

The four of them exchange hugs. When Pankhu turns, she is hugged again. Adi had hugged Pankhu and the two of them couldn't let go.

Rubel and Kaira: Ahem Ahem...

Adi and Pankhu break their hug

Adi: Sorry Pankhu! I was too excited to hug everyone!

Pankhu: It's okay Adi!

Adi: Anyway Rubel, take care of yourself and Kaira... Keep in touch like always!

After getting blessings and bidding farewell, Kaira and Rubel are ready to leave.

Adi: I'll come to the Airport. Shanky Kaka, pleae let Mohan Uncle know that I'll drive to the airport

Avantika: Pankhu, why don't you go along with Adi

Pankhu: Okay Mom!

The four of them leave for the airport.

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful updates Jezmine!!! I love ur writing!!! ur story is sooo sweet...reminds me of the gone days of pkdh...aah...I wish we had these type of scene nowadays too...
keep writing!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

beautiful updates Jezmine!!! I love ur writing!!! ur story is sooo sweet...reminds me of the gone days of pkdh...aah...I wish we had these type of scene nowadays too...

keep writing!!!


Thank you Nisha! I totally agree with you! Wish we had such scenes nowadays in the show! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
thanks for the pm


Thank you! 😊

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