SS: Nana's birthday! Last Part Page 5 - Page 4

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Hey,
This is my final part of my SS thanks for all the lovely comments before and I hope you enjoy this one as well! So leave your honest comments and critisisms! 😃

Part 3

Adi jumped on stage and went over to Pankhuri. He held her hand and bought her on to the stage. "Pankhuri come on! We can do this!" Pankhuri placed her hand in his and smiled a little to make him happy. Her heartbeat was raising and she looked at the crowd of people. Everyone was watching her and she was still trembling with fear. She looked at Preeti Masi and Nana who gave her thumbs up and then looked over at Avantika glaring at her with her serpent like eyes. She looked at Adi and he smiled at her. That was her encouragement. Adi sat down with his drums. Panhkuri near the microphone. Adi set his microphone up after his drums because he was doing it solo and then move to the guitar. "Nana, me and Panhkuri are going to sing a song but before that I'm going to play the drums just for you!" Nana had a big smile on his face. He blessed the duo and pointed at Adi and showed his thumbs up. Adi sat down and Pnakhuri set the drums. "3, 2, 1" Adi played the drums with his favourite tune. (I'm sorry there is no way on describing this) He played in full melody and there was a huge round of applause from the guests. "Wow Aditya you really are a wonderful grandson!" a guest shouted out after he had finished playing. Adi smiled and Pankhuri was overwhelmed that the Deewan family were getting such good comments. Nana looked proudly at Adi and then his eyes clasped on Pankhuri. The love that came out of his heart when she walked nearer to Adi was heart warming. His last wish was Pankhuri and then he knew that everything for him, his family, his grandson would fit together like a jigsaw and the family would re unite and bridge those islands together to become one. He wiped the tears that were emerging in his eye lids and he walked up to Adi and hugged him tightly. Adi wrapped his arms around Nana and wiped his tears. "Nana come on now stop being a big baby and watch your final gift!" he knew what it was and this one the most precious gift in his life than Adi and Pankhuri. "The stage is yours!" he stepped back and Adi and Pankhuri smiled at each other. Pankhuri and Adi set their microphones and Adi grabbed the guitar. The spotlight fell on them. "Nana ji yeh mera gift hai aap ke liye, mujhe umeed hai ke aapko pasand aayenga!" Adi played the guitar to the intro of the song, the band playing the piano and the other instruments.

Pyaar kaa Dard hai - (2) meetha meetha pyaara pyaara - (2) - Pankhuri

Yeh hasin Dard hee - (2) - Adi

Do dilo kaa hai sahara - (2) - Adi

Guitar Playing. With Piano. Adi looks at Pnakhuri and plays the guitar they are smiling at each other. Pankhuri blushes.

thoda thoda chain bhee hai, thodee thodi bekararee - (2)-Pankhuri

aur bhee ho pyaar javan, arzoo hai yeh hamare) - (2)-Adi

yeh milan ho dobara- Duet

pyaar kaa dard hai, (meetha meetha pyaara pyara -2) - Pankhuri

yeh hasin dard hee, (do dilo kaa hai sahara -2)-Adi

Guitar and Piano playing and Adi winks at Pankhuri. He whispers "you are awesome" Pankhuri smiles and blushes again.

mujhe mila pyaar tera, tujhe mere chah mile - (2)-Adi

naye naye sapno kee, hame nai rah mile - (2) - Pankhuri

ek arman hamara- Duet

Pankhuri moves around Adi after taking the microphone off the stand. Adi stands and they share an eye lock as they sing the next verse.

pyaar kaa dard hai, (meetha meetha pyaara pyaara -2) - Adi

yeh hasin dard hee, (do dilo kaa hai sahara -2) – Pankhuri

Pankhuri and Aditya bring Nana, Preeti Masi, Avantika, Harish and Mama, Mami on the stage.

roj hame mil key bhee, milane kee aas rahe - (2) - Pankhuri

roj mite pyas koyee, aur koyee pyas rahe - (2) - Adi

dil divana pukara-Duet

Adi and Pankhuri hold hands and walk around the family and Avantika is angry at Adi and Pankhuri but she puts a fake smile on. Nana is really happy and he sings along with them.

pyaar kaa dard hai, meetha meetha pyara pyara- Pankhuri

haan meetha meetha pyara pyara- Duet

yeh hasin dard hee, (do dilo kaa hai sahara -2) – Duet

Pankhuri and Aditya make everyone hold hands and form a circle while they kept on singing.

pyaar kaa dard hai, (meetha meetha pyara pyara -2)- Duet

yeh hasin dard hee, (do dilo kaa hai sahara -2) – Duet

All the family are hugging and swaying while Adi and Pankhuri finishing off the song. Adi puts the guitar down and pulls Pankhuri closer to him and she was shocked.

Avantika looked down at Adi and Pankhuri's hands and they were interlocked with each other's. Avantika looked at Aditya but he was too busy gazing at Pankhuri. Pankhuri looked down at their hands and smiled. She looked at Adi and then saw Avantika looking at them. "Adi mera haath!" Adi looked down and realised what he was doing. "Sorry!" he pulled a doggy face and Pankhuri couldn't stop smiling away. Everyone congratulated Nana and people were enjoying the party. "Mr Deewan the party was wonderful your grandson and his wife were fantastic! You should be proud of them!" the group of guests gathered round him. "Haan mere pota Adi bohot kuch kiya mere liye par unki patni?" Nana knew what they were on about but he wanted to hear her name. "Woh Pankhuri, woh ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai... bohot achi hai woh... ache sanskaar kaha milte hai yeh saab is sher me is desh mein! Aap aur Adi bohot kush naseeb hai!" Nana felt so proud by their words. He knew it wasn't real but he hoped and prayed that it would come true soon. They walked off and he thought about Adi and Pankhuri. Sach ke rahe the woh log sach me woh ek dusre ke liye bane hai... kash un dono ko Ehsaas par jay ke woh ek duje ko kitne pasand karte hai! He looked over at Adi and then at Pankhuri they were attending the guests and it felt so right.

The party soon finished. Avantika had a headache and the rest of the family went off to bed. Pankhuri was taking a jug of water to her room when someone pulled her from the side and she landed on the wall. She closed her eyes and then slowly opened one to see Adi in front of her. Her heart was racing when those eyes were watching her so intently. She couldn't believe it. He had enclosed her with his muscled arms and she looked across and around to see if anyone was around. "I want to say something to you!" Adi watched her fiddle around with her pallu. She was getting a little tense, a little nervous. "Why are you scared, I won't kidnap you?" he giggled and then continued watching her with those killer blue eyes. "Adi tell me quickly I have to go office tomorrow?!" she looked deep into his eyes. "Pankhuri! Why are you lying tomorrow is Sunday and Sunday means no office, you can't escape from me now!" Pankhuri closed her eyes and cursed her brain for thinking of such a rubbish excuse. He grabbed her hand and took her to the terrace. "Adi where are you taking me?" Pankhuri was really confused by Adi's behaviour he was so close to her which she didnt mind. She was worried for the family. "Adi!" he wasn't listening he opened the doors to the balcony and he took her to the edge of the balcony. Adi looked up at the stars and an achieved smile appeared on his lips. Pankhuri looked at him. "Adi tell me na why you bought me here?" Adi looked at her and smiled. He turned towards her and held both of her hands. "Pankhuri I want to say something to you... I mean today... Pankhuri I want to thank you for everything you did today... if you weren't there then maybe I wouldn't have been able to do anything... from looking after the guest to the singing you were amazing! You bought my family together and when I was watching them holding hands my heart was at peace and that was only because of you... you made my family what they were!" he wiped his tears of happiness and Pankhuri too got emotional. She made him sit down. "Adi we did this together and you bought your family together... they were together because of you! You should be proud of yourself, you bought all the happiness and then why the tears?" Pankhuri wiped the tears away from his eyes. "Adi never let these fall out ever because you dont look good sad you look good with a smile!" roj hame mil key bhee, milane kee aas rahe roj mite pyas koyee, aur koyee pyas rah, dil divana pukara. They shared an eye lock and Adi smiled. Adi looked at Pankhuri and pulled her in for a hug. He wrapped his arms around her waist and Pankhuri put her arms securely round his neck. He closed his eyes and there was a small breeze that brushed over their hair. They held tightly onto each other. "Pankhuri do you know I feel special when you are around... even after so much has happened you still stook by my side and helped me... you know what I am feeling, what I want it's like you can read my heart! How do you do it Pankhuri do you somehow come into my heart and read my feelings, my emotions!" he giggled as he kept hugging her. Pankhuri smiled. She closed her eyes and embraced this moment. "Adi you are my best friend and you have helped me in every way... you held my hand in this big city helped me through every hardship so supporting you is no big deal... Adi my Dadaji says that you dont need to look into someone's heart to find out what they are thinking you just know because you share a relation with them... a strong relation!" Pankhuri let herself out of the hug and looked at Adi. "So Pankhuri you mean like a husband-wife relationship?!" he looked at her with his eyebrows raised and a naughty smile. Pankhuri was shocked and she blushed. "Yeah any relation!" Adi nodded and laughed at Pankhuri. "Pankhuri you were amazing at singing today! Loved the song!" Adi put his arms around her neck and they looked at the stars together. "Adi you were awesome you were like a one man band!" Pankhuri looked into his eyes and felt proud to be a part of his life. "Thanks... oh Pankhuri I got you something!" she looked baffled at Adi. "Kya Adi?" there was a little smile forming on her lips. "Close your eyes!" Pankhuri closed her eyes immediately. Adi pulled out his gift for her. "Open your eyes!" he passed her a rose. Pankhuri looked down at it and was shocked. "yeh!" Pankhuri was speechless. "Pankhuri this is for you! You're my best friend and I love you!" thoda thoda chain bhee hai, thodee thodi bekararee aur bhee ho pyaar javan, arzoo hai ye hamare, yeh milan ho dobara, pyaar kaa dard hai, meetha meetha pyaara pyara yeh hasin dard hee, do dilo kaa hai sahara. They smiled confidently at each other and Adi held onto Pankhuri's hand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely SS! Enjoyed reading it! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Sonia 😊.Enjoyed reading ur Ss
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Originally posted by: tes_v1

Lovely SS! Enjoyed reading it! =)

Thank you sweets! 😳 Glad you liked it! 😃
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Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Nice Sonia 😊.Enjoyed reading ur Ss

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for such late reply
i read your SS and lolzz i typed my comment and as usual my net was not working and whteva i wrote went in lolzzz...and l8r i dint rmbr to reply u...
now i saw the post and came back to reply...

i am so sorry...

i loved all the parts of your writing and with you wining you know hwo much i loved reading it

i will be waiting for the next edition

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