Abhiya ss : A love arranged marriage (part 12 & 13 on pg 11)

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Krish58

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Part 3

A little preview...

Tracker and Piya are at lib... Tracker is praying to God for getting abhay's attention

Tracker- thank you...thank you bhagwanji aapne sunli...Piya...Piya dekhna woh mere taraf aa Raha hai...

Piya looks at him and some how feels uneasy

She looks at abhay

Piya-(in mind) wow...uski ocean blue ..lagta hai maano kisi samundar ki tarah Gehri hai..maano uski aankhe kitni saari baatein bolna chahti hai...

Suddenly Piya realises what she is thinking...

Piya-(in mind) stop it Piya... Yeh Sab kya soch Rahi hai...you don't know him aur uske khayaal mein hi kho gayi...

hello...are you okay?? Are you okay??? Huh!!

Piya comes out of her thoughts ..she finds Abhay was staring at her...

Abhay- hello!! Are you okay??

Piya- huh!! Oh Haan Haan..sorry I was thinking something. Aap Ko kya kaam hai..?koi book chahiye..?

Abhay-- no...Haan...no...actually yes...well on second thought no...( Coughs) actually woh AAP USS din gir gayi thi...toh Puchna tha ki AAP kaise hai..bahut chot toh nahi aayi na

Piya-oh..!! Lekin AAP ne bachaya tha sahi time pe aake mujeh bacha Liya warna abhi haath ya pair mein fracture hota...

Abhay- yes... Quick time...well... Aaj aapki behen nahi dikhaayi de Rahi...?

Piya- oh...woh..toh ...kisi kaam se bahaar gayi hai..

Abhay- hmmm aaj bahut thand hai na..

Piya- Haan...it's really cold...(in mind) yaar why it's awkward to talk with him

Abhay-(in mind) wow!! Abhay kya baat boli hai .seriously weather ke baare mein baat karne aaya hai? Come on Abhay jo puch ne aaya hai woh puch (To Piya) hmmm I was hoping ke if you are free right now?

Piya looks at him in surprise as if he was speaking in alien language

Piya- (stammers)..yes...yes..kyu...

Abhay- woh...bas...bas..(in mind) wow Bina soche samjhe kuch bhi bol diya ..atleast thoda practice kar ke toh bolta ..

Abhay comes out of his thought

Piya- okay...yes ...

Abhay- what??

Piya- I said yes...AAP ne pucha na ki AAP free hai ya nahi...so I said yes...

Abhay- oh...well ..actually mujeh aapki help chahiye thi...so I was wondering ke if you can help me...

Piya- oh...well if it's possible for me then I will help you aapki problem kya hai..?

Abhay- well yaha nahi can we talk anywhere else

Piya- okay...wait a minute ..I will be just back ...

Piya asks tracker to keep a watch in library...

Abhay and Piya walks to the near by garden

Abhay- so what's your name?

Piya- Piya and aapka kya Naam hai?

Abhay - Abhay..Raichand!!

Piya stops in her ways ..

.piya-wait a minute what...? Abhay ??? Toh tumhara Naam bhi Abhay hai?

Abhay- Haan kyu? Itna shock kyu Rahi ho?

Piya- You are Abhay ...Abhay Raichand right?how is it possible kyu ki Abhay Raichand toh yeh hai (shows Kabir's picture)

Abhay- wait yeh toh Kabir hai ..and mein Abhay hoon .Abhay Raichand..

Piya- mein kaise maan loon??

Abhay - because see(shows his phone) yeh mera real biodata hai... Tumhe Jo biodata bheja Gaya hai woh mera hai and picture mere cousin brother Kabir ki hai..and iss ke baare mein hi baat karne aaya tha mein.

Piya- oh ..oh my god iska matalb mein ne Misha Ko tumhare bhai se Milne bheja yeh samjhe ke woh tum ho

Abhay- iska matalb???

Both -(pointing towards each other) sahi mein tumhara rishta aaya tha mere liye??

Abhay- lekin tum yaha kyu ho tumhe toh waha cafe mein hona chahiye tha toh phir tumhari behen waha kya kare Rahi hai?

Piya- mein ne Misha Ko bheja tha meri jagah because jo gadbad hui hai uska humne faayada uthaya tha as picture mein Mish ka photo tha toh phir humne plan bannaya tha ki jaisa Jaa Raha hai jaane do kyuki mein chahti thi yeh rishta na ho waise tum kyu nahi cafe ?

Abhay- same here jab hame Patah chala ki picture exchange hua hai tab yeh plan decide hua tha ..issliye phir mein ne Kabir...Ko bheja tha exactly with same plan lekin. Aur yaha mein Apne plan B ke liye tumhari help Lene aaya tha.. but I didn't knew things .. will turn out these way..by the way Why didn't you go ?

Piya - well I can ask you the same question..

Abhay- okay I will tell you... Darsal mere liye bahut rishte aaye hai..but mostly many of them just want to marry me because of my status and money ya phir business ke liye. Tum batao why didn't you go?

Piya tells her story..

Abhay- hmmm so...ab ..kya kare ? Kya tum iss rishte ki baat ko bandana chahti ho?

Piya- see we really don't know each other that much...

Abhay- hmm yes... So...

Piya- so...

Abhay- so.. I think hame Kabir aur Misha Ko call karke inform karna hoga...

As Abhay completes his sentences they both get calls from their respective siblings

Edited by Krish58 - 6 years ago

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 6 years ago

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That was sweet preview.

Abhiya told each other.

Continue soon dear

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cuteariya

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Posted: 6 years ago

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finally got update after longtime

awe pia got lost in abhay's eyes😉

loll both abhiya tried to talk but they felt so awkward😆

they started to talk silly things🤣

finally both got to know abt each other

both abhiya got shocked & shared their plan to each other

loll it's look like abhiya's plan backfired🤣

so pretending to take help from pia was abhay's plan B🤔

now what they will tell their families?

continue plz

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abhiya0011

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Superb post yr

Plz update soon😊😊

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Krish58

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiya0011
Superb post yr
Plz update soon 😊😊

will update soon bus Abhi thoda proof reading baaki hai

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Krish58

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Part 4

Abhiya gets call from their respective siblings

Both picks up the call..

Misha- Piya yeh shaadi ke rishte ke liye bilkul haa mat kehna ladka ek number ka bewakoof hai...ullu hai ghochu hai fraud hai..pakka bribe deke paas hua college se...

Piya - okay okay...Misha kya hua bol ...Aisa kya hogaya ??

Misha- areee yaar total werido hai..woh... Aur PURA jhutta hai ..biodata mein likha tha mba topper hai finance mein aur ancient history mein interest hai...toh mein ne usse do tin Sawaal puch liye but usse ek bhi correct jawab nahi diya...aur uske biodata mein jo likha hai usse bilkul opposite hai

Piya - okay..okay Misha ek min..mein tujhe wapas call karti hoon ...

Misha- okay!! But jaldi karna warna I swear mein woh Abhay Raichand ka murder kar doongi

Here Kabir ..is talking with Abhay...

Abhay- okay..okay relax ab batah kya hua

Kabir- yaar Abhay tu Piya se shaadi mat karo...bahut hi dangerous ladki hai...yaar ..yaar matalb kisi angle se Siddhi saadhi... nahi lagti aur uska na mujjeh lagta hai woh thodi pagal Hai..matalb kya batau..acha mein wapas call karta hoon woh aa Rahi hai...

After call ...

Piya- Misha bahut gusse mein hai..woh tumhare murder karne waali hai...

Abhay- what??? Seriously?? Kabir itni buri acting kar Raha hai...

Piya- no...PURA weird behaviour kar Raha hai...so I guess Misha Kabir ka murder kare usse pehle we should tell them...

Abhay- yes...well un Dono Ko yahi bulaate hai...

...

Kabir and Misha arrives ...and they are both shocked to see Abhay and Piya together...

Misha- dude seriously Mujeh lag Raha hai..mein aaj pagal hojaaungi.. yeh hai Abhay raichand???

Kabir-matalab???tum already pagal ho toh kaise pagal ho Sakti ho?

Misha -kya??? Mein pagal hoon...pagal mein nahi tum ho...tum ...tum itne weirdo ho ki tumhare saamne Mujeh tracker Bhagwan ki blessings lagti hai...

Abhiya stops them from further fight...And tells them the whole matter...

Kabir- yaar Abhay ab aaj ke Baad na Mujeh Abhay raichand bikul bhi mat Bannana ..(joins hands)mujeh maaf karde bhai..

Misha- yes sahi kaha aur Banna bhi mat...you know what tum bikil bhi acting mat karo ...Aisa lag Raha tha ki maano tumhe hysteria ke attacks pad Rahe the

Kabir - hey now don't start again...tumhe Patah hai Abhay ki acting karna kitna difficult tha...

Misha- ab rehne do...itni bhi difficult nahi hai..Aisa kyu nahi Bolte ki you don't how to act...

Kabir and Misha continue to fight ..while abhiya is trying to stop them..

.Abhay and Kabir drops Misha and Piya near lib...

@ library...

Piya- sooo ...

Abhay- sooo??

Piya- sooo .aage kya karna hai?

Abhay- hmmm ... I don't know... Actually I didn't know ke aaj Aisa kuch hoga...

Piya- hmm Haan even I didn't knew...well so ...lets meet next time?

Abhay- hmm sure kal waise bhi mein library hoon...toh Wahi milte hai...

Piya- Haan...phir dekhte hai kya karna...

Kabir- sorry to Interupt but you what tum Dono idiot ho...

Misha- no no no not idiot certified idiot ..areee library mein kya chat karoge Haan?? Yeah karoge ke tumhe kya pasand hai..konsa khaana pasand hai chalo library mein uske related book dhoodhtte hai ki konsi receipe best hai??? Ki tum Dono ki receipe milti hai ya nahi ...

Kabir laughs . While abhiya glares at him...

Misha-(glaring at kabir) tum kyu hass Rahe ho yaha koi comedy talk show chal Raha ?? Mein sach keh Rahi hoon...

Kabir- sorry..sorry but she is telling truth...I don't about her but Abhay... Tu toh pakka yahi baat karega ki oh yeh book mein yeh na yeh receipe best..hai

Misha- and Piya bhi

Piya- Misha kuch bhi Haan..it's not like that okay...

Abhay - okay okay..zyada khush hone ki jaroorat nahi hai...but Kabir I will see you at home... I told you to behave like...Abhay...Abhay raichand... Tumne meri itni buri acting ki!!

Piya- (looks at watch) oh god..!!! Misha it's already 12:00 ..hame meeting mein bhi Jaana hai...

Abhay- kaisi meeting?

Piya - oh actually library ke funds related meeting hai..Abhi nahi Bata Sakti...but we will talk tommorow' okay..bye...

Abhay- okay..!! Bye...and nice to meet you Misha...

Misha- you too...Abhay..and don't worry dude relax mein kaatti nahi hoon (looking at kabir) jaisa kuch logo Ko lagta hai...chal Piya and yes..meri aur se toh Abhi se Haan (winks at abhiya) tum Dono samjh Gaye na.

So what will happen next stay tuned to know 😳

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Part 5

@ Raichand house...

Siddharth is laughing

Siddharth-(claps hands) wow wow matalb kya sach mein?? I don't believe it ...matalb seriously yeh toh funny hai...you know what bro... I m gonna write a book on your all funny situations and publish karunga...it will be a best seller...

Abhay throws a pillow at him...

Abhay- guess what Siddharth... Woh book sequel mein publish...karunga 101 ways to bit your brother ya phir. 101 lame ideas given by siddharth raichand...

Kabir throws pillow at both of them

And woh book ka third part mein likhunga ..title hoga ' never ever believe in your cousins brother ideas.' Kabir says to Abhay and Siddharth while throwing pillows at both them...

Soon all three are fighting with each other...

Siddharth- in that case I m lucky abhay..Jab mein mitali se pehli baar milne gaya tha tumhara jaisa fiasco nahi hua tha

Kabir- aur hota bhi kaise kyuki aapke saath Chand uncle Gaye the...unhe Patah that ki AAP Aisa kuch prank karenge...

Siddharth- hey..hey Aisa kuch hone hi nahi waale tha kyuki mein Mitali se pehli Nazar mein pyaar karne lagaa that... Not like Abhay...jo khud confused hai...

In hall Haseena and Chand gets disturbed with sudden loud noises...

What the hell are they doing Haseena? Chand asks irritatedly..

Mujeh kya Patah..PURA raichand mansion Sar pe utha Liya hai ..yeh tino ...ne...Haseena said.. while checking some papers...

After few minutes...Haseena and chand goes upstairs in abhay's room... Only to find the room was in complete mess...

Haseena- yeh Sab kya hai Abhay...?? Yaha koi Toofan aaya tha ya tsunami aayi thi..?

Abhay- mom...woh bas..hum log practice ...

Siddharth- ya practice kar rahe the karate you know na... Hum par hamla ya kidnapping ho Sakti hai...

Haseena-(smiles) why do you think Siddharth ke tumhe koi kidnapped karega

Siddharth- kyuki mom mein aapka bada pyaara beta hoon and Raichand ka Chirag hoon..

..haseena- beta kidnappers ke itne burr din nahi aaye hai beta... Ki woh tumhe kidnap kare...woh log tumhe vapas bhej denge and pure paise bhi wapas de denge

Abhay and Kabir suppress their laugh...

siddharth shoots them angry glare

haseena- I want this room clean now..siddharth Kabir ..aur Haan agar kisi helper se kaam karvaana toh that will not be good to both of you... And Abhay tum niche aao .. Piya ke baare mein baat karni hai...

Chand ,haseena and Abhay leaves ..

@ in kitchen...

Haseena was preparing food... Haseena loved to cook food it was her one of stress buster hobbies..

Though raichand's were rich and they could afford as many helpers as they want..but still Haseena never kept a Cook. She loved to cook food.. for her family...

Haseena - so...Abhay...tumhe Piya kaisi lagi?

Abhay unknowingly smiles at mention of Piya 's name...no wonder he some what liked her since he saw her first time..but he still was unsure of. His own feelings... Also he was a bit shy when it came to talk to girls...

Haseena notices it...

Abhay- Ma ,she is good but still I don't know ..her mein Abhi Abhi usse Mila.. hoon I need some time...

Haseena - it's okay Abhay ..take your own time mein madhuji se baat kar loongi..

Abhay gives a side hug to Haseena.

Abhay- thanks mom,

Haseena- hmm ab jaao and clean your room Abhay...

Abhay- what?? No ma Mujeh nahi karna !

Haseena- no arguments...Abhay...

@dobriyal house...

Piya and Misha tells the matter to Madhu except their plan...

Misha- mama mein toh Bata Rahi hoon AAP na Piya ki shaadi kara do abhay se...Patah hai aapko ussne Piya Ko do do baat bachaaya hai aur ussne thank you bhi nahi bola. .chalo Maana ki yeah mr..sadu 24/7 ka Naam nahi jaanti thi par thank you bolna chahiye tha

Madhu- kya sach mein??? Piya?? Tu jaanti thi Abhay Ko?

Piya- no mama AAP jaanti hai Misha Ganesha bakwaas karti Rehti hai..mein nahi jaanti thi..woh Abhay Raichand Hoga..

Misha- haww lier...mama mein aapko batati hoon yeah na hamesha library mein 10: 00 bajte hi hamare hone waale Jijaji ki raah mein

Madhu- hmmm Piya tu bata tujeh kaisa Laga Abhay se milke ..

Piya stands up and faces her balcony...

Piya- I don't know mama... Abhay acha ladka ..hai but still I m not sure...we have decided ke hame thoda aur waqt chahiye...

Madhu- koi baat nahi beta...tumhe jitna waqt chahiye tum le Sakti ho okay...

Piya gives a slight nod...

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Originally posted by: cuteariya
finally got update after longtime
awe pia got lost in abhay's eyes 😉
loll both abhiya tried to talk but they felt so awkward😆
they started to talk silly things🤣hahaha hota hai saari baatein khayaalon aur day dream mein Hoti and real mein bolti bandh hojaati hai
finally both got to know abt each other
both abhiya got shocked & shared their plan to each other
loll it's look like abhiya's plan backfired🤣yeh toh hona thi aakhir Siddharth plan ne banaya tha

so pretending to take help from pia was abhay's plan B🤔 . Ummm lagta hai shayad Abhay doesn't believe in Siddharth plan so plan B soch ne Gaya tha
now what they will tell their families?hmmm Socho socho
continue plz