Abhiya ss : A love arranged marriage (part 12 & 13 on pg 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Heya all abhiyan lovers...hi their
A little note : right now I m 'thoda SA busy with work and on personal life too' so update mein thoda waqtblagega .. I have e written the next part but still recheck karna baaki hai..so you all have to do chotta SA wait...
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Sorry for delay
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
It's ok dear we can wait
But don't take too long to back
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

It's ok dear we can wait

But don't take too long to back

will surely updatesoon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Abhiya ss part 2

@ next day

Piya was keeping some books back in the rack...she was lost in her in thoughts

Tracker excitedly comes and calls out piya...

Because of sudden voice piya is startled and loses her balance ..

Piya-mishaaa

Piya is scared and closes her eyes in anticipation that now she would fall but she never touches the ground...

After few minutes she opens her eyes..only to find she was in arms of same guy who saved her earlier

Abhay- are you okay?...

Piya just nods...

Abhay carefully puts her down and gives her water...

Meanwhile some people are gathered around them...Misha comes and disperses them...

Tracker- I m really really sorry piya ..mujeh ISS tarah chillana nahi that...I m really sorry mujeh patah nahi that ki tu kuch ...

Misha- tracker ... tujeh toh mein baad mein dekhti Hoon..and piya kahi chot tihbnahi lagi na...Chalo abhi issi waqt doctor ke paas chalte hai...

Piya- Misha...it's okay don't worry kuch nahi hua...mujeh ...and tracker it's okay tumhari koi galti nahi hai...

Misha- areee Kya koi galti nahi hai agar tracker itne excitedly aake boli aur tera balance loose karva Diya...

Piya- Misha...kaha na kuch nahi and all thanks to...

Piya looks for abhay .. but he is no where...

Piya-areee kaha Gaya woh .. abhi abhi toh yahi tha...

Misha- piya tumhara saviour mujeh you lagta hai ki koi superhuman...hai...no...no...not superhuman he is a vampire ..Jo ek jhatke ke mein aake help karke phir wapas poof ho jaata hai ...

Piya- Kya mish...kuch bhi... Do baar help ki usne aur mein usse ek thank you bhi nahi bol paayi...

Tracker-areee to koi baat nahi piya...tu usse Kal thank you boldena...aur uska moblie number le Lena

Piya- moblie number kyu?

Tracker-(blushes) mere liyebpiya...would kitna handsome hai..woh jabse library aane. Lagega hai...you know mujeh library aur bhi zyada pasand aane lagi hai...

Misha-ooo hello...yeh library hai koi bagicha nahi hai...
Tracker speaks back but piya stops their fight

Piya- okay cut it ...cut it...
Woh ladka Jo koi bhi hai usse Kal mein jaake thank you bol doongi...

Tracker- aee piya tujeh bhi lejaana mein hi uska number le lungi...

Piya-okay...

@ in Indore...

Here in Indore madhu is on call with a lady(Shanti ji) who brought abhay's rishta for piya...

Shantij is in hurry and by mistakenly woh Kabir ka picture send karti hai with abhay's bio-data

Also she gives haseena's number ...

Shantiji galti se Misha ki picture send karti hai haseena ko with piya's bio-data

So now haseena thinks that Misha is piya

After few days shantiji informs madhu that haseena liked piya(Misha picture )for abhay...
Here madhu too likes abhay(Kabir 's picture)

Haseena and madhu are on video call..


Haseena- namaste madhuji kaisi hai aap?

Madhu -ji mein thik Hoon aap bataye aap kaise hai?

Haseena- ji mein bilkul thik Hoon..ji aapki ladki hi bahut pyaari hai...

Madhu-(to haseena) ji shukriya...aapke bete ki picture dekhi bahut handsome lag raha . ..

Here on other hand shaantiji calls Misha ...

Shantiji- Misha beta ...kaise ho?

Misha- ab tak toh thik ab aapse baat ho Rahi hai toh patah nahi kya hoga..

Piya- ( suppress her laugh)

Shantiji- kya matalb mujeh se baat karke tujeh Khushi nahi Hui?

Misha- nai nai hui na aunty bahut Khushi hui..acha AAP ne phone kyu kiya...

Shantiji- aree yeh batane ke liye phone kiya kiwoh darasal ek problem hogaye hai ..mein ne Piya ke biodata ke saath galti se teri picture bhej di hai

Shantiji tells her about the problem that by mistake she has send Piya's biodata with Misha's picture ..

Misha formulated a new plan because of this misunderstanding and Informs shantiji that she will send Piya pictures to abhay's family and further not to inform abhay's family as they will talk themselves...

After the call

Misha- good..ab kaam aasan hojaayega..piya..now you see Misha dobriyal Kya karti hai...


@ piya and Misha's home...

Madhu is back home from a trip both are happy...

Madhu- piya. I m so happy for you ke tu agree Hui ladke ko dekhne ke liye ...yeh rishta bahut acha hai...aur acha hai na abhi mein aayi...mein ne Kal aur woh ladke ki ... Meeting fix ki hai ...

Piya-Kya??? Kal..mama?? Itni jaldi Kyu??

Madhu- beta kaha jaldi hai..tu milte toh le usse...

Piya- okay...naam Kya hai..ladke ...

Madhu- abhay naam hai

Piya-hmmm .. Abhay


@ next day...

In cafe...

Misha- seriously Piya... Tu kaise handle Karti hai... Yeh' sab mujeh bahut uncomfortable feel hi Raha hai tere kapdo mein...aur yeh' stole ..yeh' stole kya pehna jaroori hai...

Piya-off hi Misha yeh fashion hai...chill...

Misha- huh!! Yeh fashion nahi..hai. okay..yeh bikul Christmas tree type hai..pura

Piya - no...okay . Haan Misha yeh bilkul Christmas tree type nahi hai...okay...aur mera fashion sense toh tujeh se better hai okay

Misha- okay... ..okay piyagyaneshwari ji...ab pravanchan start mat karo okay...aur yeh Abhay ka baccha reh kaha Gaya..hai..biodata mein toh likha tha bada punctual hai


Piya- Haan sahi kaha Misha ..15-20 min hogaye Abhi tak dikhaayi nahi diya

Misha- I tell you Piya yeh ladke Naa aise hi Hote hai
Biodata mein kuch alag likhte hai and real life mein kuch alag likhte hai..


Misha sees Kabir( who is Abhay as per Misha Piya and Madhu)

Misha- Piya...go..go...woh aagya


Piya- okay bye aur Haan please zyada mat over karna jisse mom Ko Shaq ho okay..

Misha- okay okay...bye and tu meeting handle kar le okay...

Here Kabir is on call with Abhay...

Kabir- yaar Abhay mein keh Raha hoon mujeh Siddharth ke plan pe Bharosa nahi hai...

Abhay- Kabir...tension mat lo..atleast ek Baar try karo...and yes please mere ...matalb Abhay raichand ki tarah behave karna and not Kabir Rathore okay...

Kabir - okay..

Kabir meets Misha.(who is Piya as per raichand family).he is smitten by her beauty ..

Kabir- (in mind) yeh Abhay pagal hai ..ek Baar toh mileta...ladki achi hai...

Misha-(in mind) hmmm dikhane mein toh acha hai..cool hai...well Misha be ready yeh Abhay ke rishte Ko toh yahi pe Ta ta bye bye karna hai...

Here Piya is in library with tracker

Tracker- Piya... Tu bhi na pagal hai...areee mein agar teri jagah Hoti toh Abhay raichand se Abhi shaadi kar leti ... Iss seher ke Sabse badi family hai woh log...aur tujeh itne ache parivaar se rishta aaya aur tune thukra Rahi hai rishta..

Piya- tracker bade ghar ka ladka hai toh kya hua..mujeh iccha nahi thi..aur tu bhi jaanti hai na mere pehle bhi kai Baar pehle rishte tutt chuke hai...ya toh hamare background ki wajah se ya toh dowary ki wajah se aur mama bhi kitna tensed hojaati phir..kai Baar toh Baar aage badh ke bhi Rukh jaati hai issliye iss Baar toh mein ne Misha Ko hi bol diya ke ladke Ko dekha ke hi waha se bhagaa de ..mujeh Baar Baar Dil nahi dukhaana mama ka

Tracker- (pats shoulders) it's okay Piya...you know what mujeh pakka lag Raha hai. Ki tere jaroor koi na koi toh Aisa diamond jaisa ladka milega...and (sees towards door) and oh my god...see woh Raha tera hero piyaaa...

Piya is confused and sees towards doorway..

She sees Abhay( real one) coming...

Piya- kuch bhi Haan tracker..Aisa kuch nahi ...chal Abhi bahut kaam hai usse taadna bandh kar

Tracker- kya Piya ...tu bhi bahut boring hai...chal...

Piya gets busy with her work...

Tracker -(praying) hey Bhagwan ...please ..please mera ek kaam kardo woh me handsome ka number di Laado...

Tracker sees Abhay coming and she gets excited...



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow that's wonderful
Love it
Eagerly waiting for the next post
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Oops pia fall from chair glad abhay came on time to save her
But once again abhay left before pia could say anything
Loll tracker & her funny mind
Oops shanti auntie made a mistake she send to pia's mom kabir pic instead of abhay & send misha's pic instead of pia
Now both families have these misunderstanding
Loll misha & her evil mind got to know abt the mistake & play her plan
But awe kabir smitten by misha & also misha like him
Now what gonna happen when they will know the truth?
Continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniakhanna01

Wow that's wonderful

Love it
Eagerly waiting for the next post
Continue soon dear

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Awesome update

Oops pia fall from chair glad abhay came on time to save her
But once again abhay left before pia could say anything
Loll tracker & her funny mind
Oops shanti auntie made a mistake she send to pia's mom kabir pic instead of abhay & send misha's pic instead of pia
Now both families have these misunderstanding
Loll misha & her evil mind got to know abt the mistake & play her plan
But awe kabir smitten by misha & also misha like him
Now what gonna happen when they will know the truth?
Continue plz


Hahaha Misha is always ready with her plans.. Kahi abhiya ke chakkar mein Misha and Kabir ka match na hojaayr😉

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello dear
I am loving it so far.
I just read part 1 and part 2
Misha and Kabir meeting as Abhiya
😉
Awesome re totally
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I m so sorry guys... I lost my phone ...Abhi Abhi new phone Liya hai... And poor me PURA jo 3-4 chapters likha tha puraane mobile mein woh Sab bhi chala Gaya Abhi mein phir se Sab type kar Rahi hoon... So thoda aur din lagega..but I will surely update...

I m so sorry to keep you all wait but I have my exams ahead and in between I m juggling between job and study and upar se mobile lost hogaya ... I promise sachi wala ke jaldi update karungi...

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