Abhiya ss : A love arranged marriage (part 12 & 13 on pg 11)

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Part1


Piya and her sister Misha lives in dehradhoon....she has just finished her her college ..and currently she and her sister is managing the library . Which was once owned by their.. ansectors...

Her mother madhu is looking for suitable match for her and her second daughter Misha....and their dad Arnab is out of India for business purpose.

On the other hand... In dehradhun a new rich influencial family has arrived since two months and all are talking about them.. raichand family is very rich they were in tea plantation business in East since many years and now in order to expand business they have shifted to dheradhoon...

Abhay daily visits lib....out and abhay only exchange smiles...

Piya's mom has brought a good rishta for her . But she is continuously dening it or either pending it....

Piya- no mom...mujeh abhi nahi karni Shaadi...aap Misha ko Puch lijiye...

Misha- woooaah hello in hell no way mujeh abhi Shaadi karni hi hai.... No way mom agar ladka aaya building na toh uske do tin daant daant tudwa ke jaayega...

Madhu- yeh tum dono Kya keh Rahi ho beta... Kya yeah sab baate karna sikhaya hai mein nee...beta...aur mein aaj hi kaha keh Rahi ki Shaadi karlo..

.piya- beta tum to samjho..piya beta ladka bahut hi ache khaandan ka hai aur ladke ki maa SE mein yaha Indore mein mili Hoon...aur unlogo ka to bahut bada business hai dehradhoon mein..

Piya- (sad) okay mom...thik hai mein sochungi....

Madhu- okay beta...aisa ho to tum dono ek baar mil lo ..mein na ladke ki mom SE baat Kar leti Hoon ..

After call

Piya- yaar ab yeh milna Kyu ho raha hai... ...pehle sochne toh dete mom

Misha- dude,relax jab Tak mein Hoon tab Tak har ek problem ka solution hai..

Piya- haan....woh tih hai my knight in shining armourPiya and Misha laughs...and leave for their library....

@ raichand house ..

Abhay- ...no mom aap samjhte Kyu nahi mujeh nahibakrni Shaadi abhi ....no....but...thik hai mom... I will see ..

Abhay cuts the call ..Siddharth comes and teases him...

Siddharth- Kya hua abhay...ISS baar bhi mom ko bol nahi paaye....Abhay gives him a deadly glare...

Siddharth- okay...chill brother chill.....you know it's just a meeting agar tumhe nahi milna ladki see that Milo siddhe siddhe bol do mummy ko nahi milna ladki se

Abhay-- agar it a hi aasan hota to kabka bol Chuka hota

Siddharth- koi baat nahi mein help karunga mere pass ek SE barkar ek ideas hai mom ko na bolne ke liye

Abhay-- aur woh kab kaam aaye hai siddharth ? Ask Tak tumhara ek bhi idea kaam nahi aaya

...Siddharth- okay ya that's a problem mere 99% ideas Bikul bhi kaam nahi Kiya but 1 %toh kaam to karte hai na...

.Abhay- siddharth tum mujeh idea do ya phir mujeh khud sochne do....

.Abhay gets up from bed and is about to leave .when siddharth catches his hands and makes him sit in bed...

Siddharth-- mere pass ek idea...hai.. and I m sure it will work lekin uske liye .....tumhe Mera kaam karna hogaa..

Abhay- (sighs) I knew it... Tum Bina matalb ke Meri help nahi karoge....bolo Kya karna hoga mujeh ?

Siddharth-- good bro...well Mera kaam toh want aane par bataunga par abhi tum waisa karo jaisa mein kehta Hoon.

...Abhay - okay Kya karna hogaa mujeh....Siddharth shares his plans....

@ next day...

.Piya was working on something....when she glances at the wall clock..it was exact 10:00 ..

.She starts looking at the door..

Misha notices this...and starts to tease..she starts singing

Misha- jahan yeh Teri Nazar meri jaan mujeh...khabar ......jahan yeh Teri Meri jaan mujeh khabar hai..

.Piya- Kya hai Misha...tu phirse start hogayi....kaam nahi hai Kya ....tujeh..

.Misha- hai na bahut saara kaam hai...mein tih bas aise hi aagayi chai Pini thi...to Socha tujeh bhi saath le chalu....chal mere saath chai pine tab Tak woh tracker sambhal legi yaha..

Piya- no...no..mujeh nahi jaana ......Misha...

Misha- Kyu???


Piya- mein ne..mein ne abhi hi chai pi hai tracker ke saath...

Misha- hey that's unfair okay...tum mere Bina chai nahi pi sakti...chali mere saath dusri baar chai pine....

Piya- no...Mish....no..

Misha- acha ab patah Chala ...Kyu nahi jaana tumhe..kiska intezaar ho raha hai..

..Piya blushes slightly and starts keeping books in racks...

Piya - (lightly blushes) Kya...no aisa kuch nahi hai Mish...aur yeh sab kaha bich mein laa Rahi ho..Mish mein Kyu kisi ki raah Dekhungi...

Misha- piya..mein bhale hi 3-4 mahine tujeh SE chotti Hoon aur mere face PE ullu ,gadhi , nahi likha hai okay ...... Haroz 10:00 baje Teri Nazar watchmen ki tarah woh darwaaze pe Nazar lag jaati hai... Mein ne toh decide Kar liya hai.... Ki tujeh watchmen uncle ki naukri de Doon...

Piya - Kya kuch bhi haan Misha...... aisa kuch nahi..aur watchmen uncle ki naukri mujeh nahi tujeh jaroorat hai ...woh dekh woh waha kuch log books ko mis handle Kar rahe hai .

.Misha sees them and shouts at them for mishandling the books..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely start dear
So, piya is awaiting for Abhay

I can't wait to know what happens next

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Lovely start dear

So, piya is awaiting for Abhay

I can't wait to know what happens next


Thanks for the review ..hope you enjoyed it...will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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What a lovely story😳
Wonderful start and unique concept
Continue soon and pm me too
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Originally posted by: soniakhanna01

What a lovely story 😳

Wonderful start and unique concept
Continue soon and pm me too

thanku will update soon and will add you
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Posted: 6 years ago
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very interesting starting👏
both abhiya denying for marriage
but look like pia like someone🤔
misha tease her understanding pia's feeling😉
continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Its nice concept update soon😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1


Thanks for the reviews...and comments..here is the next part

Recape-
Piya agrees to meet the guy...
Misha- teases Piya...
Misha sees them and shouts at them for mishandling the books..



Misha comes back and asks piya to have tea with her...and obviously she denies...because secretly she indeed was waiting for that guy...Misha then literally drags piya...

Piya- Misha...Misha... seriously mujeh nahi jaana ..Mish..

Thump...

Piya collides with that same guy.. she hadn't seen with whom she had collided

Piya-ouch...ouch
..
Piya rubs her elbow...

The person... With whom piya collide lends her for help...

Piya then gets up and sees her saviour...

Piya stands dumb founded ly and starting at the same guy for whom she has been waiting...

Piya-(in mind) wow piya..tu takarai bhi to kisike saath ...

The guy with whom piya collided is none other then abhay...

Abhay- are you okay?

Piya doesn't respond...she stands like statue completely lost in his ocean blue like eyes...

Abhay on not getting respond...asks again ...

Piya-(startled) huh!! Hmm...hmm..(not seeing in his eyes) hmmm woh..woh... Ya ...thanks...zyada chott nahi lagi...thanks...

Abhay- okay...

Even before piya could reply abhay leaves immediately...

Piya-hawww..

Misha comes ... And asks piya where she is ..as she was waiting for her...

Misha- piya...piya .kaha reh gayi thi aur yeh chot kaise lagi...

Piya-(lookin towards Abhay) kuch nahi mein woh kiske saath abhi takraayi thi...

Misha-(looks at Abhay) ooh wow ..kisike saath woh mr.. mere saath baat mat karo..mein 24x7 akdu mood mein rehta hoona and black Mera fav color hai...

Piya- Mish...dhire bol. Na..Kya kuch bhi keh Rahi agar us me liya toh...

Misha - aree kuch nahi bolega..aur iska matalb yeh ki time Sach mein takaraai...batana Kya bola...first aid kit help ki...haal chal pucha...

Piya- nai aisa kuch nahi pucha infact okay bolke Chala Gaya .(in mind) kamse ek baar phir se toh Puch sakta tha ki thik Hoon ya nahi...
kuch nahi pucha..Khair mujeh Kya mujeh kuch nahi hai mujeh kaha usse ke saath shaadi ya Ghar bassana hai

Piya leaves with Misha...

Here abhay all this while was listening what piya and Misha were talking...

Abhay- (in mind) wow abhay agar takraana tha na tujeh wohi hi ladki mili thi takraane ke liye...I hope she is okay ...

@ in cafe...

Misha- piya yeh full proof plan hai ..

Piya- are you sure Misha yeh kaam karega...unhe ya mama ko patah to nahi chal jayega na?


Misha- Dekho piya agar plan thik tarah se play Kiya to jaroor success hoga...okay..

Piya-hmmm.waise back up plan Socha hai...

Misha- back up plan ??? Back up plan ki Kya jaroorat ... Hai piya...trust on my plan...

Piya- okay..(still doubt in mind). Thik hai hope fully it works...

Misha- don't worry champ it will work..bas ab mama. Ko phone karke bolde ki tu ladke see milna chahti aur woh bhi ISS cafe mein...


Piya calls madhu and informs her that she is willing to meet the guy...

Madhu is happy that on knowing that piya is ready to meet the guy


Here on the other side..abhay informs haseena that he is willing to meet the girl...

Haseena is extremely surprised and Chand almost chokes on his food...

Chand- (coughs) what??? What ??? Kya kaha tumne abhay?haseena yeh abhay Jo keh raha woh Sach hai Kya?

Haseena - yes Chand ..mujeh bhi vishwas nahi ho raha abhay maan Gaya woh bhi bina koi arguments

Siddharth and abhay give each other hi fi under table...

Siddharth- (whispers) good job bro ..

Abhay-(whispers) thank you for the idea



Precape- will the idea work???stay tuned to know more






Edited by Krish58 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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brilliant chapter
oops pia & abhay bump with each other😉
poor pia got lost in abhay's blue eyes☺️
ouch pia was sad that abhay didn't asked he much
loll misha tease pia for bumping with abhay😆
on the other hand abhay also thought abt pia😊
so now as per misha & sid plan abhiya inform their parents they r ready to meet the families😊
let's see what gonna happen next
continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
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hi dear..
I was just searching for abhiya stories and got here... starting seems interesting... k now waiting for next update..



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