Abhiya os- Pkyek : The Alternate Universe - Page 2

Yahoo...one more os from you...thank u girl!
Haha..zombie n vampire...perfect pair!!!!
Abhay And chand convo...height convo..made me laugh...they were just like in the show...fab writing Isha!Piya beating Jey was...imagine...haha!Reminded me of Metz...!And When Abhay revealed about him as Vampire... it wasn't so serious..but poor Piya..but loved that...they will be happily ever after and after and after... Excellent!Mixture of all...nice os...do write more and more and more!!!

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Wow that's really something
Hahaha vampire and zombie
Very well combination
Btw here I like the fact Abhay didn't use 'mujhse dur raho Piya' line
Uff that's a relief
Thanks for pm
Please write more like this
Totally love it

Glad u liked it ! I know they r a different couple aren't they ? 😆
Yes , I hated that line too , I could never use it in my stories . Here Abhay will always be willing for Pia 😉 😛 I'll try to write more if u have time , thanks for commenting :D

Originally posted by: pirl18

Oh I read it while finger crossing
Very amazing

Thank u ! But why did u cross ur fingers ?

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Wow u create and hold the secret till last.it always amazing to find something new in your stories.human will be human wheather dead or alive they have to fight with their emotions. Again a beautiful story.👏

Thank u , that means a lot 😳
And thank u for finally commenting 😆 it's nice to hear from silent readers 😃

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Excellent os..!! With perfect fun elemnt.. Chand & abhay convo reminds me of their real convo in pkyek.. I love abhay's attitude here.. & sid too.. Okk zombie eat brains.. I didnt knew that.. Anyways of loved this handsome vampy brothers & zombie pia..😳

Glad u liked it ! Yeah zombies love brains 😆

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

hayla... Zombie and Vampire together?!😲😆... Raam Milayi Jodi...🤪...

Jokes apart... Lovely concept and a unique story.. the convo btwn our fav chanda mama nd abhay remind me of old pkyeak days...😆The OS had everything... and it was totally a solid complete package... I so loved your use of wordsand narrating styles😛.. that's totally like a pro writer...

Wishing for more wonderful pieces from u... Claps for these wonderful work..👏👏

Ram milayi Jodi , sahi me ! 🤣
I an glad u liked my writing style , it means a lot 😳 though I don't really want to be a writer , maybe I could be a doctor cum writer now 😆 😛

Thank u for commenting :)

No i am not that type of silent reader it just as i am a newbie here so learning things step by step. I always like ur stories coz they have their different aura but initially i was not able to write my views as i dont know any thing and i dont want to hurt anyone by my stupid acts. So i was silent.and thanks for ur patience for tolreting all the lazy readers😆

Awesome os!!
Pia as a zombie.. Dats new..
Thanks for the pm..

My god what a story vampire abhay ki zombie gf piya ki pyaar ki ansuni kahaani ... Nice concept loved it i would prefer abhays food over pia hers is yuck. Thanks for pm

awesome blossom os...omg...pia zombie...heheheheee...bt grt jodi...