Abhiya os- Pkyek : The Alternate Universe - Page 3

Ooo mammaaa🤣🤣 what was this??🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: mamtapkyeklover

Ooo mammaaa🤣🤣what was this??🤣🤣🤣

I L.O.V.E.D I.T🤣😛

Something really very very different and out of the box... Piya a zombie???😛😆

Even such cute and bful zombies do exist in stories?? Never imagined till date.. well, but i want u to right the nxt part of this where Abhiya are hunting together rofl🤣🤣Mazaaa aaega... and mazaaa aaya..🤗

Keep it up😆👍🏼

Challo I made u laugh ! Mission accomplished ! 😉 😆 I am glad u loved it , means a looot to mee, now I am going to give u virtual hugs 😆 🤗

Actually I watch the American show 'izombie' , beautiful zombie's do exist there 😆 so I thought why not implement the idea here 😳

The hunting wala scene , hmmm... Maybeee, I am not sure . Aajkal time ke bohot kami hai with my Neet exam coming up . I will see if I can , no promises 😛

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

No i am not that type of silent reader it just as i am a newbie here so learning things step by step. I always like ur stories coz they have their different aura but initially i was not able to write my views as i dont know any thing and i dont want to hurt anyone by my stupid acts. So i was silent.and thanks for ur patience for tolreting all the lazy readers😆

Oh alright I totally understand , I was a silent reader too once upon a time 😆 and I did often wonder if my comments would offend someone . It's ok u can take ur time :) and it's nice to hear from a loyal reader 😳 arre everyone is lazy in this forum , they tell everyone else to comment and then themselves don't comment ( including me 😃) so no worries yaar, I am used to it 😆
Btw what's ur name ?

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

My god what a story vampire abhay ki zombie gf piya ki pyaar ki ansuni kahaani ... Nice concept loved it i would prefer abhays food over pia hers is yuck. Thanks for pm

Achaa title thiya ! 😆 maybe I could have used this 😛
I like brains more , seems more cool 😛 😆

Originally posted by: --geny--

Yahoo...one more os from you...thank u girl!
Haha..zombie n vampire...perfect pair!!!!
Abhay And chand convo...height convo..made me laugh...they were just like in the show...fab writing Isha!Piya beating Jey was...imagine...haha!Reminded me of Metz...!And When Abhay revealed about him as Vampire... it wasn't so serious..but poor Piya..but loved that...they will be happily ever after and after and after... Excellent!Mixture of all...nice os...do write more and more and more!!!

Yeah , when I get too anxious ( I kind of have an anxiety problem ) I start writing stories 😆 this my therapy , lol .

Thank u for liking it and I am happy that u found it funny 😳 😆

I will try to write more .. Aajkal time ki bohot kami Hai , with my Neet exam coming up . But I will asap write when I get a new idea 😛

U hv lost it...! Zombie...! Seriously...!? 😆

It was funny...! Really funny...! 🤣

SORRY! I know I am very late to reply!
But , WOW!! What an amazing story! Really liked the romantic & funny elements in it! Will be waiting for more such mind-blowing stories! 😊 👏

Amazing concept!!! Vampire-Zombie luv story!! Loved it totally! Keep writing more.

hey... this is deserves one word "Awesome" :) such a unique, catchy & fun-filled concept which suits Abhiya very much. I am sure I wouldn't have liked this story on any other couple. Abhiya are 'outstanding'. It was amazingly written and you managed to maintain the suspense till last. At first I was sure Pia will be a ghost :D but zombie is like a ghost so I guessed it almost right. I love this os...