Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

great update ...
loved it
aww... abhiya are so cute
lovely scene narrated between abhay and Anna

thanks a lot beenish! 😃

I'm really feeling glad that so many readers have enjoyed Abhay and Anna's convo. It's surely amazing to know you guys like it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires



Nice update Di
Continue soon & thanks for pm :)

Thank you dear. I'll post the update soon!

you're most welcome. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

<font color="#990033">Freaking awesome it is!! :)</font>

thank you so much dear. 😳




Thanks. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update dear nd thanks for pm😃 you're welcome. 😊

Abhiya togetherness thir strong true love the way abhay explained such beautiful things of nature ,his lonely life to piya, his sorry and their awesome acceptance hug were wonderful i loved it altogether 👏⭐️😳!!
Thank you so much dear. 😳 I am glad it pleased you so much. 😳
anna is feelings something bad coming up i trust her being a witch she very well can keep a watch on everything around🤔 but i just hope abhiya be safe 🤔as some so called people dont want abhiya together it was quite obvious !!

ahh...yes. troubles are on their way, and Abhay had to face it. Piya is human...so physically she is not capable but her mental strengths are not so frail ! As long as they are together things should work out ! Rest...we shall see! 😊

And thanks again for such wonderful comment. I hope you'll enjoy the story further. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

beautiful update indu.


i luv the way u are showing depth in their relationship. their bonding is getting stronger by the understanding they are sharing. loved the way abhay kind of motivated her talking about life and it's joys and how she should enjoy them w/o any worries.

Thank you so much Megha. 😳 I tried to show what was inside Abhay and how differently he sees the world. ..how he appreciates its beauty. We all know, Abhay is a lone soul, he had been dejected but that doesn't mean he didn't have the eyes to see anything beyond his grief! Therefore this scene was important as it not only shows how much he gives preferance to Piya's happiness, but also the depth of his emotions and his inner vision. His immortality has not robbed him of these fines senses yet! 😊
it was a beautiful scene as abhay made pia realise that she would never be alone ever coz he would always be there for her no wonder pia was overwhelmed with emotions coz nobody ever showed so much concern & care for her. abhay gifted himself and his heart to pia and that would be the best gift she could ever receive from him.it spoke volumes about his commitment to her and i luv the fact he has decided to share everything with her .their hug was lovely & it was indeed a moment of pure bliss for both abhay & pia.

Yes. Abhay had given himself and this had been the biggest step Abhay had ever taken! So it indeed speaks a VOLUME about the depth of his feelings for Piya. 😳

Hiding things did cost them a lot in the past, so this time Abhay had made up his mind to not repeate the same mistakes again. And a healthy relationship should always be devoid of lies. It should hold back nothing. 😊
anna is worried for them but before that abhay's feelings for what he actually feels for pia was simply fab indu. it was beautiful beyond words. it showed he not only loves her deeply but respects her too.
how he has controlled himself around her and also how lonely he was for 250 years . he really needed someone to talk too and happy to see he has finally found someone.

Thank you so very much dear. I am happy that you've found, the interaction and Abhay's thoughts, beautiful! It was an important and integral part of this update and i'm soo glad to see that you've noticed and appreciated it ! I feel my efforts have paid off. Thanks so much again! 🤗

Abhay is a man. But his love for Piya had never been an object of lust. His love is true and crosses the boundaries of physical pleasure. And it will always remain so.

so trouble has arrived and abhay would soon have to face their parents as they are against their union.well i am sure abhay would keep pia safe like always.

Yes. Abhay would not let any harm come to Piya as long as he is there. Well...what his parents are upto, will soon come out!

simply amazing update and i loved it like always and the song in the start was lovely. the lyrics were splendid and it really fitted the situation well.

Thank you. 😳 It's a lovely song. If you havnt yet, then do hear it if possible. 😳

Once again thanks a ton! Your comments are wonderful and inspiring to read. Do keep them coming Megha! 🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 👏Thanks for pm !! ahh piya is getting mad she's anxious worried dears that she will lose abhay omg poor girl but she should trust abhay he wont leave her as he promised and I loved their parts in car and lib ones too lovely !! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM Dear.
I feel sad for Abhay and Piya. Poor souls. they lov each other so much yet cant spend tine together. its a good thing that Abhay is a vampire😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update...love abhiya
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
sweet one...who is keeping an eye on them...

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