Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :)

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hola! 😊

Winter is here and so are the golden days that remind us of Abhaiya!
Remember the frosty, cold, snow falling day when our Piya first received a glimpse of touch of Abhay's lips on her? 😳 It was so dreamlike and fairy tale tale! Isn't it? 😳
And with the cold days here I thought why not come up with its sequel? What time would be best to bring them than this? 😳

So that's the reason I made this post-If you remember the sequel of the short One shots that I wrote on Abhaiya-

link for Part 1 -
Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating?

link for Sequel 2-
I accept i do loVE U

Yes the last where ultimately Abhay confessed his feelings for Piya.😊 and this SS Sequel is going to take off from there. But I need to mention that this take on Abhaiya and their relation will be Passionate and different from my other stories.
And whoever is willing to read this please do let me know through your comments. 😳

CHAPTER INDEX:

Part-1 Page 1

Part-2

Part-3

Part-4

take care. Love you. 🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 9 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sequel to ' I accept i do--'

CHAP-1

Miles Away. . .

I was beginning to mould things and see them with the faith she did. Every day of my life was beginning to emerge as a new hope. My 200 years no more seemed a burden, it was like the pieces of my past. I had learned to live with it. It doesn't mean that all's forgotten and forgiven. It wasn't that my heart was unblemished now or that my scars were gone.
No, I was far from healed. Some scars never heal. Not now not ever. But I'm no longer the captive of the past.

Everything- from my lonesome existence-- mundane petty matters to the stars in the night sky ; have begin to look remarkable, something that never did before.

It was amazing to feel life after all these decade inside my dead heart so very intense and passionately.

I was as they say, warming under the sheath of love and redemption.

Abhay Raichand was forming to move under the light of a new identity. An identity that was less arrogant and more about affection.

It had been 5days that I haven't seen Piya. She was away for a short trip with her family and friends.

It was all hurried and planned right after our confession. And before we could talk she was away.

Therefore the time in her abscene was irreversibly intolerable.

I couldn't wait this time to end.

A little restless Abhay slops down into his black Porsche.

Unlike other times he was wearing a deep navy blue jacket. As he pulled the
steering his mind engaged to a moment of togetherness, where the feeling of being enraptured in each others arms seemed to be the first comforting feel he'd ever had. Abhay breathed a deep sigh. His face wore no explicit expression yet somewhere there was a mild softness in his deeply haunting eyes. One could hardly miss the slight change if taken a closer look. And as the picture of Piya and her voice rang, a sweet concussion coursed through him, a flicker of twinkle appeared in those deep blues.

The black Porsche took a furious turn through the mountain road and skeeded its way smoothly down the stiff path.

It was not easy to live with a feeling so intense and unsettling at the same time. And not knowing how to function was even more dangerous. It was alien to him, after all these years --the feeling of love and being loved was not something Abhay was used to. Although his thoughts were not yet worn. And his mind too didn't lose its balance. He could still plan and kill if he needs to. It was as fit as that. Only hindrance was his newly clamoured feelings, that he wasn't adept at handling still.

But the sane part of him brought with it something else too.

Worry.

Abhay was in a form of agitation. He was concerned. He just couldn't fathom which one was greater. At one hand he felt he had been reborn. . . and on the other worry covered his every morsel. His expression quickly altered into a far more pensive look and Abhay knitted his brows farther- meditating his thoughts. He could not help but wonder at how much things have changed. How a single act of assurance from Pia had flipped the entire prospect for him. That moment had altered his entire world . . . . How different right now he could feel inside. What a drastic change has happened in his behaviour just because of one moment. So much so that inside his 200 years old, tired vessel, once more he felt an immense urge. One more time he was feeling like a teenager. Something, that an arrogant and stubborn Abhay Raichand would never have come to agree. . to himself.

But the moment he remembered her all forgiving face, the gentleness that her eyes bore, Abhay to his own astonishment could not help from smiling.

"Was she worth it ?" Instantaneously his thoughts turned to dismay.

She certainly wasn't worth it. He was a damaged piece. Piya deserved far better.

He was being selfish. He knew she could have a better future with someone else. But he also knew there was no going back now. Neither for her. Nor for him.

Yet in spite of everything he couldn't suppress the fondness that grew bigger with every moment.

She chose him !
And that makes all the difference.

Annoyance shot through him and Abhay scowled at himself. "Check yourself Abhay! Don't lose your mind! Don't behave like a love lorn college kid! 200 + . . . that's your age! Don't forget. "

"Just because Piya had bestowed her love on you . . . . that doesn't change the fact that you're decades old living predator. It changes nothing." he rebuked himself.

The pale greenness of the mountains far away insisted it wasn't long before he could reach the other side of those snow covered hills. He was almost there.

In the morning Abhay received a call from Ruhi asking him for help as their car had had a severe break down.

Noiselessly the Porsche in its sparkling elegance came to a halt.

Going to empty the basket in her hands Pia abruptly stopped. The
moment she caught the glimpse of him everything seemed to have turned still around her.
Only seperation of less than a week and Piya felt as if a pang of decades burning inside her ribcage. It was as though an eternity had passed since they have
met. Without him every second was like an era for Piya.

Holding the fruit basket in her clenched hands Piya watched him without blinking, a sudden
calmness and serenity enclosing her.

Unable to move a fraction Piya stared as he strided towards her but
stopped only when there was a distance of few metres.

There were no emotion palpable on his face. The lines on his countenance didn't alter to convey any surgence of emotion yet
Piya saw the flash of light. An immediate flicker of immence longing cross over his eyes and face. By then Misha had come from behind the tent and calling her name walked straight towards Piya.

Piya however was engrossed, her brown eyes wandering over his fingers that clenched and unclenched simultaneously. The urgency and yearning in his blue irises told her how terribly tortured he was.
Because Piya felt the same! She almost wriggled inside to fight against her every cell. . that was . . . to run . . and give herself into the warmth of his embrace!

It was Hard. Too Hard. Impossible to be so close to each other yet not able to hold. She knew how much effort Abhay had to put on his part to conceal the urge. But Pia realised she was not so strong . . . not strong enough when it came to Abhay.

She took a step, realising that she is ought to check herself but at the same
time well aware that she had lost the battle and wishing that something happens so she could stop herself or conceal her emotions. Her wish was granted soon enough but with a price she had not anticipated in the least.

Much to her dismay Jeh appeared from the nearest slop and came to stand beside her.

And Piya knew what a sour his sight was to Abhay. The last thing Piya wanted was to strike a flame upon his already bruised emotions. Yet she was helpless.

Piya couldn't wait to have a spare moment so that they can sit and talk.

Abhay was already too bruised and Piya wanted to fill that every morsel of pain with her Love. She didn't want to waste another moment. Yet here it was already disposing any wish she had wished.

Piya went two step further, she had made up her mind. Nothing would stop her now.

"hey Abhay! WoW What a pleasent surprise! Piya-here-I've the flowers you were asking about. A really expensive lot! Not moneywise- rare actually! But anything for you!" Jeh grinned from ear to ear and caught her hand, smiling one of his wicked smiles he threw his glance at Abhay. Pia in a greater peril moved her hand uneasily, unable to snatch it from Jeh's grip. They had to hide. Without talking to Abhay she can't disclose their relation.

With utter helplesness she looked at Abhay - his jaw as hard as a stone.

"Jeh if you please excuse us your drama then perhaps we could do things a bit more quickly here. " the edge and the tip of mockness in Misha's tone worked and Jeh gave Misha a disapproving glance, letting go of Piya's hand he moved a little aside. Misha smiled satisfactorily and turned her eyes towards Abhay.

"well that's such a big surprise Abhay! Who told you we are here?" Misha walked to him and gave him a hug.
Abhay didn't take his eyes off Piya.

"Perhaps I was misinformed. I think I should better leave."
Misha threw the bundled mattresses aside. "Ruhi-is it? Well no you had not been! Actually good that you are here. We need you! Could you help us?"

Abhay nodded. "sure. What is it?"

Misha grinned. "there you're. Our all time saviour! "

Without saying anything Abhay turned to the car. He opened the door. But he didn't spare another look on Piya.

Misha rapidly went on arranging the things but Piya felt a stab go through her. She looked at Abhay's retreating figure and her heart sank.

--to be continued. . .

So that was the first chapter. 😊 I'll be back with the next part soon! I had this sequel in my head for a long time, but I was waiting for my other stories to end. But since this December's here . . . i finally decided to post it. 😳 With the looks of the plot seems to me it will be an SS. At least for now! And I hope you'll enjoy this one too as much as you did the earlier ones. :) Let me know if you've any complain. Feel free to give your opinion anytime. 😳

take care..love you darlings.🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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anjali

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Posted: 10 years ago

continue in soon please want to read it...😊

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Can't wait to read this Indu di
Continue soon 😃

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Noor

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Posted: 10 years ago

Cant wait to read it Dear
I do i accept it is one of my fav os really wanna read it

Plzz pm me n update soon

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--geny--

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Posted: 10 years ago

woho sequel..AbhIya..yayyy...Yes.Winter mostly reminds me of AbhIya n PKYEK..I miss those days.very badly...Thank u Indu di!!
Excited n egarly waiting for it.
n m commenting soon on other works of ur's n everyones..hopefullly.

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..juhi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Waiting very eagerly for it...

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megha sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

would absolutely luv to read it indu

do cont and don't forget to pm me

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aliya

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Posted: 10 years ago

yes winter reminds of Abhiya badly. the whole month of Dec (2010)...those were magical days well I cant wait to read ur story, plz add me to pm list