Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Madhubala786

<font color="#cc3366" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">This </font><font color="#cc3366" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">story is amazing . U beautifuly potray their thoughts but can u please add more romance between them ?😉🤣</font>

Originally posted by: meerubzara

wonderful update !!!!

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

OMG this s magical Indu . I can
completely understand Abhay. This
s just sooo Abhay. I have always
said d way u explain him na, just
mindblowing! Looking forward 2
next update.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

beautiful update
so abhay was the guy who send pia that latter
abhay took pia in forest
abhiya moment was lovly ❤️ ❤️
so abhay brought pia in forest so he can console her for whatever happen in theater 🤗 🤗
poor pia was heart broken with that humiliate 🥺 🥺
OMG who those peoples that keeping eyes on abhiya 😲 😲
hope that was not danger for abhiya
update soon

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

simply amazing update indu .

the way u write about feelings, emotions of both abhay-pia ; it's like poetry-beautiful & soulful. u really have a way with words.

all this time poor pia was confused regarding abhay's behaviour & everything he did was for her actually. the way he consoled her , encouraged her to feel her own importance & live her own life was sheer brilliance.

at the start pia was engrossed in her own thoughts regarding abhay trying to figure out if he is indeed a reality or illusion in her life was lovely, specially when she calmed down by just thinking of him & also gets out of it when she is with him😆

both of them are more concerned for each other then themselves and therefore they belong with each other.

it's a beautiful update and i am short of words in praising it.

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

That was amazing update Indu.

As always your words are poetic and so beautiful. the way you write about Abhay and Piyas feelings always seems like a poetry to me. and I also want to point out how amazing is your detailing. it really matters a lot in a story for me and the way you point out how Piya holding her skirt, clutching her jacket for cold. then abhay putting his jacket on Piya. then few moments he held her hand and how he looked at her. the description of their silence and gazes. it just says everything how they are feelings. kudos to you for writing them to beautifully. 👏

thank you so much tanzie. Your words always hold grave effect upon me. They mean a lot more than i could ever say! 😳 I don't know whether it's really that good but seeing you pleased makes me happy. 😊

and I loved how Abhay said he will take care of everything 😳

Originally posted by: anjalidani

Hi,

I love the way you choose your words to write. Awesome.
I felt so close to nature via your update.

Thanks,
Anjali