Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :)

Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
awesome update dear loved it thanks for pm😃

I'm pleased to know that you like it.😳 thank you.

You're most welcome dear. :)

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..juhi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

wow wow wow...that was so so brilliant fantastic fabulous...lovely...i loved it so so much...!! ❤️

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: anjalisharma07
SUPERB UPDATE LOVE IT...😊
PLEASE UPDATE UR OTHER ABHIYA STORIES ALSO EAGERLY WAITING TO READ THEM...

Thank you so much. 😳

Yes dear i will update them one by one.😊

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Disha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

a very poetic update.

good to see abhay making pia realize her own worth

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Noor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Ummahhh
Superb update
Aww AbHaY cares for her soo much
The whole update was soo lovely
Want more more n more of AbHiYa

Plzz try to update soon i'll be waiting 🤗

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Tanya Kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Loved to see abhay care so much for piya. Rare love😉

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megha sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

simply amazing update indu .

the way u write about feelings, emotions of both abhay-pia ; it's like poetry-beautiful & soulful. u really have a way with words.

all this time poor pia was confused regarding abhay's behaviour & everything he did was for her actually. the way he consoled her , encouraged her to feel her own importance & live her own life was sheer brilliance.

at the start pia was engrossed in her own thoughts regarding abhay trying to figure out if he is indeed a reality or illusion in her life was lovely, specially when she calmed down by just thinking of him & also gets out of it when she is with him😆

both of them are more concerned for each other then themselves and therefore they belong with each other.

it's a beautiful update and i am short of words in praising it.

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Madhubala786

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

This story is amazing . U beautifuly potray their thoughts but can u please add more romance between them ?😉🤣

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Ok this was one beautiful update. Loved how Abhay consoled Piya, the way he said I'll take care of it...so Abhay.
Me love this update. ❤️

thank you so much Shreya. Feels grest to know that it pleased you. I'm honoured.😳

Yes Abhay is Abhay after all and would never change. ❤️

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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