Abhaiya SS:- Forever As One' -- Check out my Note on Page 50 ! :)

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
a very poetic update.
good to see abhay making pia realize her own worth

thanks Dishu. 🤗 Thought it would bore you to death. 😆 thank god it didn't!

Hope you had enjoyed it. 😳

Hm yes for a change the scene is alternated n it's Abhay who is consoling Piya.😊

And whenever Piya is alone and bruised she would always find Abhay at the end of the road. 😳

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! Outstanding part...loved it

thank you dear. 😳

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever
Ummahhh
Superb update
Aww AbHaY cares for her soo much
The whole update was soo lovely
Want more more n more of AbHiYa

Plzz try to update soon i'll be waiting 🤗

thank you so much dear. 🤗 Glad you like it. 😳

i'll update the next part early this time. :)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: muzikk93
Loved to see abhay care so much for piya. Rare love😉

Abhay will always care for Piya no matter how the circumstances are.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun
Simply Amazing!! :)

thanks 😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: navk
fabulous update

thank you. :)

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat
fabulous upadte
*claps*
thanx for pm

thank you very much. 😳 You're welcome.

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Indu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Syed695
Amazing Update!!!!

😊 thanks.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

That was amazing update Indu.

As always your words are poetic and so beautiful. the way you write about Abhay and Piyas feelings always seems like a poetry to me. and I also want to point out how amazing is your detailing. it really matters a lot in a story for me and the way you point out how Piya holding her skirt, clutching her jacket for cold. then abhay putting his jacket on Piya. then few moments he held her hand and how he looked at her. the description of their silence and gazes. it just says everything how they are feelings. kudos to you for writing them to beautifully. 👏

and I loved how Abhay said he will take care of everything 😳