'My life after death',(INDEX IN FIRST PAGE)Update in pg-100 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Tulika.Vdian

Congratulation for your first work!!!! 🥳
Well well well... It was mindblowing... Your story reminds me about my Vampire Abhay... Now its time to Pia's entry!!!!!
Keep writting dear... I will love to read your story...
Request : Please write something on Superstar Rishbala this time... As I am die hard fan of RK... 🤣My Right Kameena!!!
Keep writing my girl!!!!!!!

Thanks for liking it dear and I will surely try to write something on RK.

Originally posted by: saijahnavi

Mohana Simply Superb Yaar👏

Loved First Part Completely.Plz Continue Soon And I Am Waiting For Pia Entry In Abhay Life😛

Thanks a lot for liking it Jahnavi. Miss you a lot now a days.

Originally posted by: VISUforEternity

brilliant mohana... u wrote it so beautifully..

poor abhay, he went through so much pain

hr never knew the girl whom he loved so much will turn out to be such evil... well no worries piya is on her way in abhay's life..

Thanks a lot for liking it dear. I also felt soo sad for him.

Originally posted by: WickedRayne1089

awesome👏

Thanks a lot for liking it dear.

Originally posted by: shasha1989

aweome start dear..
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot for liking it dear..

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Originally posted by: lovesuku

👏

Thanks a lot for liking it dear

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Its very beautiful Pov...Nice thought...But U remain that episodes also where Pia go away by hating to know Abhay real creature & Abhay remaining when he gain conscious Chand told only about his creation & He never back for Maithili coz He want to Maithili a beautiful heart & he won't imagine Maithili like him creature so He loves her but decide to away for her & same reason He want to stay away from Pia...But Sid back that place & give Maithili that live for his satisfied for He won Maithili from Abhyendra...🤗

Thanks a lot for liking it dear. Well dear your point is absolutely right but i am not following the real story exactly. My story is loosely based on it. But you know i always felt Abhay had searched for Maithili after he regained his senses because at that time he did not know what is a Vampire & how are they. So his basic instinct would have been to search for Maithili. Moreover Chand was just a stranger to him at that time. I wished the cvs have showed more on this, they just showed Chand talking to Abhay but not his next action.

😃 Thankyou everyone for reading it. Love you all.