~~~FAIRY TALE THREAD-2--WELCOME EVERY ONE~~~,Pg42,Oct9,Note-38-page - Page 30

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum ending and u really did left ur readers shocked , surprised & pleasantly happy.

thank you😳

it was indeed a great twist to see that the sorcerer and abhay were same. i red it 2-3 times to clear my confusions. he was always there for her and never acknowledged the fact. pia really played a very smart game & took a very dangerous gamble. i always liked their scenes specially the arguments one.

yeah I wrote it in such a way that if you're watching out for Abhay it leaps out at you. and I like making them argue 😆

the prince was nice too and it was indeed generous & gracious of him to help piya after knowing the truth even though he too loved her. the scene b/w piya and his sister when they were talking about their childhood was lovely. i liked his sister too . i am glad that in the end even he got his happily ever after too .

I almost didn't write one for him. but I really felt bad for him😳

finally abhay's past too was revealed .he did cared for her mom after all she took care of him. abhay's way of helping piya and yet staying away from her was in tune with his classic nature. i loved the scene when he comforted her after she had a break down remembering her mom.

finally pia did manage to leave abhay speechless .

simply brilliantly written shreya.

just loved it.

I thought that was one of the biggest clue-ins to the fact that Pia wanted to prove something to him all along😆thank you😳i'm glad you liked.

Originally posted by: .Rhythm.

That's totally mindblowing , Shreya di. 👍🏼

I loved the twist of Abhay and Nick being the same person. But Piya did succeed in leaving him speechless , and that's what was amazing.

Going with the flow of the story I thought Abhay is the prince , but I wanted Piya to be with the sorcerer , so the twist was totally WOW !

Originally posted by: 2Obsessed

Now this is superb 👏

I had an inkling that come what may , Piya would end up with the sorcerer for sure.(The reason being your last story in this thread where Piya was not meant for the prince. 😆)

ha ha. I follow no pattern😆

Till the first part , I was sure that Abhay is the sorcerer , but in the next part I thought I am wrong , and then here , my first guess was indeed correct.

This is just the magic of your words , you did have me wavering away from my initial thoughts. I love your surprises totally.

I was really surprised people actually wavered. for me Abhay was the sorcerer all along, I was a little shocked😆never let it be said my readers surprise me any lesser than I surprise them😛😛

Halfway through the last part I felt as if this is going to be the first story where I wudn't want Piya ending up with Abhay( as at that time I thought the prince to be Abhay ). So , the twist was completely mindblowing.

I am SO happy to hear this, Anita. Honestly, my only reason for the name confusion was that if it's Abhay people automatically assume ki haan pairing toh isi ke saath hogi. So I'm kinda happy for this confusion😛

I wud admit that I did read the entire story again , only to notice that whenever there was a conversation between Abhay and Piya , Abhay's face was not visible. So the truth was open to anybody who could pick it up. That is indeed a smart way of writing.

Great job Shreya !

I wud to love to wait for another fairytale from you , as I love your twists in the tale completely. 😊

Thank you for reading the story again😆 yes, Abhay's face was never visible, so I have no clue why people did not see that right from the beginning 🤣 Let's see about another fairytale, I am getting messages to update my FF.😛 so whatever I feel upto writing right now😃😆

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Brilliant work
It was an unexpected twist dat abhay n nick r same n piya knew it from start n she hv done to make him fall in love with her
Loved d OS
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome update
uff piya bhi na
OMG The Sorcerer is none another then abhay 😲
he was all the time with piya 😲
in fact piya did all this for him 😲
fally piya confess & comfort with abhay 😃
poor prince fall in love with piya he even knew she will never love him like she love abhay 💔
loll piya even learn greek so she can understand what abhay say 😆
it was lovely to read
do wright dear 🤗

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Fantastic story shreya 👏 mind blowing 😃 loved every bit of story n character from it be it piya , prince, abhay n sorcerer too 😃

Originally posted by: archiesview

I had thought Piya and the sourcerer shared a sizzling chemistry from the very beginning and i found the sourcerer to be an intriguing character than the prince. I was a tad bit unhappy when i thought Abhay was the prince. So i am much too happy with the ending.

Brilliant characterizations! You have cleverly avoided any physical description of the sorcerer too so as to not give any clues!

Loved the story. Keep writing!

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Wow !!!!, A fantabulous fairy tale. What an imagination and creativity so beautifully put. Like you intended, I thought Abhay was the Prince. But I liked more of the conversations between the sorcerer and Piya. I wanted to ask you who would be better in the role of the sorcerer -Sid K.
You won't believe it right, if I told you that I wanted the sorcerer to fall in love with Piya and for once I did not want Abhay whom I thought was the Prince and Piya to be together. I wanted Piya to end up with the sorcerer as his feelings for her came out so beautifully. This is really an amazing piece . Simply outstanding... I feel like crying. Happy tears .
My one question. Didn't the sorcerer read her mind to know her feelings about him? *runs away *