Abhiya FF-The First Rain-Book 2 updtd-PG-31-Important NOTE-34 page- - Page 14

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Fabulous update simply loved it all thanks for pm keep updating Congo on new book🤗

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Awww indu n tora thanx a ton fr continuining this story,love u guys
The lines written at da start r superb
U r brilliant indu
Nw coming to da update...emotions were written n described wid perfection
Abhay n piya both r analyzing their own feelings
Media is taking a keen interest in their relationship
Waiting fr next update
Thanx fr pm

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update

this time both abhay and pia are trying to understand their own feelings. abhay though is more close in realizing then pia as when he was remembering his time spent with her he did concluded in end that she is more then a friend for him. it seems quite clear he has accepted that too and the only thing he is waiting for is to see if pia too feels the same. his long drive was written very well ..u can actually visualise it.

Hm. True. Well explained Megha. 👍🏼 yes you have wonderfully said in few words what we had tried to convey.😊

Abhay indeed has realised at last what he wants. Now it's Piya whom we would like to know what exactly she think or feels. Well...the upcoming chapters should answer it for us. 😊

And thank you for liking it. I feel happy to know that the scenes I wanted to incorporate, come out well. 😳

pia knows what she feels for him is more then friendship but she is not ready to accept it. she lightens up when she sees his msg or hear his voice but is low when she doesn't. their msg interaction was sweet . abhay kept pia's earring..that was cute.

Hmm. Yeah. That's only one simple earing but for Abhay it holds value which only he could feel.

Piya is yet to get to that state.

it looks like kate is back in action. she is the one spreading all this gossip about them. abhay can still tackle that but pia is a bit more soft hearted and sensitive and it will definitely be upsetting for her to read all of this.

Hmm. Yeah that's definitely true. Abhay is strong and knows the ways of media. He is used to it. But not Piya. So coming days will definitely going to be a test for her !

it was written beautifully indu specially abhay and pia's thoughts regarding each other. it was just brilliantly beautiful.

loved it

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

Yay!!! Finally an update😆.. right, first of all, i know i am kind of responsible for the delayed update of this story...but i am lucky you are sweet enough to understand and forgive😳...

My dear... 🤗 dn't say anything. We are friends n we all have a life to deal with which is often full of hurdles..n this n then that...so all we need is to forget about the past n look towards the future. You're here and that's more than I can ask princess ! 🤗 ❤️

now coming to the update...oh,oh before that..about those four lines you wrote..i already told you, i'll be waiting to read more such lines from you..and i won't take a no😛...it was brilliant👏

Thank you! 😳 haha..that just came out in the spar of a moment. Can't say when will it be kind enough to bombard me again! 😆

But thanks.your compliment means a lot!!! 😳

ok ok now coming to the update...it was awesome and beautifully written!!! You have a way with words fairy, and i'm not kidding... the way you give importance to each detail in your updates make the updates come more to life and seem more vivid👏👏... Thank you my Princess. I am honoured. 🤗

abhay is finally starting to let go of his denial...finally...phewww😆... and he kept her earring, that was so so sweet..this gesture means a lot and reveals a lot😳...

Yep n you already know that. Dn't u? 😉

i loved loved their talk about the perfume😳😳...it was so sweet, perfect and so well...so ...them😳...the undercurrent of longing and love always lingers and you bring that out perfectly..⭐️..

and i have always admired the way you write those parts about the newspapers(and once you wrote about forum reactions)- i can never write reports and stuff with such precision..kudos to you😃👏... Thank you! Bows* that's so kind of you! I try my best...plus my profession comes handy... 😆but you never know...things do come out not always how we like to in writing! But I always try to give my best. 😳

awesome writing...and well i won't say continue soon, because i'll be the one to update next😆

Yes that you're! 😆 😛

And thanks again for being here with me. First rain without you is always incomplete. 🤗