Abhiya FF-The First Rain-Book 2 updtd-PG-31-Important NOTE-34 page- - Page 16

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Piya is so right with Abhay. He gets angry on the silliest things 😆 anyways, they are soo cute in this FF. Loved reading this. Great job Tora

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

wow!! abhay and piya...u guys are adorable...

Originally posted by: kiara97

Amazing part..piya is so right.."That sometimes, the smallest gestures bring us the greatest happiness"
Continue soon

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Ahh wow this is an fabulous update well written loved the way abhiya enjoyed their time together 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

A really sweet,cute and beautiful updatethank you😳glad you liked it
Abhiya❤️
Aww the abhiya childhood stories...boarding skul haha🤣ah yes, i was laughing like an idiot while writing this part😆

Originally posted by: ILoveToRead.

Fabulous update!

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Lovely updt..!!
pia going on a trip away from abhay for few days...
Abhay got little sadden but trying to be perfect normal..
They are reliving their moments together...😊...
Thanks for pm..😊

Originally posted by: doll.12

They're cute... So chubby chubby... But but ... Can't wait to see their cozy Time .. Even they're alone right now... So can we expect their romance ?? Raat abhi baaki hai mere dostt... Update soon.

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Amazing update it was sweet n cute
Abhay n pia r so cute

Originally posted by: AnnetteSpring

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comments for chap 18:-

loved it.

Finallly!!! Finally Abhay is no more in denial about his feelings for Piya.😃 I love the way you describe the smallest of things with such minute details, like Piya's earring for an example. Abhay keeping Piya's earring with him is sweet. As it is Abhay can't read Piya's eyes or mind yet, 😆 ,atleast he will have something of Piya's with him, until they confess their feelings for each other.

Thank you Anita! So glad to hear you enjoying. Although I was bit sceptic myself. Well...I always am. 😊

Hm yes that's right . Watch out. There's more to come. 😉

Piya is still in denial though. I hope she realizes the bond between them sooner than later. She will. One has to. She can't deny it forever. 😳

When it comes to describing surroundings, you sure know what words to choose. I loved the descriptions when Abhay was driving towards his destination. Thank you! 😳

Apart from the four friends, I like Rajeeb. He is strong willed. He doesn't let anybody rule his actions, and that is something I like about him. Yes exactly that's how he is. STRONGWILLED. A person who won't compromise with what's right and won't allow wrong as long as he knows what's the right thing to do.

And he is an important character in this story so I feel happy to see you notice and acknowledge the strong points I tried to bring out in him. 😳

Abhiya's conversation through messages was cute. And before I forget, I loved those four lines before the update. Keep them coming Indu. 😊