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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

A really sweet,cute and beautiful update
Abhiya❤️
Aww the abhiya childhood stories...boarding skul haha🤣

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

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comments for chap 18:-

loved it.

Finallly!!! Finally Abhay is no more in denial about his feelings for Piya.😃 I love the way you describe the smallest of things with such minute details, like Piya's earring for an example. Abhay keeping Piya's earring with him is sweet. As it is Abhay can't read Piya's eyes or mind yet, 😆 ,atleast he will have something of Piya's with him, until they confess their feelings for each other.

Piya is still in denial though. I hope she realizes the bond between them sooner than later.

When it comes to describing surroundings, you sure know what words to choose. I loved the descriptions when Abhay was driving towards his destination.

Apart from the four friends, I like Rajeeb. He is strong willed. He doesn't let anybody rule his actions, and that is something I like about him.

Abhiya's conversation through messages was cute. And before I forget, I loved those four lines before the update. Keep them coming Indu. 😊

Edited by AnnetteSpring - 9 years ago

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Lovely updt..!!
pia going on a trip away from abhay for few days...
Abhay got little sadden but trying to be perfect normal..
They are reliving their moments together...😊...
Thanks for pm..😊

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

They're cute... So chubby chubby... But but ... Can't wait to see their cozy Time .. Even they're alone right now... So can we expect their romance ?? Raat abhi baaki hai mere dostt... Update soon.

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Amazing update it was sweet n cute
Abhay n pia r so cute

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Manisha

@.Rhythm.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

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This was a total Abhilicious update, and I loooved it. Abhiya were crybabies 😆

The way Abhay was being all mysterious, I thought he is taking Piya somewhere really special, but then he took her to his home, which is almost like a second home to her. That was sweet of him.

Abhay and Piya chatting and laughing together was adorable. I loved this pizza-party totally.

Thank U Tora di for this lovely chapter. 😃

Thanks 4 the pm Indu di 😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Amazing update. The more time Abhay-Pia spends together , more complicated it's gonna be for her. Pia was apprehensive in telling him about her trip as she feared what his reaction would be. Abhay is concerned for her but glad that he told her to go & enjoy. Abhay-Pia host f/b was cute. They know each other too well. The entire dinner scene was awsum. It was simple & sweet. Actually Abhay & Pia in this story are too cut & adorable.loved it.