FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 72

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Posted: 10 years ago
Arrest ??? Why ? What Pia did ?? I'm sure the evil Matz behind this !! So, Sid missing Pia !! Hope he come forward to her, I'm really missing them.. And Luke-Pia each other consider friend.. I love this new forward.. See, who will help her in this situation ?? Sid or Luke ?? Never mind Pia's Abhay always with her !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hav no issues on commnting
I read ur story twice since two days
its really beautiful
n mean it its nt fr gttng d rest bt truly I luvd
each of d feelings that is explained really well
im frm a different forum but luvd all d stories down hear
I also mk sure I drop in a comment
plzzz add me on
luv d story
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi long time 😊 🤗 chapter was amazing as usual and I would like to have pms of the links of other chapters and FFs sorry couldnt comment before since reallly not too active from past few months 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 53:
Mindblowing.
A collage of variety of emotions.
Piya attacked misha.she warned her but still being a newly turned,she is qt under control,
Abhay came n calmed piya down,
Abhay piya n abhay misha n misha piya convo was having a philosophy of its own.
Loved it.
Sid n alina convo was heart touching one.alina remembering her pasr,haseena made sid stay back at raichand mansion,alina reading sid book n da sketches n da poetic combination was fabulous.
Haseena telling alina,to knock before entering aabhiyaroon.lol
Alina n piya convo.all n all a wonderful update.
Thanx fr sending me all da pms.
Shreya I at last caught da train,
Will read chap 54 in a while then will comment here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
its getting interesting as the story is proceeding further. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
liked the training part which is explained well. abhay hiding things but piya being stubborn am sure she will find out in due time.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

I already read it 😆 😆
it was mind blowing update
I love disha she love & care alina so much 🤗 🤗
she is true friend of alina always support her in everyway 👏 👏
poor alina fall for sid
disha knew that long ago 👍🏼 👍🏼
she think sid iis jealous of her bcoz she is close to alina 🤪 🤪
alina was surprise to know that


They are very close. Alina doesnt have much family anyway.😳


wow pia's training session start 👍🏼 👍🏼
alina took them the same place where abhay & sid was trained
abhay was unhappy 😔 😔
when alina start to train pia abhay was worried for her
pia got some move very well 👏 👏
abhay show pia his memory where is was hurt but he didn't heal it pia felt bad for him 😭 😭


abhi toh party shuru hui hai😛


pia & luke convo was cute
nataliya didn't let luke got out she just trying to protect him😕 😕
god ye maithali getting to much still want to kill abhiya 😡 😡
abhiya moment was lovly ❤️ ❤️
oh no police came to arrest mrs raichand 😲 😲


Maithali hasnt even shown her jalwa yet😆

update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Already read the update before your PM 😃


Awwee the conversation between Disha and Alina. It was too good. What more could Alina ask for than her best friend assuring her that Sid really loved Alina and that she approved of it. It was so sweet

By the way what is Ravioli. Your mention of that itself makes my mouth water and I sincerely wish it to be a vegetarian dish so that I could try to look for it.


This is ravioli. Yes it is vegetarian. (Dishu is vegetarian too you know 😆 )

And Piya is all geared up for her training. It was really amusing to see Chand wishing her good luck by extending his hand which would have surprised Piya even more.

The training sessions were really good and for a moment I thought Abhay should stay away if Piya had to come out really strong. She really needed a tough trainer and Alina was really good at it.

You described a training session of Piyali with Abhayendra and Siddharth teaching her and here Alina and Abhay. One could easily see the difference between Abhayendra and Abhay.

While Abhayendra was teaching her how to face a combat, here Abhay was more worried in her defenses. He did not want her to get hurt.


Then, there was no eminent danger, it was just like Piyali wanted to learn and the guys offered.

Here there is danger lurking closely and it could be any moment. They dont have a chance.

I am not able to express it in right words, but you explained the difference very well.


Thank you. A lot of time has passed and none of them are the same people anymore. Equations too have changed.😳


You are really good in expressing feelings of people

The jealousy of Sid that he is not able to be a part of the training. I mean he did enjoy all the fun training Piyali and now he is missing it. He really misses being Piya's friend and he got replaced by Alina.

The envy of Alina on seeing the proximity of Abhay and Piya. Not that Abhay and Piya's love was easy. They faced a lot before they ended up together. But now they are together


Sid misses her obviously. And it is natural for Alina to feel envious.

The hurt of Luke, especially after witnessing an impossible love story of Abhay and Piya which was made possible by the sheer love of the two - he can still not hope that it would work in his case especially when the lady is very strong in discouraging any kind of development

The unsaid, yet felt , that feeling of Abhay that Piya has to be dragged into all of this especially when he wanted her to lead a normal happy life, though he was proud of how fast she could learn.

Its really excellent the way you describe them.

I also liked the Word Association game. Esp in this update and the after wards " "

I know you have given us more and more Abhiya scenes but yeh besharm dil always maange more.

And this time please, let it be Piya who teases Abhay.


FF is ending and u want more besharmi. 🤣
I don't think I can anymore😛



And I really loved the way Alina had Sid in a state of surprise that he is jealous of Disha . She really got him for a moment.

Maithili is sure to come back well prepared. And Abhay feels that this would be the last time. Oh, I want even more.

In the previous update, Sid went out for a while after he moved his things in the Raichand Mansion. Was it just like that or is there something to come out in the next update.


Some things should be left to audience interpretation.😆

So Natalya has worked out a strategy with Alina and has shared with Abhay too or the other way round - Abhay worked out a strategy and shared their ideas with Natalya for her approval?


Hmm...I don't know.😉


And now an arrest warrant for Mrs.Raichand? Is this Mrs.Raichand Haseena or Piya? The Dobrials will have to be involved especially if it is Piya as they are in the same city.
Hope all is well with Misha,Kabir, and others and T of course.


Yes they are fine for now.😳

I think its Piya they have come to arrest and it might be Maithili who is behind this. Till she regroups and regains her powers, the best way could be keeping Piya away from her family.
And dealing with the minds of humans would not be a problem for her.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read chapter 48 and 49!

Amazing update in all respects! Especially the small nuances were absolutely wonderful.!👏
I loved the council and the small facts . Sid and Alina-and the underlying tension between them was a treat to read! ⭐️ they're refreshing and the right now USP of the story, apart from Abhaypiya.

Great going shreya! Carry on!
I hope to catch with the rest of the updates very soon. 😊

take care..and keep on writing.🤗

p.s. Sorry for the short comment, but then you can understand why.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

Shreya dis update was truely fab
PiYa traning now start n she is doing well

AbHiYa game scene was soo soo soo cutee
😳

PiYa saw AbHaY past poor him
Luv dis update soon

Thanks for pm 😊


Thanks, Noor!
Glad you liked it. Will update as soon as I am done :)

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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