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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap51:
Awesome.
Maithilli trapped kabir n misha as dey thought she is piya n she send da note through sid.
Piya wanted to go with them,she got annoyed with abhay but she came out to bid him good bye.
Abhay,alina n sid went after misha n kabir while piya n luke stayed back.
Dey watched charles angelz,played game n then llukevisited disha but again he came back heart broken.
Piya was getting worried n inquired about abhay.
Sid attacked abhay n maithilli was enjoying it.
Luke said dat sid is straight forward but here I agree with piya,to me he appears complicated.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 54 updated. PMs will be sent by tomorrow probably :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I already read it 😆 😆
it was mind blowing update
I love disha she love & care alina so much 🤗 🤗
she is true friend of alina always support her in everyway 👏 👏
poor alina fall for sid
disha knew that long ago 👍🏼 👍🏼
she think sid iis jealous of her bcoz she is close to alina 🤪 🤪
alina was surprise to know that
wow pia's training session start 👍🏼 👍🏼
alina took them the same place where abhay & sid was trained
abhay was unhappy 😔 😔
when alina start to train pia abhay was worried for her
pia got some move very well 👏 👏
abhay show pia his memory where is was hurt but he didn't heal it pia felt bad for him 😭 😭
pia & luke convo was cute
nataliya didn't let luke got out she just trying to protect him😕 😕
god ye maithali getting to much still want to kill abhiya 😡 😡
abhiya moment was lovly ❤️ ❤️
oh no police came to arrest mrs raichand 😲 😲
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Already read the update before your PM 😃

Awwee the conversation between Disha and Alina. It was too good. What more could Alina ask for than her best friend assuring her that Sid really loved Alina and that she approved of it. It was so sweet

By the way what is Ravioli. Your mention of that itself makes my mouth water and I sincerely wish it to be a vegetarian dish so that I could try to look for it.

And Piya is all geared up for her training. It was really amusing to see Chand wishing her good luck by extending his hand which would have surprised Piya even more.

The training sessions were really good and for a moment I thought Abhay should stay away if Piya had to come out really strong. She really needed a tough trainer and Alina was really good at it.

You described a training session of Piyali with Abhayendra and Siddharth teaching her and here Alina and Abhay. One could easily see the difference between Abhayendra and Abhay.

While Abhayendra was teaching her how to face a combat, here Abhay was more worried in her defenses. He did not want her to get hurt.


Then, there was no eminent danger, it was just like Piyali wanted to learn and the guys offered.

Here there is danger lurking closely and it could be any moment. They dont have a chance.

I am not able to express it in right words, but you explained the difference very well.

You are really good in expressing feelings of people

The jealousy of Sid that he is not able to be a part of the training. I mean he did enjoy all the fun training Piyali and now he is missing it. He really misses being Piya's friend and he got replaced by Alina.

The envy of Alina on seeing the proximity of Abhay and Piya. Not that Abhay and Piya's love was easy. They faced a lot before they ended up together. But now they are together

The hurt of Luke, especially after witnessing an impossible love story of Abhay and Piya which was made possible by the sheer love of the two - he can still not hope that it would work in his case especially when the lady is very strong in discouraging any kind of development

The unsaid, yet felt , that feeling of Abhay that Piya has to be dragged into all of this especially when he wanted her to lead a normal happy life, though he was proud of how fast she could learn.

Its really excellent the way you describe them.

I also liked the Word Association game. Esp in this update and the after wards " "

I know you have given us more and more Abhiya scenes but yeh besharm dil always maange more.

And this time please, let it be Piya who teases Abhay.

And I really loved the way Alina had Sid in a state of surprise that he is jealous of Disha . She really got him for a moment.

Maithili is sure to come back well prepared. And Abhay feels that this would be the last time. Oh, I want even more.

In the previous update, Sid went out for a while after he moved his things in the Raichand Mansion. Was it just like that or is there something to come out in the next update.


So Natalya has worked out a strategy with Alina and has shared with Abhay too or the other way round - Abhay worked out a strategy and shared their ideas with Natalya for her approval?

And now an arrest warrant for Mrs.Raichand? Is this Mrs.Raichand Haseena or Piya? The Dobrials will have to be involved especially if it is Piya as they are in the same city.
Hope all is well with Misha,Kabir, and others and T of course.

I think its Piya they have come to arrest and it might be Maithili who is behind this. Till she regroups and regains her powers, the best way could be keeping Piya away from her family.
And dealing with the minds of humans would not be a problem for her.

Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap52:
Superb job
Alina stopping sid n abhay,
Haseena thoughts n her worry fr abhay,
Abhay n alina taking kabir n misha away frm maithillis hold,sid playing da real game,then maithilli being trapoed by alina,luke telling piya bout disha,n piya emotions while coming to knw dat all r safe,so dey finally reached mansion,abhay feeling jealous,n in the end,piya reaction when she saw misha blood.amazing .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Waiting for next
Thanx for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
Shreya dis update was truely fab
PiYa traning now start n she is doing well

AbHiYa game scene was soo soo soo cutee
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PiYa saw AbHaY past poor him
Luv dis update soon

Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hy I knw I nvr liked or cmmnted on ur stories I hav been quite
a reader of ur stories plz send me d link
plzzz
I want to read frm 48 th chap plzzz
plzzz😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ravzs

hy I knw I nvr liked or cmmnted on ur stories I hav been quite

a reader of ur stories plz send me d link


plzzz


I want to read frm 48 th chap plzzz



plzzz😕



If you are willing to comment, I can send you PMs. I don't PM silent readers...hope you understand :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
in dean style i wanna say awsum update.

alina and disha convo was good. they both really care for each other a lot and one reason might be that they don't have anyone else to do so for a longer period of time so they are close too. loved the way disha made alina understand about her own feelings towards sid and also that he too reciprocates them. disha has given her approval for sid to alina and that must have made her happy as she is indeed one of the most important person in her life.

pia is all set for her training and chand wishing her was surprising as there was always some awkwardness b/w them and pia never actually talked much or had some connect with him so no wonder she was lost for some time. alina brought them to the same place where abhay and sid have had their training , how did she knew that place and why did she chose that? does she want abhay to remember those times. pia was clumsy in the start and it isn't her fault but i am happy at her progress and also the way abhay kind of taught her indirectly. he was too concerned for her and is still keeping things from her, i hope he opens up with her soon and don't hide anything from her. his past memory where he was bloodied was painful . i think we might see some sid glimpses too.

sid misses piyali and was envious of alina so does that mean he will help pia too? i hope he does. he desperately needs a friend. he was teasing alina but she definitely stunned him with her " u r jealous of dishu remark". alina really explained her relationship with abhay and pia well to sid. they are definitely not close friends though she has helped them a lot and they have mutual respect for each other but still there's a barrier.


the game abhay and pia played was inconvenient for abhay. loved their answers and also how poor pia got teased by abhay that too when she was angry as hell.

i liked luke-pia convo too. poor luke everyone treats him badly. i know what natalya is doing is for luke's safety but still she was mean and rude to him. i am happy to see that pia told him she consider him as friend. abhay called him regret and natalya rubbed salt on his wounds by saying no one cares for him. that was too insensitive . hope he will join them soon in dehradoon.

by second day pia has shown a lot of growth in her training classes and abhay is feeling so proud of her. he wants chand to see her and train her further which means she has crossed quite a number of levels to reach the stage where she would be taught by chand. that is indeed a moment of pride for her as she is almost new to everything.

maithili sure is too vengeful and they also realise that she would be more then dangerous this time so even they are doing all their planning before hand but maithili sure knows how to surprise her opponents so they need to be careful.

lastly another cliffhanger. police has come to arrest mrs. raichand, why and which one?

all in all an awsum update. want to read more.

thanks for pm.
Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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