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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ravzs

I hav no issues on commnting

I read ur story twice since two days
its really beautiful
n mean it its nt fr gttng d rest bt truly I luvd
each of d feelings that is explained really well
im frm a different forum but luvd all d stories down hear
I also mk sure I drop in a comment
plzzz add me on
luv d story



Okay, then :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek.VDian

Arrest ??? Why ? What Pia did ?? I'm sure the evil Matz behind this !! So, Sid missing Pia !! Hope he come forward to her, I'm really missing them.. And Luke-Pia each other consider friend.. I love this new forward.. See, who will help her in this situation ?? Sid or Luke ?? Never mind Pia's Abhay always with her !!


Haha yeah Abhay will be there with her😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

hi long time 😊 🤗 chapter was amazing as usual and I would like to have pms of the links of other chapters and FFs sorry couldnt comment before since reallly not too active from past few months 😊


Thanks Ankita. You gonna be active here now?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

Chap 53:

Mindblowing.
A collage of variety of emotions.
Piya attacked misha.she warned her but still being a newly turned,she is qt under control,
Abhay came n calmed piya down,
Abhay piya n abhay misha n misha piya convo was having a philosophy of its own.
Loved it.
Sid n alina convo was heart touching one.alina remembering her pasr,haseena made sid stay back at raichand mansion,alina reading sid book n da sketches n da poetic combination was fabulous.
Haseena telling alina,to knock before entering aabhiyaroon.lol
Alina n piya convo.all n all a wonderful update.
Thanx fr sending me all da pms.
Shreya I at last caught da train,
Will read chap 54 in a while then will comment here.



Thanks for all the comments Aquib...loved reading them 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

in dean style i wanna say awsum update.

alina and disha convo was good. they both really care for each other a lot and one reason might be that they don't have anyone else to do so for a longer period of time so they are close too. loved the way disha made alina understand about her own feelings towards sid and also that he too reciprocates them. disha has given her approval for sid to alina and that must have made her happy as she is indeed one of the most important person in her life.

Thats one of the reasons yes.

pia is all set for her training and chand wishing her was surprising as there was always some awkwardness b/w them and pia never actually talked much or had some connect with him so no wonder she was lost for some time. alina brought them to the same place where abhay and sid have had their training , how did she knew that place and why did she chose that? does she want abhay to remember those times. pia was clumsy in the start and it isn't her fault but i am happy at her progress and also the way abhay kind of taught her indirectly. he was too concerned for her and is still keeping things from her, i hope he opens up with her soon and don't hide anything from her. his past memory where he was bloodied was painful . i think we might see some sid glimpses too.
Hmm...maybe she thought it would be a continuation😆

sid misses piyali and was envious of alina so does that mean he will help pia too? i hope he does. he desperately needs a friend. he was teasing alina but she definitely stunned him with her " u r jealous of dishu remark". alina really explained her relationship with abhay and pia well to sid. they are definitely not close friends though she has helped them a lot and they have mutual respect for each other but still there's a barrier.

I dont know if he can really help Piya. poor guy needs help himself😆
abhay and alina are closer but alina and piya are just too fundamentally different i guess.

the game abhay and pia played was inconvenient for abhay. loved their answers and also how poor pia got teased by abhay that too when she was angry as hell.

i liked luke-pia convo too. poor luke everyone treats him badly. i know what natalya is doing is for luke's safety but still she was mean and rude to him. i am happy to see that pia told him she consider him as friend. abhay called him regret and natalya rubbed salt on his wounds by saying no one cares for him. that was too insensitive . hope he will join them soon in dehradoon.

You wanna bet😉


by second day pia has shown a lot of growth in her training classes and abhay is feeling so proud of her. he wants chand to see her and train her further which means she has crossed quite a number of levels to reach the stage where she would be taught by chand. that is indeed a moment of pride for her as she is almost new to everything.

Chand isnt teaching her anything for a while. she is still new😆


maithili sure is too vengeful and they also realise that she would be more then dangerous this time so even they are doing all their planning before hand but maithili sure knows how to surprise her opponents so they need to be careful.
Hmm...obviously, they do need to be careful.

lastly another cliffhanger. police has come to arrest mrs. raichand, why and which one?
keep reading for that. lol.😆

all in all an awsum update. want to read more.
Thanks for the comments Megha...you are one my fav readers🤗
thanks for pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 53
shreya , super duper dhansu update
love the scenes when pia reback - misha n abhay reached in time , n love the scenes of abhiya , happy both exchange blood thrice n now abhay can't hide anything from pia n same fr pia
uff kya expression the , when chand said to sid - u affraid from ur brother , after what expression , n den alina-sid scenes , lovely
so , maithali hope - if she t/t sid in good way den he didn't change
again one more lovely moment of abhiya 😳
thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
hy
once again tnks fr d link
just read all d chaps in one go just luvd it
frm chap 48 till chap 53
I was lik truelly spell bound as it was amazing
I read t lik two to three times
all I cn say is awesum
very well written each line written ws imaginable
n to be honest tis s a story which I wil cherish readin
I read tis stories evn though I hd internals
u cn imagine hw much I likd thm
tnks a lot fr sendin liks wil cmmnt as sn as I read nxt
tnk u 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ravzs

hy

once again tnks fr d link
just read all d chaps in one go just luvd it
frm chap 48 till chap 53
I was lik truelly spell bound as it was amazing
I read t lik two to three times
all I cn say is awesum
very well written each line written ws imaginable
n to be honest tis s a story which I wil cherish readin
I read tis stories evn though I hd internals
u cn imagine hw much I likd thm
tnks a lot fr sendin liks wil cmmnt as sn as I read nxt
tnk u 😃



Whoa! Thank you, Raveena! It certainly means so much to me, and I hope your internals went well and also hope to see you more over here😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 55 updated and PMs have been sent. If you're on the list and haven't recieved one, PM me😳
The chapter's dedicated to Dishu for her birthday.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what a beautiful update. After a little time we got this lite and filed with humor update. So many things to talk about in this update. But for that as usual I need to read the update very well, right now I just read it very litely. But I really like your writing.

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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