FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 64

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Posted: 10 years ago
shreya im really v sorry fr late reply,not feeling well.i got pm fr chap 51.
plz send me da links of 48 to 50 too.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

shreya im really v sorry fr late reply,not feeling well.i got pm fr chap 51.
plz send me da links of 48 to 50 too.


They are there only :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek.VDian

wow this is intresting and little bit cofusion... Never mind !! Some shocking moment I mean Luke-Disha Kiss ?? Aahh I'm worried for Kabir-Misha !! I also feel like Piya something bad s going to happen.. Letz see !! Waiting for the next one.. No more comment for now.


Hmm..let's see what will happen? LOL.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful and an action packed update


so i guessed it right that the note was from maithili. she is the sole trouble maker left in their lives.

pia was right in getting angry over abhay for not taking her on their mission after all it's her sister who is in danger and abhay too is right on his part as he would get distracted with pia's safety but still since she is a vampire now i think she could have helped them.


Hmmm...I will explain that in the coming updates.The decision was mostly Alina's and Abhay followed her reasoning and agreed.


abhay apologised to pia and everyone was like shocked..obviously abhay doesn't do that often. sid cares for alina and that's the only reason he is helping them and he is frustrated to see that abhay had seen that concern . both the brothers still have a long way to go before they become like their old self.


Hmmm...they are gonna be at loggerheads for a while I guess😆

luke was trying so hard to cheer pia up and it was nice to read how he feels abhay can be close yet stay away from ppl. nice to see them doing normal things in such stressful times.

luke disha scene was lovely and i actually feel sad for both of them. he is having a guilty conscious for not able to save his friend and as a vampires it must be too much burden. he went after reid only to take revenge from him for hurting natalya ..that was really awsum. great to see him caring for her too much.

disha it seems has her own demons to take care of and despite being getting attached to him her baggage of past doesn't let her accept him. want to know why? luke and disha both deserves some happiness. i liked how he was able to decipher disha's mood from all her pics.



I really like Luke. Actually, I love all my characters to bits😆He's a different character than Abhay or Sid. Luke cares a lot for Natalya and she's important to him. Disha and Luke are complicated and they might be the only couple that might have been . lets see😆



maithili is too cunning for them but kabir is smart enough to leave some clues for them. the entire abhay -sid fight looks staged to mislead maithili..hope it happens that way.

i really liked how luke differentiated b/w both the brothers. pia is worrying for all of them and i wish she gets a sigh of relief soon but it seems she too has something cooking in her mind in the last part.

i really liked some of the dialogues a lot.

like abhay taunting sid about default settings😆

sid telling him that he has become a girl😆

sid saying to pia u have cured the bearhead😆

abhay talking about how alina would handle sid.



all in all an amazing update.


thank you so much. LOL nothing cooking in Piya's head right now😆


thanks for pm😊

i already gave a small comment on wattpad

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Posted: 10 years ago
I read dis story really amazing...
But only read 47 chp where r nxt chp dear..?
I wanna read 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
me kittu by the username blueparrots I loveee ur story its amazing totally different..awesome concept I love Pia's character...pls add me in ur buddy list and send me pm so that I can continue reading ur story pls
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

I read dis story really amazing...
But only read 47 chp where r nxt chp dear..?
I wanna read 😊



They aren't posted in IF. I can PM you, if you're willing to comment😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BLUEPARROTS

me kittu by the username blueparrots I loveee ur story its amazing totally different..awesome concept I love Pia's character...pls add me in ur buddy list and send me pm so that I can continue reading ur story pls


Hi Kittu. sure, I can PM you, if you're willing to comment.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ah cant promise u but I will pakka try to cmnt dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Damn the net connection, I was as usual making my long comment and pop ,the connectivity got lost half way through the comments and I did not save them. Let me try recollecting them. ...


Thats another interesting update Shreya, keeping the readers glued to the chapter eager to know what happens next .

So Maithili plays her part. How could she keep quiet when her plans failed, when Piya not only survived but now turned into a vampire. She is now married to Abhay and is on her honeymoon.
And she also wanted to enjoy this all the while by involving Alina also. Alina was sure to be approached because Maithili did not mention a place. Wonder how she got that note delivered to Sid and why Sid. She could have made some deliver the note directly to Alina or the Raichands.



Isn't Sid the one she is closest to?


While Alina feels that Piya might be ranting against the entire world, Misha is Piya's sister and Kabir, a good friend who were unnecessarily involved. How could she keep away esp when she was supposed to be the ransom for their safe release. How could she stay calm and not get involved.
But then Abhay and others were also right in making Piya stay back. Piya may be a vampire, but she is more vulnerable and she just cannot fight a more powerful vampire like Maithili who also uses spells to bind her opponents and she is all the more ruthless.
Piya is not a liability, but the situation is not just right to involve her.

You are sort of correct. But not completely.


And surprisingly Sid volunteered to join them. It was thoughtful of them to leave Luke behind and Chandeena to protect Piya as Maithili may attack her in the absence of Abhay and Alina . By the way where were Chandeena at the moment. They seemed to be away from the time Abhay and Piya returned because Piya asked if they knew about it.



They are there. Not knowing everything does not mean they have gone honeymooning😛


Does Reina know about all this? She wanted more than Abhiya reunion May be destruction of Maithili. But Maithili is only becoming dangerous with every passing day. Did she not realise that Maithili might do some thing or other to harm Abhay and Piya. What does Reina want and how does she expect whatever she wants to happen?



Reina has a goal in her head and it is not Abhay and Piya reunion only.




Poor Misha and Kabir, For no fault of theirs they got dragged into this. And Kabir knows about Abhay and now Piya's identity. You put it very nicely when you wrote about Kabir not wanting to take the word "Vampire". Kabir, though he hated to admit to himself, always knew Abhay cared about Piya and he was way too human. I wished Kabir would never get to know about Abhay's identity. But I guess he had to know as he is now an important part of Misha's life.
Both Misha and Kabir were courageous and did not show their fear and even left clues.

Maithali's eyes widened, first in confusion, then in excited glee, and then in consternation. She looked worried...upset.

Why did Maithili react like this? Is it because she expected Piya and Abhay to come but it was Sid who joined them. She looked worried, upset because Alina joined the team. But then she knew it na that Alina would be involved as she did not mention the place and Alina would surely use her powers to find them. She was expecting them and was playing games by shifting places.


Yes.


It was good of Luke keeping Piya engaged by watching movies or playing games. He told her how he met Abhay. So Reid was the vampire who turned Natalya. Luke turned into a vampire during the world war. When did Natalya become a vampire? She is chosen the head of the council means she should be some elder vampire or is it because she was a witch and has more powers. Reid was killed after she made Luke a vampire means it took a long time to hunt him down.



Not necessarily.



What is this game of noughts and crosses?



😆this

Abhay and team had gone to five houses by now. So was Maithili shifting them to many dilapidated houses where people fearing to go 😃 Alina could have saved her powers by listing down such places. Just kidding. Please dont bother to answer.😳


You mean basically list all the empty houses in the world? She is not a computer.

Alina closed her eyes still. Did that shoe lace give her some kind of hint, a pattern?


No. Abhay did.



Luke goes to meet Ms.Gupta, The scene was really good. Ms.Gupta asked at the restaurant if Luke would have something to eat. She did not know he was a vampire. I mean she must have known from Alina that the Raichand's were vampires and Luke some associate of them.
And when she licked the chocolate, Luke got a glimpse of a vibrant Disha who is under the guise of a stern Ms.Gupta. And he wanted to know more about her. I really liked the scene which was very subtle yet very intense and the kiss spoke many words between them which could not be spoken.
Luke wanted her to be open to him , to share things with him and she wanted to build impenetrable walls. Reminded me of old Abhay and Piya whens he did not know he was a vampire.

Both Luke and Ms Gupta had something incomplete in their past and it is left to the future to make them complete.


How interesting that you compared them to Abhay and Piya. Very interesting note indeed.😃



I was wondering why Sid joined the mission. He is not the person who would care if something happened to a couple of humans just because they were related to Piya. It could be because of Alina. She would surely involve herself and he did not want anything to happen to her. And the second reason could be that he wanted to take on Maithili and did not want to miss any kind of action.




Can't you guess?


So the fight between Abhay and Sid, is it a plan to distract Maithili so that Alina can concentrate on her powers and catch Maithili unawares? Hope they are just on time to save Kabir and Misha.

While the three are full into action mode , poor Piya must be under tremendous stress not knowing what was happening and she has her doubts about Abhay's safety due to her experience being taken in by impersonations. Something makes me feel that Piya wont be sitting quiet and she too would join the action some how.
And Chandeena did not return still?



Chandeena are at home only
😛
That was a very interesting update Shreya 👏 Waiting for the next update

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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