FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey pls add me in ur pm list...thnks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolwaters

hey pls add me in ur pm list...thnks :)


Sorry dear, but I am not adding people who aren't willing to comment. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

sorry 4r commenting late 😒

chapter 48
loved the way u showed sid hs been playing wit all in flashes b/w the fight sequence 👍🏼
finally piya is a vampy now , liked 2 c misha supportive 😊
would love 2 c piya n luke frindship in future 😊
abhiya finally married 🥳
last piya-misha part ws quite touching 😭




Thank you. I did like writing the Sid part and I've wanted to do it for a long time.

chappy 49
awesome ⭐️
loved sidina here ❤️ wish they were paired in the show as well
abhiya nokjok is super cute n funny
like the way u described the vampire council

Haha, but Alina here is very different from the one in the show😛


chappy 50
nice chappy 😊
liked it !
no doubt abhay is a walking history 😆
last part 😕
wil b waiting 2 kno haseena's past 😊
dos haseena's past hs anythisg 2 do wit chand leaving the council ❓
tnx 4r the pm 😊
Haseena's past will come out soon too bit by bit. thanks so much for commenting :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update and thanks for such a long update😊


i loved the description of all the places u have mentioned here in update shreya. it indeed looks like it has been written by a person who had not only visited them but made sure to learn about their history.👍🏼


thanks so much Megha...I nearly tore my hair out researching on them😆someday even I want to visit them😛


abhay was playing around with pia and i loved his prologue and epilogue dialogue...that was awsum and damn funny😆

pia wants to share abhay's worries but abhay being abhay won't do it and i liked the fact how he was trying to get into his head but couldn't so she does it smartly and makes him teach her that. abhay was bowled over by pia's move.

Yeah. Abhay will take a while to start sharing😛


abhay finally teaches pia how to hunt also..that was cool. pia was admiring him while he did that

their romance was hot and wild like vampires.

abhay infact went to a club only for pia..that was sweet of him. they behaved like typical strangers meeting there..that was nice. time for abhay to have some fun also.liked how pia got him to beach and she made him walk with her bare foot. that scene was good when she was seeing the view of city from the top of building and kept abhay at bay.

abhay was like a walking encyclopedia for pia on the entire tour.

loved the scene where pia tried to remove abhay's worries regarding her as a vampire. loved all of pia's lines there. infact i liked how abhay admired her fighting spirit after all that is why they are together now.

pia called abhay a dictator😆she was jealous of girls staring at him and abhay wore black even in night😆

pia and abhay in paris was awsum to watch. so many fans pia had there and abhay must have felt proud of her.



haha thanks so much for liking it. well yes abhay loves black too much😛😆glad u liked piya's lines.😳



haseena was lost in her past memories when she was turned to vampire and i can feel she was a bit of envious of pia coz not only did she lived her human life but was also turned by the men who she loved the most. but who bit her in that forest that night?just a random vampire?


Yes. Haseena was not turned as per her wishes



i loved luke and pia scene a lot. i can see a future good friends in them. luke it seems too have some tragic incident in his past which i guess when he will get comfortable with pia he would share. may be pia can help him understand human behaviour more as she has been turned recently.


Yes luke and piya are going to be friends. i think it's more luke making her understand vampire stuff😆




so a trouble is looming large over them? what is it? maithili? what was it that abhay discussed with reina ? the 4 letter word ...what can it be...u have ended it on a cliffhanger! whatever it is it has to be related with maithtili only.



haha you seem very sure. four letter word...think DAMN for an example. and other synonyms..😛


awsum chapter
can't wait to read further

thanks a lot . I always love your comments😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

First of all Hearty Congratulations for completing half century


But you know what we want. We want one full century

Another mind blowing update. Coming to the update

Piya is now a vampire. But sad that Abhay could still not share all things to Piya.
I really loved his reply to her when she asked why he cant share his burden with someone

Why are you still doing this, Abhay? Why can't you let someone else take your burdens for once?" He smiled sadly and kissed her forehead. "Because I can't be sure they'll be able to carry it."

She may be a vampire but still Abhay cant be sure if she can take all the burdens.
And why did he want to meet Reina now. He now guessed who she is but did he know where to find her or did she send for him?
And did she share with Abhay on what she wanted from him and Piya.
But why did she share with Abhay alone? Piya was included in her plan of action all the time.


Ahhh...Reina and Abhay's convo will be partially revealed very soon.And it will take time for Abhay to share everything with Piya.


It was really interesting the way Haseena remembered about her past after seeing Piya. Its not all times one things about their past. Something triggers old memories. But is there more about Haseena's past and would this also show how her life changed after meeting Chand?
Luke also seems to have some painful past.
I wish Piya got to learn how to block her thoughts from mind from Luke and teased Abhay for sometime.



Yeah. Everyone has a past, you know?😆 You will hear more about Haseena's past eventually. Piya will learn how to block her thoughts but not from Luke.



Coming to their honeymoon, yes I was expecting some kind of action But the tour of all the places you mentioned is a real surprise and along with Abhiya we had the pleasure of seeing all the places.
I cant believe you never visited these places. You explained them as if you really enjoyed all the spots. I had been to Finland and Sweden ,Scotland and Hungary, and a night at Paris. Still I cant describe the way you did.
While reading, really felt that that we toured the places, attended the concert, played in the beach and sand, enjoyed the view from the tower all the historic buildings and believe me thats all (nothing further *innocent face*)



Nothing further? How disappointing😆
No I havent visited these places honestly. Oh wow you have seen Sweden? I did plan to include Sweden originally but then changed it for Denmark.😳


And Abhay might have been to most of the places he took her. But he would have really enjoyed them only now.
And the way he hunted for her and helped her to get on this life. My God, no wonder Abhay Raichand is loved so much.


But please for once, let Piya play with Abhay shielding her thoughts (not the silent treatment before their confession which was a torture to Abhay) and not just her thoughts but her feelings too and want Abhay to go for her once. It was here in this update also. But it was both of them seducing each other and Abhay getting the upper hand. Please this time let it be Piya and I do want Abhay to feel jealous of her too.
Why should boys have all the fun? Let Piya have her fun once.



I will certainly note ur suggestion. I am a firm believer in gender equality you know😉



But looking at the last part, it looks like all the fun time is over.
I was expecting something bad to happen because Maithili would not lie low for a long time now that her rage would have multiplied, Not only Abhay and Piya are married and are on their honeymoon, now even Sid betrayed her. So its time she struck.

When Piya was showing Abhay the places in Paris, I was thinking she must be thinking about Misha who was with her then. Will Piya meet Misha, Kabir and her family again?

"They would have to go back a month shorter than planned" Does this mean that they would have to start immediately.

Hope nothing happened to Misha, Kabir or her family. Horror and Panic engulfed her means something would have happened either to her family or to Chandeena. Or it could have been Alina or Sid and is the four letter word "DAMN"?



Hmm...I cant say for sure but it's going to be quite big. And yes that four letter word can be damn or any other curse word which are not suitable for writing *innocent face*😆😆😆



Now this suspense is hard to bear. But then FF bhi jaldi khatam ho jaayega. I want to eat the cake and have it too. What to do?

But thank you so much for the tour especially with Abhiya and their - you know what moments. Sone pe suhaaga. Enjoyed it a lot.





Haha. more like sone pe suhagraat huh?😆 I embrassed myself a lot during this update. LOL.


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Posted: 10 years ago
I updated my comments in wattpad :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow this is intresting and little bit cofusion... Never mind !! Some shocking moment I mean Luke-Disha Kiss ?? Aahh I'm worried for Kabir-Misha !! I also feel like Piya something bad s going to happen.. Letz see !! Waiting for the next one.. No more comment for now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm starting to read this story
but after chapter 47 I cant get other chapter
so plz cnt u PM me rest chapter plz plz plz 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful and an action packed update

so i guessed it right that the note was from maithili. she is the sole trouble maker left in their lives.

pia was right in getting angry over abhay for not taking her on their mission after all it's her sister who is in danger and abhay too is right on his part as he would get distracted with pia's safety but still since she is a vampire now i think she could have helped them.

abhay apologised to pia and everyone was like shocked..obviously abhay doesn't do that often. sid cares for alina and that's the only reason he is helping them and he is frustrated to see that abhay had seen that concern . both the brothers still have a long way to go before they become like their old self.

luke was trying so hard to cheer pia up and it was nice to read how he feels abhay can be close yet stay away from ppl. nice to see them doing normal things in such stressful times.

luke disha scene was lovely and i actually feel sad for both of them. he is having a guilty conscious for not able to save his friend and as a vampires it must be too much burden. he went after reid only to take revenge from him for hurting natalya ..that was really awsum. great to see him caring for her too much.

disha it seems has her own demons to take care of and despite being getting attached to him her baggage of past doesn't let her accept him. want to know why? luke and disha both deserves some happiness. i liked how he was able to decipher disha's mood from all her pics.

maithili is too cunning for them but kabir is smart enough to leave some clues for them. the entire abhay -sid fight looks staged to mislead maithili..hope it happens that way.

i really liked how luke differentiated b/w both the brothers. pia is worrying for all of them and i wish she gets a sigh of relief soon but it seems she too has something cooking in her mind in the last part.

i really liked some of the dialogues a lot.

like abhay taunting sid about default settings😆

sid telling him that he has become a girl😆

sid saying to pia u have cured the bearhead😆

abhay talking about how alina would handle sid.



all in all an amazing update.

thanks for pm😊

i already gave a small comment on wattpad

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago
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Damn the net connection, I was as usual making my long comment and pop ,the connectivity got lost half way through the comments and I did not save them. Let me try recollecting them. ...

Thats another interesting update Shreya, keeping the readers glued to the chapter eager to know what happens next .

So Maithili plays her part. How could she keep quiet when her plans failed, when Piya not only survived but now turned into a vampire. She is now married to Abhay and is on her honeymoon.
And she also wanted to enjoy this all the while by involving Alina also. Alina was sure to be approached because Maithili did not mention a place. Wonder how she got that note delivered to Sid and why Sid. She could have made some deliver the note directly to Alina or the Raichands.

While Alina feels that Piya might be ranting against the entire world, Misha is Piya's sister and Kabir, a good friend who were unnecessarily involved. How could she keep away esp when she was supposed to be the ransom for their safe release. How could she stay calm and not get involved.
But then Abhay and others were also right in making Piya stay back. Piya may be a vampire, but she is more vulnerable and she just cannot fight a more powerful vampire like Maithili who also uses spells to bind her opponents and she is all the more ruthless.
Piya is not a liability, but the situation is not just right to involve her.
And surprisingly Sid volunteered to join them. It was thoughtful of them to leave Luke behind and Chandeena to protect Piya as Maithili may attack her in the absence of Abhay and Alina . By the way where were Chandeena at the moment. They seemed to be away from the time Abhay and Piya returned because Piya asked if they knew about it.

Does Reina know about all this? She wanted more than Abhiya reunion May be destruction of Maithili. But Maithili is only becoming dangerous with every passing day. Did she not realise that Maithili might do some thing or other to harm Abhay and Piya. What does Reina want and how does she expect whatever she wants to happen?

Poor Misha and Kabir, For no fault of theirs they got dragged into this. And Kabir knows about Abhay and now Piya's identity. You put it very nicely when you wrote about Kabir not wanting to take the word "Vampire". Kabir, though he hated to admit to himself, always knew Abhay cared about Piya and he was way too human. I wished Kabir would never get to know about Abhay's identity. But I guess he had to know as he is now an important part of Misha's life.
Both Misha and Kabir were courageous and did not show their fear and even left clues.

Maithali's eyes widened, first in confusion, then in excited glee, and then in consternation. She looked worried...upset.

Why did Maithili react like this? Is it because she expected Piya and Abhay to come but it was Sid who joined them. She looked worried, upset because Alina joined the team. But then she knew it na that Alina would be involved as she did not mention the place and Alina would surely use her powers to find them. She was expecting them and was playing games by shifting places.

It was good of Luke keeping Piya engaged by watching movies or playing games. He told her how he met Abhay. So Reid was the vampire who turned Natalya. Luke turned into a vampire during the world war. When did Natalya become a vampire? She is chosen the head of the council means she should be some elder vampire or is it because she was a witch and has more powers. Reid was killed after she made Luke a vampire means it took a long time to hunt him down.


What is this game of noughts and crosses?

Abhay and team had gone to five houses by now. So was Maithili shifting them to many dilapidated houses where people fearing to go 😃 Alina could have saved her powers by listing down such places. Just kidding. Please dont bother to answer.😳

Alina closed her eyes still. Did that shoe lace give her some kind of hint, a pattern?


Luke goes to meet Ms.Gupta, The scene was really good. Ms.Gupta asked at the restaurant if Luke would have something to eat. She did not know he was a vampire. I mean she must have known from Alina that the Raichand's were vampires and Luke some associate of them.
And when she licked the chocolate, Luke got a glimpse of a vibrant Disha who is under the guise of a stern Ms.Gupta. And he wanted to know more about her. I really liked the scene which was very subtle yet very intense and the kiss spoke many words between them which could not be spoken.
Luke wanted her to be open to him , to share things with him and she wanted to build impenetrable walls. Reminded me of old Abhay and Piya whens he did not know he was a vampire.

Both Luke and Ms Gupta had something incomplete in their past and it is left to the future to make them complete.


I was wondering why Sid joined the mission. He is not the person who would care if something happened to a couple of humans just because they were related to Piya. It could be because of Alina. She would surely involve herself and he did not want anything to happen to her. And the second reason could be that he wanted to take on Maithili and did not want to miss any kind of action.

So the fight between Abhay and Sid, is it a plan to distract Maithili so that Alina can concentrate on her powers and catch Maithili unawares? Hope they are just on time to save Kabir and Misha.

While the three are full into action mode , poor Piya must be under tremendous stress not knowing what was happening and she has her doubts about Abhay's safety due to her experience being taken in by impersonations. Something makes me feel that Piya wont be sitting quiet and she too would join the action some how.
And Chandeena did not return still?

That was a very interesting update Shreya 👏 Waiting for the next update

Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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