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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek.VDian

wow Pia-Luke's friendship getting stronger !! Love their relation.. Special request to u plz make Abhay jelous !! Pia always get jelous, nw I want the opposite !! Bt the end...god I'm too much worried. Plz update it soon, can't wait too long !!


hehe thank you.Let's see. Abhay might be jealous but not too much haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES...Will be back with comments soon..
This time Pakka, Shreya

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Firstly, I apologize for not being regular in commenting..Lately I have not been commenting on any of the works on I-F. Also, there are very few fics which I am reading regularly...and Time and Again is one of them...I am going to try my best to be regular..😳

Lets start with last 3 updates...

CHAP 50 & 51

OMG!! Piya can so stubborn at times but what I like is how Abhay always manages to coax her into anything..God! He turned to seducing now 😆 But I like this firecracker Piya...always ready to get back at anything..Ah! The honeymoon..Gosh! It was written beautifully..They were so passionate..Abhay really turned into a historian guide 😆 Haseena's backstory was intriguing...me likey!

I also like the friendly relationship between Luke and Piya is budding..I think Piya is gonna be major support to Luke sometime in near future. Or May be not. Knowing You 😆

So Maithili played her cards...Someone is in real vengeful mood..And I like Sid..He can be so cute at times..With cute I meant his humorous nature 😛 Oh trust him to never leave a chance to jibe against his baby brother. And then I like the way Alina and Sid heading forward :)

CHAP 52

The start was hilarious 😆 I so love this lil love and more hate relationship between Abhay & Sid..Now again it makes me wonder..Did I really use the word LOVE for them? My bad..right?

ooo...I loved the confrontation between Sid n Maithili...I do feel bad for Sid but I cant even pity Metz..Somewhere down the line she deserves it..And I think worse...Sid and metz convo was written beautifully...And I am so glad Sid has Alina now..They make a good couple..

Now that metz knows what has really happened, she is going to be back with a bang..Currently she is a wounded tiger and they more dangerous than anything..

ah uh! Looks like someone is fighting with thirst...I dont know whats gonna happen but all i hope is she doesnt harm Misha or she going to regret big time and I know this..And if it happens, Piya wont be able to forgive herself ever...

Now I am eagerly waiting for the next update..Please update soon :)







Edited by --peehu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
And the Action continues.
That was a nice trick to distract Maithili

It sounded very logical when you mentioned Haseena feeling that Sid was like this because she turned him instead of Chand. And Chand was also right when he said its the choices that matter.

Why did Haseena feel that Piya would give Abhay a hard time. Was it because Piya was not allowed to accompany them. I dont know why, but I do like Luke diverting Piya from her worries than Haseena.

That was a terrific plan of Sid distracting Maithili while Alina and Abhay shipped Kabir and Misha to a safe place. And thoughtful of Abhay to have a car waiting plus food and water for Misha and Kabir.

Misha was so Misha-ish when she asked for Beer and Burger even in this state 😆. And Kabir half expecting Abhay to be fanging out 😆.
It must have been too much of a shock to Kabir to know about Abhay than it was to Misha.

And that was hilarious the way you mentioned Piya watching soap operas and seeing the heroine forcibly dragged out by her husband and also counting the number of tears she shed. After watching the soap opera, Piya would not have had any problem facing Maithili or any other danger. Nothing would harm her mind than this 😆. Hey imagine if Abhay and Piya during their face off times, which is supposed to happen regularly watch such soap opera. Would love to read their convos esp the husband dragging the wife out.

And finally Sid has spoken his mind to Maithili and I guess he would have felt free after a long long time. The feeling of liberation, can anything be more good than that. Maithili must have had the shock of her existence. She has now lost the support of her only ally and now she is imprisoned by a spell. But just like she knew Kerath, does she have some one else to trust. Would we get to know how actually Maithili got these powers which the other vampires dont possess.

Piya was able to get Luke into speaking and she now knows his feelings for Ms.Gupta. Luke now is heartbroken just the way Piya was whenever Abhay denied his feelings towards her. But it was Ms.Gupta who was hard on Luke, then why did he not wait for Abhay and party to return. Could it be that watching Abhay and Piya together would sadden him even more? Now that Piya knows, would she mention it to Alina or Abhay just in case the conversation takes it course towards Luke.

It was good to see a twinge of jealousy (may be not exactly) in Abhay when he sensed Piya talking to Luke. But I guess Abhay wont do it more. It would be fun to watch Abhay getting frustrated for a change when Piya locks her mind from him (not the torture one but something light)

I didnt quite get on what actually happened when they reached the drive way of Raichand mansion.

"Soon enough, they were reaching the driveway of the Raichand house
What was wrong with her? This was her sister, who'd gone through hell. And here she was having horrible urges.
She almost cried in relief when Misha was gently prised away from her. Lifting her gaze, she felt another wave of shame when she caught Abhay's understanding gaze. "

What was Piya thinking that she felt a wave of shame?

I was laughing at Misha's impression on the bed especially the size and the material. Abhay and Piya never got to use that since their wedding.

But why did Abhay or Alina leave Misha to be alone with Piya. I mean Piya is just a new born and she may not have that control with a human around and esp when there is every probability for a human to get hurt in any circumstance.
And it really happened with Misha getting scratched and Piya in a state of losing control.

Please no Shreya, dont let Piya attack Misha. Let her regain control. Whether she harms or if some one else saves Misha, Piya could never come out of the guilt that she actually got to attack Misha. Please let Piya herself hold it back and please let it not be Abhay again who turns out the saviour as always.

And what is behind Alina's calculating smile. Dont think it is casual that things turned out well. She had this smile when she got to know that Abhay turned Piya. Please let Misha not be turned into a vampire.

Now I am really worried about Misha and Piya



Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 47

nice ff. read it in one go today. kindly pm me the updates.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: full2puneri


Would you be able to comment on them ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update loved it u r amazing ..continue soon 👍🏼 thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
chap48:shreya I have created an account in wattpad but im unable to post the comment dere so im posting it here.im lagging behind but still trying to catch up the train.lol
okk coming chap 48,an intense,emotional ,heart touching as well as power packed update.
the whole fight sequence,sid playing his game.alina healing abhay.alina getting natalya help,piya turning into a vampire,abhay guilt,misha wittnessing da whole scene,maithilli defeat,alina getting healed,luke n haseena scenes,piya gaining consciousness,she trying her best to lessen abhay guilt,the trio funny n emotional convo,piya,asking 32 times about abhay in just 20 min contrary to 20 times as predicted by alina,luke getting jealous ahaan,so da wedding took place.the last part was too emotional
zabardast job shreya
Edited by vmpy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update Shreya. I will update my comments in wattpad soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
another mind blowing update dear 👍🏼 👍🏼
oh so abhay & sid fight was fake 👏 👏
that was a nice tricks to distract maithali 👍🏼 👍🏼
sid did a very good job to distract maithali
finally they saved kabir & misha 🤗 🤗
god misha ko iss situation main bhi she want her favorite food 😆 😆
I like luck & pia's friendship 😃 😃
haseena POV was emotional
wow sid gave a good answer to maithali bravo sid 👍🏼 👍🏼
maithali ent toward sid but she couldn't bcoz of alina's spell 😃 😃
but I don't understand why they didn't kill maithali 😕 😕
loll abhay felt jealous of luke & pia's bonding 🤣 🤣
I felt bad for luck that disha refuse him 🥺 🥺
oh no when pia saw misha's blood her fangs came out
hope pia wont hurt misha
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi, I am sorry for not able to comment lately. But I was stuck up with my busy time. And tell u the truth I always read your update 2 to 3 times then I comment but leak of time I missed it. Coming to update what can I say, as always mind blowing and amazing. But this time I also have some questions like others. Why they left methli alive, where they can finish her off. And I want Piya to be strong this time not hurt misha cause if she hurt misha it's gone be disaster for herself. I don't want her week. I hope this time what Sid told to methli that the truth. And I really looking forward for Piya and luck's friend ship. And ha ha ha I don't believe Abhay is jalouse of this friendship. And I hope we get next update soon to clear some confusion. What gone be next I eager to know.

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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