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Chapter 46.

Luke wandered aimlessly around the house. Natalya had gone out for one of her mysterious visits.

Not that he wasn't worried. He knew she was planning something big, soon after her coronation.

Yes, there was definitely something going on...

But Natalya was so evasive. There were bits of her life he knew nothing about.Like a blank hole.She didn't have many friends. She barely ever lost her cool- or her guard.Almost cold, Luke would think sometimes...yet, he knew she wasn't. He'd seen her worried, tense, during Disha's birthday party. Had she said anything to her?


No. He pushed the idea out of his mind immediately. Natalya would never do something as underhanded as that.

Wouldn't she, though? He knew she could. She was far more...diplomatic that he was.Lost in his thoughts, he found himself standing outside her bedroom door.

He hesitated. It felt wrong. But...he wouldn't be harming anything. He would just take a look and find...what?

If Natalya had anything to hide, she would certainly not leave it lying about for him to see.

But...if he could find anything at all...

He walked in, his eyes moving over the four-poster bed, the rich crimson curtains...the book on the floor.He walked over to it and picked it up. A scrap of paper fell out onto the floor.

Keeping the book on the desk, he bent down ...to see a handsome man stare back at him.

The photograph was rendered only in black and white, but the man himself was quite good looking. His hair was slightly longer than his own, and his arms were around a laughing girl.

His eyes widened and he almost dropped the photograph. It was Natalya.


"That's Mikhail," said a soft voice, and the photograph was taken away from him. His head shot up to see Natalya, as expressionless as ever, tucking it back into the book.

Then she turned to face him. "He was my brother."

Luke couldn't think. "Your-" but something she said registered. "Was?"

"He's dead now," Natalya said shortly, her voice sounding raw. "A vampire killed him, then stole his powers. Don't you know about High Wizards and Witches falling prey to such people?"

Luke was speechless. "I'm- I'm sorry. I didn't mean- I - "Her eyes softened. "Your eyes are just like his...Chocolate. And sometimes, you are so much like Mikhail...my Lucas."

She touched his cheek, a rare affectionate gesture, and then turned away from him. Luke knew she wanted him to leave now.

So he turned and walked away to his own room. His own mind still whirling. Natalya had had a brother. And she had laughed with him.

And he'd been killed...

Maithali stared outside the window, lost in thought. Sid had gone off for one of his hunts. He never hunted with her any more. The thought made her feel strangely lonely.

If she were honest with herself, she was feeling lonely a lot over the past few months. Earlier, it had been easy. She hadn't loved him, so it was easy to focus on Abhayendra. See his face in Siddharth's. But now...

Now, it was him. She thought of Abhayendra with regret. Why hadn't she chosen Siddharth instead? She knew he loved her, would always love her. He'd known her worst traits, been turned a human and back to a vampire, but he still hasn't left her side. So what if he'd lied to his brother about her existence? He'd only done it to keep her. Had she not done the same thing to Abhayendra, by cursing him to be frozen, Piya's memories erased?

No, she hated him now. Hated him, because what Siddharth said was right. If he'd cared enough, he would have come back. He would have done something, like Siddharth had.

She'd fallen in love with Siddharth almost without knowing. To the point where his a sense bothered her. She'd come to miss his quick, sarcastic sense of humour. The quirking of his eyebrows. The smirk.

Dear Satan, she was spouting poetry in his praise now.She turned away from the window.

Trust. She trusted him. She trusted him in a way she had never trusted his brother. Because Siddharth would never condemn her, never judge her. And perhaps, that was really the reason why she had fallen in love with him.

Enough drivelling, she told herself. Piya had to be killed. And she would have to devise a way to kill Abhay too. After he finished watching her die.

Yes, that was a comforting thought. He would have no chance against her. No ordinary vampire would.

Two weeks later

Piya smoothed down her bun as she glanced at herself in the mirror. The bun itself was messy, but it would have to do. Misha banged on the door. " Oi! Are you done primping? Bodyguard's here and waaaiting!!!"

Piya rolled her eyes and opened the door. Misha was grinning. "He's in the car," she said. "I told him to wait outside. The amount of looks you two have been giving each other the past few days, it's disgusting. You lot can keep the making out in the car."

"If what we do is disgusting, then what about you and Kabir?" Piya retorted, as she gathered up her files and her bag. "Just because I don't say anything, doesn't mean I like seeing so much of your-"

"Shut up!" Misha hissed, as they descended the stairs. " We aren't half as bad as you two! Why, you two act like you're married or something-"

"Married?" said their father, Arnab Dobriyal, looking up from the newspaper he was reading."Who's getting married?"

Piya shot her sister a glare.

"No one, papa," she said placatingly, kissing him on the cheek, then giving one to her mother, who looked oddly amused. "See you."

She went out, to see Abhay standing, holding her door open wearing a half smirk. "Good morning, madam," he said, ushering her in.

"Abhay, I told you I don't like- "

He nodded, now smiling like the devil as he started the car. "I know," he said, "You're just too much fun to tease."

She tried , and failed, to glare at him, so she settled for a mild frown.God, but she loved him. Whether he was being her angel, or just plain wicked, whether he was teasing her, or standing up for her, everything about him made her heart constrict.

It had been his idea , that she join the Raichands' company. His idea, that she become his secretary - apparently, he hadn't had one for ages, simply because, in his own words, they were supposed to know too many things.

"That's why I'm asking you," he'd said. " So I don't have to worry about that aspect anymore- you already know too much."

And she knew exactly why he was really asking her. So he could keep her under his eye at all times.

She had felt angry, but then she realized he was right. He had been right, and she hated it, but he deserved some peace, she thought. So she'd said yes, with some conditions - that he treat her exactly the same as the rest of the office. As long as she was working.

And she was beginning to regret it. Abhay Raichand, the boss was relentless and barely responsive. He gave her an endless list of things to do, everyday.

And she knew why. She'd caught him staring at her through the glass pane that separated their cubicles; he was wearing a slight smirk, as if he knew exactly what she was thinking. And she wouldn't let him win. She would not give him the satisfaction of asking him to give her less work.

"Piya," said Abhay, breaking her reverie. " We've reached office, you know."

"Oh- right," she said, opening the door.

"What, no goodbye kiss?"

She turned back to him, her lips curved . She leaned over to kiss him on the cheek, but he simply turned his head , capturing her lips in a very brief yet explosive kiss.

He grinned at her flustered face as he pulled away.

"Now, you may leave."

This time, she didn't have any problem glaring at him as she got out, slamming the door behind her.

Without giving him a backward look, she stalked inside the building,discreetly checking her makeup as she internally mulled over the options. Oh, Abhay was going to pay.

Abhay lifted his head, staring in spite of himself, at his lovely secretary. It wasn't just her looks; it was a heady combination of so many things : her doe-eyes, her persistence, her temper-

Right now, Piya was going through the files he'd just given her. Her mouth was pursed in concentration , a pen in her hand.

And then, almost unconsciously, she put a hand to her hair, pulling the clips out , letting the curls cascade to her shoulders.Abhay forced himself to look down at his work, trying in vain to rid himself of the sensual image. He gritted his teeth. He was not a teenager; there was no need to act like one.

For all his noble intentions, he could not help looking up. She was still , blissfully engrossed in her work. As he watched, she turned the page, absentmindedly sucking her pen.

His fists curled with frustration at himself.

He determinedly turned his attention to the work at hand. If he didn't know better, he would have said Piya was bent on seducing him. But she'd been the one who'd made the professional-in-office rule. Surely she wouldn't...

Stop thinking of her and get a grip, he told himself.

A few hours later, he summoned Piya. He wanted her opinion on the blueprints.

Piya entered, hair down and tousled, and suddenly he couldn't look away.

"Sir?" She asked. " You were saying-""Miss Dobriyal," he said coldly, "Please adjust your hair and return."

A small smile played on her face. "As you desire, Sir. Please excuse me for a few minutes."

And when she left, he knew. She was seducing him on purpose. And he was irritated that he'd fallen for it.

Oh, she was no innocent, his Piya- not anymore.



Piya returned, hair perfectly in place, her face a demure mask.Concentrating on work, he stood, and spread it out in front of her.Piya leaned over, as if poring over it and that was when he realized that the top two buttons of her shirt were undone.

"Stop it," he said abruptly. " I'm...sorry,all right? Just stop."

She straightened and faced him, smirking openly now and crossed her arms over her chest. "Stop what?"

Gritting his teeth, he tugged her to him, then deftly did up the buttons. " You know what you are doing. I'm sorry, so please stop it."

"Fine," she replied. "You can make it up to me by dropping me over at Alina's today."

His eyebrows rose. "Why?"

"Girl talk," she snapped, refusing to tell him. " And you are going to stay outside. Serves you right for leaving me like that in the morning-"

He looked heavenwards. " I don't have a choice, do I?"She grinned, shaking her head.

Then, as if nothing had happened, she leaned down, poring over the blueprint again, this time for real.

Alina sipped her tea as she looked at the two designs Dishu was showing her. "Um...the crimson one, it'll go with the cream on the cushions."

"Yeah, you're right," said Dishu. "How's your arm?"

Alina grimaced. "Still a bit sore."

The doorbell rang.

"I'll get it," she said, standing up.

She opened the door to see Piya standing. A black car was parked outside the gate, and Abhay sketched her a grim half salute , before reversing the car and disappearing into the night.

"Don't mind him," said Piya. " He's just throwing a hissy fit because I told him he couldn't hear what I wanted to talk to you about."

Alina grinned. "Come in."

She ushered her in. " Good evening, Miss Gupta," said Piya to the petite woman sitting on the sofa.

Ms Gupta looked up. " Good to see you , Piya. Have you been well?"

"Yes," she answered. "How are you?"

Ms Gupta smiled ever so slightly. "Well enough, dear. Excuse me."

She rose and went inside.

Piya looked confused. "What happened? She looks...upset."

Alina sighed. "It's nothing to do with you," she said. " Dear Dishu loves to talk about everyone's problems but her own. Anyway. What happened?"

" Nothing," said Piya. " I wanted to talk to you about something... I would have asked earlier, but Abhay keeps giving me so much work, and you're busy too..."

"That's okay," said Alina. "You can ask now."

Piya sat down on the sofa. " I understand this is private," she said, " but you're a High Witch? Immortal? And you were made-"

Alina's face had become closed. "Yes. I am somewhat of a hybrid, though. I can use spells as well as anyone, but I can Shift, you know, into my wolf form."

"And...there's no one like you?"

"Not any werewolf that I know of," said Alina. "Natalya is something in between, too. She can use spells, but her magical powers are less than mine. She's way stronger,though..."

Piya swallowed the other questions rising up, and simply asked, "Who turned you?"

Alina gulped her tea, setting it down on the table.

"Someone who was saving my life. I... I can't..."

" I understand," said Piya. "You told me so much...why?"

Alina smiled bitterly. "Piya, sweetheart, you're in the middle of a war. You have the right."

She rubbed her elbow subconsciously.

" Are you hurt?" Said Piya, getting up and moving to her.

"Oh, no," said Alina. "Just a scrape. Maithali was being a bit fiesty, I guess."

"You fought her?" Piya gasped, wide eyed. "Are you crazy? What if-"

"Yes, I did," said Alina. "And it's not crazy. Sometimes you don't have a choice."

Then, very deftly, she changed the topic.

"So, Abhay's keeping you busy, hmm?" She said, smirking.

Piya flushed. "Not you too! It's bad enough having to listen to Misha-"

But Alina could be relentless, and Piya squirmed in her seat for the next half hour, till Abhay rang the doorbell, to pick her up.

Alina grinned as she thankfully walked out. "Putting her through her paces, are you, Raichand?" She said,making him narrow his eyes.

"Piya's been telling me all about you keeping her busy..."

"I haven't!" Piya protested.

Abhay smirked. "Maybe you ought to get some action instead of trying to live vicariously through my lover. I mean, it's sweet you have a crush and all, but I'm kind of taken, so..."

Alina snorted. "Some of us have better things to do. Good night guys."

She closed the door after them and leaned against it, eyes closed.

"Were you really on a hunt?" Piya said curiously, eyeing his immaculate appearance. "You don't look...you know..."

He shrugged. "You don't drop food on your dress every time you eat, do you? After two centuries..." he trailed off.

" It gets neater?" She asked.

"Something like that," he conceded. "You know, it's going to take me a long time to get used to you talking all casually about all this. It's unnerving."

"Yeah well, it took you more than a year to get used to me being in love with you," said Piya. "So I suppose I'll have to stick around for a long time, so you can get used to me...once you turn me, you'll have eternity to get used to my ways."

"I'm not turning you."

His voice was curt. "We've been over this. You are staying human."

"Abhay, I'm not leaving you!" She said crossly. "Why don't you understand? If our places were reversed, what would you have done? Be honest."

Abhay was silent a long time. Then, as they reached the driveway of her house, he said, "I suspect I would have done the same thing."

She saw the sadness in his eyes as he reached to cup her cheek. "Piya, if you knew what you're asking... though I guess you do. It's... I would never want this life...for you."

"Even if you spend years lonely?" She said quietly.

"Eternity," he corrected. "I'm not going to leave you until you want me to...and by then, you'll have spoilt me for anyone else.You already have... Maybe you could come back...reincarnate or something..."

They made their way to the house, holding hands.

"And how will you recognize me when I'm reincarnated?" She asked. "You'd go all Darcy-slash-Heathcliff on me again."

"Well, you'll recognize me, won't you?" He said wryly.

"I'm sure you'll pester me till I recognize you, too."

And then he stiffened.

Piya, who had opened her mouth to reply, stopped and stared. His eyes were closed, his entire body tensed, like a snake about to strike.

And then, a minute later, he opened his eyes and gave a rueful smile."Sorry, Piya," he said.

Then he led her inside. Piya's confusion deepened when she saw the Raichands sitting in the living room with her parents.

She glanced at Abhay, whose face was a mask. What had happened?

"There you are," said Madhu, looking suspiciously elated. "We were just discussing your marriage."



Blood rushed in her ears; Piya stood still. She felt Abhay squeeze her arm and help her to a seat. "My...what?" She said, through numb lips.

"Our marriage," said Abhay placatingly, rubbing her back. "They've been discussing our marriage."


Relief coursed through her, followed swiftly by unease.

"Our marriage?" She said, looking around at them all. Her own voice sounded terribly high-pitched to her own ears. "When?"


"We're still discussing," said Haseena Raichand. "Surely, the two of you are happy about this?"

"I-er-" Piya could not say anything; she wanted to say yes, but she couldn't help thinking, "Vampires don't marry. This is a joke. You can make it easier on him."

"I-my career- I'm not-"

"It would be an honour," said Abhay, from next to her. "That is...if Piya is willing."

She swivelled around to stare at him. Was he mad?


"I'm sorry, can I talk to Abhay alone for a few minutes?" She said coldly.
Without waiting for an answer, she stalked off to the kitchen.

Abhay was right behind her.

"Let me guess," he said quietly. "You're mad because I said yes? You want me to leave you free for someone else? Cheating on me, were you?"


" Don't you dare make a joke out of this!" She hissed. "You told me you couldn't marry me! So why the volte face, huh? Are you taking pity on me?"

He sighed. "No. I'm being selfish. Since I'm going to pay for all this anyway...why not make it worthwhile while I can?"

He took a lock of her hair and twirled it around his finger. He was so close she could see the grey flecks in his blue eyes. "I want to keep you near myself for as long as I can, because I can't bear to be away from you."


She swallowed, and he stepped backwards.
"So, will you marry me?" He said, smiling . "Or do I have to bend on one knee? I don't have a ring, but you wear my necklace, so that should count for something, right?"

She blinked back sudden tears, burying her face in his chest. His arms came around her, and he kissed the top of her head. "I'll take that as a yes then," he murmured. "Come on, tiger. Better discuss the details with the parents."








Alina pressed her face to the cool glass of the window, seeing a scene slightly blurred.

"Mother," said Alina, "This is wrong and you know it. Abhay Raichand had no choice. Should we not focus on why he attached the vampires without provocation?"


Dipannita turned to her daughter, hatred in her face. "Useless, worthless piece of scum," she hissed. "You traitor!"


She flinched as she remembered the blinding, burning pain, making her choke on a sob, putting her hands to her face, which only increased the pain.


She soon lost sense of everything but the pain, in which her skin burned as if she was being electrocuted, a thousand knives tearing her from the inside out.


She knew nothing, until the pain began to abate. She was thankful for the mercy, but soon entered the darkness.




When she came to, many hours later, she felt an overwhelming softness. The pain was gone completely, yet the fear remained.

" There you are," said an unfamiliar female voice. "How are you?"

Alina forced her eyes open. A strange woman was standing in front of her, dressed entirely in black-black pants and a black shirt. Her hair was neither too short, nor too long- it fell to her shoulders like a silky curtain.
She was not beautiful, but Alina could not take her eyes off her; in that moment, she felt sure that this was what angels looked like. Except for the sadness in her eyes.


She opened her mouth to speak, but a cough wracked her.
The woman pressed a glass of water gently to her lips.

Taking two gulps, Alina said, "Who-what-I-"

Her voice sounded hoarse to her own ears.

"Shh, little wolf," said the woman. "You will not be hurt anymore. What is your name?"

Alina looked at the woman. Somehow, she trusted her. "Alina Reina Khurana," she said softly. "How...who are you? Are you...a vampire?"

The woman smiled slightly. "One who would help."

Alina opened her mouth to speak, but the woman said, "Pardon me-but your mother-she tortured you too badly. I was forced to turn you into a High Witch."

Alina's eyes grew wide. "You...will experience a power surge in the next few months. Becoming one of the High folk is a long process. I'd advise not picking any battles with the Luna anytime soon."

Alina's head was spinning.

The woman held out a tray of food in front of her. "Eat," she said, not unkindly. "I will leave you in peace for a while."

And Alina ate.






When she came back, her saviour cleared away the dishes. "Pardon me for taking the liberty," she said, "But I had to look through your memories. You were correct in your assessment that Abhay Raichand was not in the wrong. Your brother allied himself with another vampire."


Alina stared.

"Abhay Raichand's older brother. His greatest enemy. He was killed ."

She held out a photograph of the vampire. And Alina sucked in a breath as she recognized the man.

"Let me tell you the events as they happened... Alina Reina Khurana."


And as Alina listened, she promised herself she would achieve her vengeance. "Why?" she asked the woman. "Why are you doing all this for me? Don't you want something from me?"

The woman had smiled, but sadly. "No, Alina. I don't want anything from you. But it's been a long time since I've seen a survivor, and you...you are a survivor."




"Alina. Alina!"


She started. Dishu was poking her shoulder. "It's time to do your arm."

Alina rolled her eyes. "I told you yesterday. It's nothing."


"Don't be idiotic," said Dishu briskly. "Here, sit down."

Alina sat. "Yes, Mum. When are you going to see to yourself? It's always me.My problems, my heartache- don't think you can fool me into thinking you don't need to talk to him-"

That earned her a grin. "With you by my side, what else do I need?"




Her bandaging done, Alina lay in her bed, trying not to think of Sid. He's caught a glimpse of the wound, and he'd cornered her as she was trying to get into her car.

"Alina, let me see your wound," he'd said, sounding absurdly concerned...worried, almost. "I can heal it, let me-"

She'd yanked her hand from him. "If my injuries could be healed by vampires, I would have asked your mother or your brother," she'd told him icily. "As it happens, I have to slug it out the natural way, so save your fake chivalry for someone who cares."


She'd felt so shocked when she'd seen Sid's photograph, heard the whole sordid tale. At the end of it, she wanted to kill both of them with her bare hands. Make them pay.

In the end, inspite of all the warnings, all the coaxings, she'd decided to take up a job in his office. To find out his plan. And she'd ended up falling in love with him.

What a mess up!

She laughed to herself softly in the silent darkness. But then, she'd been messed up since birth, hadn't she?
Bringing baby unicorns to recuperate at five,trying to strike up conversations with the vampire she'd met in the woods once, back chatting to the pack in her teens...sympathizing with the witches... And so here she was, a wolf who was a High Witch, the Luna of her pack,in love with a vampire who had died and resurrected as a human, then turned back into a vampire! Oh, not forgetting the part where he chose his vampire lover who'd toyed with his feelings in his human life.


And then there was her life's mission : take away everything her enemies valued most. Because Alina knew what it was, losing someone who she'd loved more than anything or anyone. She knew what it was to stare at a loved one's corpse, wishing it was her. And she would make them feel it. By God, she would. She would make them go through the same pain that she herself had felt.

Thankfully, Abhay had taken Piya's security is his hands, and he never let her out of his sight. So that was one less thing to worry about- only, Maithali was going for Abhay now.




Maithali smiled as she saw Sid appear through the doorway. He smiled back, too, and then he took a closer look at her face and his eyes widened in shock.

"Princess!"

Maithali's smile faded as she touched the ugly mark on her cheek. "Does it bother you very much?" She asked, feeling strangely fluttery.

He came closer and touched the bruise, which did not fade. "Of course not," he responded brusquely. "Do you really think so low of me?"


She shook her head, feeling the smile come back. "Of course not," she replied.

"Why won't it fade?" Said Siddharth as he stroked her cheek.

"Because it was the doing of a High Witch," said Maithali, rising to her feet and pacing the room. "She's making everything so damned difficult! And-"


"What?" Siddharth sounded shocked. "Why were you picking battles with one? Any pure bred one can be more powerful than you! Maithali, I must-"

"Siddharth, I didn't go around picking fights!" She answered, frustrated. "She's protecting that girl- Piya- for some reason. And she's not... she's different, Siddharth. I could see her strength and she moved as fast as I did! High Witches aren't supposed to be that strong! Like us! And... I know her. I have seen her somewhere, I know it... I can't remember!"


Sid 's eyebrows drew together. A High Witch, protecting Piya?
And... he suddenly remembered. Alina, outside his office, a bruise on her arm...that she had said vampires couldn't heal. Coincidence... or not?


He went to Maithali and kissed her.






Abhay looked down at Piya, lying down on the bed. She would be his wife in a month. A pang of guilt shot through him, for the happiness that had filled him. But he would have to. He would use any opportunity to keep her close to him. He couldn't risk another attack...not on the girl who'd smashed her way into every cell in his body with all the force of a battering ram. The one who was his soul.



"Hey."
Piya blinked sleepily at him. "Having second thoughts, Abhay?" She said, her voice heavy with sleep. He smiled at her, and leaned over to press a chaste kiss on her forehead. "Never. Now go out sleep."

"Abhay...the reports..." she yawned. "I...couldn't finish..."

"Tomorrow, Piya," he said with the gentle patience that she associated with him. "Sleep."


Her eyes closed and she snuggled up to him, her breathing regular and easy.

But Abhay's eyes stayed open, looking up at the ceiling and wishing to God his gut feeling was wrong. Because it was telling him that time was running out.



PS. So...which character of Time and Again do you feel you are most like? 😆 Comment please.


Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok So finally you revealed that Alina is Reina, or have you? One never knows with you.😆

Well its just a guess but was Alina in love with Michael by any chance? and was he killed off by Maithili?
Edited by ..Bournville.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...loved it a lot...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update

abhay-pia's wedding had been fixed...this was a shocker but a pleasant surprise.

i liked the light moments b/w abhiya coz normally they do have something to worry about. anyway but i still feel abhay agreeing to wed pia do have some twist .he is hiding something that's for sure.

maithili has fallen in luv with sid but i doubt if he really loves her now coz he does have a soft corner for alina but still she can't let go off the grudge she is holding in her heart for abhay and pia and that i guess would bring her downfall.

deepanita ucks big time as mother but who was the person who saved alina and turned her...is it natalya and did deepanita had some hand in killing her brother?

love dishu and alina's bonding..they both are always there for each other.true friendship.

loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whoa Shreya !!!,

This update really came as a surprise. With your last exam on July 20th, I was hardly expecting one. But who is complaining. What more can I ask for.

Coming to Vampire Lestat, he is one of the most important characters of Vampire Chronicles. If you have not read it then please dont even bother to go near it. I would never want to recommend. And if at all you happen to read it, please please dont try to hit me for comparing Sid with Lestat. There is no comparison. Its just that you start to think Lestat is all good and greyish and suddenly he shows an other side that keeps one wondering what is he all about?
The first part of the chronicles - Interview with Vampire (Movie starring Tom Cruise as Vampire lestat and Brad Pitt as Vampire Louis did have some shades of Sid and Abhay. But Sid and Abhay are far more superior.

And your other line also cracked me up


"It was also very thoughtful of Abhay to have some clothes for Piya. For some or other reason, he always seem to ask Haseena's help and now Piya would only be frequenting his place more.
Oh I do love Abhay a lot for everything.
well he cant ask chand's help now can he😆"

When I was reading your reply I was imagining this scene of Abhay asking for Chand's help and I simply could not help ROFLing 🤣
Your sense of humor is way to great while replying to my not so intelligent (actually dumb questions) Just Imagine Chand's reaction if Abhay talks about Piya's clothes 🤣 🤣 🤣

Coming to the comments for this update, I will use the next box as this has already become long

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Coming to the current update :-

So Natalya created Luke, isnt it. Was it long ago? And what exactly is their relation - I mean Like the Raichands who not only pose as a family to outsiders but also feel like one.

So is Luke and Natalya dont live among humans, so is he like a protege or something like that. Now he does remind her of her brother, so does she treat him like a younger brother, the way Haseena treats Abhay as her son?

Coming to sharing her past with Luke, I guess even Chand or Haseena would not have disclosed to Abhay about their pre vampire lives.

So a vampire killed her brother and took his powers. Could that vampire be Maithili. But was this even before she became a vampire, The vampire who turned her was killed , I guess with the help of Abhay , right.

Finally Maithili started to have real feelings for Siddharth She now things Abhay was a wrong choice. But still she has that love for him which is now replaced with such bitterness that she really wants to do away with him after enjoying the sadistic pleasure of his agony witnessing Piya's death. Oh Why Maithili, why. I thought its Siddarth who made her wayward because she was good when she was human. Is this the thirst for power which she might have acquired, made her this ruthless.

And then come our beloved Abhiya - Oh my !!! did Abhay really ask for a kiss and he even made it a liplock 😲 😲 😲 😆 and she gave him tit for tat.

Alina had a fight with Maithili - is this because of Kerath's attack on Piya. Why did she have to go alone?

I felt sad at Abhay's pain of not wanting to turn her. How could he take the life out of her. And poor him - he now believes his love would bring her back to him. Oh Shreya, please please you said you are not sure if they will grow old together. But atleast make yourself sure that they will be together for many years if not for eternity.

And then the biggest shock - Raichands and Dobrials discussing Abhiya's marriage. I mean like now everyone around would have known that Abhay and Piya are really serious about their relation and Dobrials would want their daughter to get settled well

(Arnab ka memory kisine wipe kiya kya 😆 . I mean not that here, you said he had a doubt of their being a vampire, but he never had Raichands in his good books. May be he is changed because Abhay saved Piya a lot of times and had won his confidence. But I am happy. Dont want the nosy Arnab. He is good the way you are showing him)

But how could the Raichand's agree for an alliance with a human - A Vampire Human marriage. Abhay wanting to marry Piya makes sense because he cannot afford to have her away from his sight after all the attempts on her life and marriage might be the only solution to keep her with him always. Haseena always wanted Abhay and Piya together and perhaps convinced herself that this is the best way. But how could Chand agree to this. I mean is he not answerable to the vampire council for having a human in their midst.

Still I dont want to complain. Because this is what I had always been imagining - the reason for Abhiya marriage and I am so so so thankful to you to bring it this way. Like I said before, you write a step by step improvement in their relation so amazingly.
The subsequent conversation of Abhay and Piya on their marriage - I would have read it 10-15-20 times and would read it even many more times. I always wanted it this way. Thank you so much once again.


Coming to Alina's flashbacks - so she was still a werewolf a couple of years back, when Abhay killed Gaurav to save his parents.

And is the lady in Black Natalya? But why did she want to turn her into a high witch just for the reason Dipannita tortures her. And what exactly is Alina's past that Dipannita so cruelly offered her when she was at a tender age of fifteen or so. It was a vampire who had killed Natalya's brother and another vampire who turned her and separated her from her father. But then why chose Alina who is a daughter of a Luna wolf?
What is Alina's past with Siddharth. Doesnt she remember him as one who saved her from her mother's punishment. Or is there more to Siddharth , when she saw his photograph? But Siddharth does not remember anything about Alina except that he is aware that he once saved her.

I am sorry, but I am totally confused now about Alina's past, whom did she lose and in what way Maithili or Siddharth were responsible for that. If it was Natalya's brother whom Alina loved, then Alina is very young, right. I mean Natalya is like an elder vampire - many years old and she had a brother who died while he and she or he was still human. Then how could Alina have loved Natalya's brother?

Coming back to Abhay -

But Abhay's eyes stayed open, looking up at the ceiling and wishing to God his gut feeling was wrong. Because it was telling him that time was running out.

Why does he feel that time is running out? I mean is it the general fear of losing Piya as she is still a human and cant be with him for ever. Or is there some other danger he is sensing ?

Why is Alina's full name Alina Reina ? Now please dont kill me for this question

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Its really tough to say which character I like most. You have retained the characters as is from the show all except Alina.

Even in the show, it was not just Abhiya, I like Misha, Kabir, Siddharth, Chandeena, Maithili. You not only showed them as they are but you are showing them in an improved light tying all the loose ends we had in the show.

Now Alina, Disha Gupta, Natalya, Luke I mean its really tough to say whom I like best. I like all of them in their own way I mean the way you put them.

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Ohk , yipeee abhiya getting married or well due to marry in a month . It is the biggest breaking news of the month for me 😉😆 . plus i got this news on my birthday , this news made my day all more special .
What is with the last question ??😆 I think i resemble with misha the most .
i sincerely hope sadu raichand ki gut feeling wrong ho .
I am helpless in calculating - in which dimension u r going to steer the storyline but can only wait for the next chappy .
Wow finally maithali found herself deeply falling in love with sid after spending 200 onerous years of her immortal life with him
Wait... how did chand and haseena agreed for this marriage 😲 .


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Ok So finally you revealed that Alina is Reina, or have you? One never knows with you.😆


Well its just a guess but was Alina in love with Michael by any chance? and was he killed off by Maithili?


You are correct on one count and that is what determines the story. I won't say any more.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update dear...loved it a lot...😳


Thank you so much

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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