FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 40

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

So here I am finally with my comments 😉 So sorry for not commenting before My memory is hopeless. I am yet to figure out where n all I need to unres my comments

So coming to the story, u have kept the mystery quotient intact and I wonder will you ever unravel them and give a rest to my poor brain? 😆

Mysteries start unravelling with next update. I can only hope you will miss it when it gets over😆

Kerath was hired by Metz to kill Pia then? Loved the way Pia did not give up and her training did come to good use 😃 So everything happens for a reason n this is proof enough 👍🏼 The fight was described beautifully. I know Pia alone wouldn't have stood a chance against a vampire but I am so happy she did not give up and fought back as much as she could ⭐️

Yes. After everything she deserves a chance to fight now right

Isn't Alina some sort of a hybrid with magical powers? Couldn she heal Pia or did she leave that part deliberately to Abhay? 🤣 I loved the way Pia held onto her faith in Abhay n that was what gave her the strength to hold onto life. I am glad Kerath got his due 🤢

I loved Abhiya in this update ❤️ The way Abhay controlled his vampiric instincts and healed Pia was written beautifully and a thumbs up from me 👍🏼 Loved it thoroughly 👏 And also loved it when he called her a disobedient brat 😆 and she is defo suicidal, agree with Abhay there 😛 And their love making was certainly hawt ☺️ Glad u gave the warning though 😛 Abhay loves her so much and though he wants nothing more than to be with her forever he knows its not possible as Pia being a human will die one day whereas he will go on to live another hundred or so years He is defo not happy to be a vampire and for Pia nothing is more important than being with Abhay, be it in any form. She is willing to turn but Abhay is unrelenting but will he turn her? 😕 Waiting to know that.

Haseena is one sharp woman 😎 Good of her to get his room soundproofed 😆

yes. Alina could have but she let Abhay do it😛lets see if he turns her or not😛maybe ill turn him human😃😆

yeah haseena is smart😉 She is Sid's mother you know😆

Now Sid - he is the biggest conundrum in ur FF but I have a gut feeling he did that deliberately n I am glad he lashed out at Metz 😡 He is not a puppet n it took her long enough to notice that one day his patience would wear out 😡

Uh huh. let's see. He should be pretty clear. She certainly doesnt see him as a puppet now😆

Haseena has surely passed on some wisdom to her son 😆 Good he has a wardrobe for her given that Pia will be in dire need of it every now n then 🤣 Or maybe permanently 😛

I loved Sid Alina moment and can we have more of them please? 😳 They r my fav couple here 😃 I loved Sid's cockiness when he replied that he n Abhay may really have many things in common 😆 And I sorta like Dishu here. She is so mature, so protective but knows when to give Alina her space 😊 Alina loves n hates Sid at the same time n I so love this equation between them 😳

Piya'll be needing that wardrobe oftener than you think😉 I am loving Sid with both Metz and Alina so right now both will get their dues...then he'll make his choice- or will show it, anyway- and we'll end up with that couple. Dishu's always been like that...the real one I mean😆

I loved the last scene and I was laughing reading that 🤣 Misha cussing out that even whil T passed she failed but it turns out she is the second topper 😲 OMG that was hilarious 😆 I guess Misha being the responsible one while Panchi died and Pia disappeared into the past paid off. The last scene was poignant and though it was something u get to see on a normal day in any happy family, it was symbolic and does it mean Pia might as well be enjoying the last few of her moments with her family? If Abhay is her future she can never be with them but yet she was always destined to be with him 😊

Fab update Shreya 👏 and I missed commenting on this one. Will try n be regular.

Yeah actually my reason to show that is tomboys can be smart too...and Misha has grown up. I mean, I've been working for this for a while...and about that guess, well we'll see, won't we😉

Yeah keep coming😆

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Wow pia fought back Kerath. That was good. and what is Sid upto?

Hmm.. Abhay is in 2 state of minds. I wonder what will change him

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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sorry for the late reply.

Superbb update Shreya. Im glad Piya fought as much as she could though she was badly wounded.👏 the whole Abhay healing Piya and then finally making love part was very beautifully written and didn even look mature to me. it was ☺️ ❤️

didnt look mature😲dear god, you're a hard woman to please.😆 but then, you did write that one in BD...😉😉😉

loved how Abhay resisted her blood, healed her and finally gave into the desire and the moment. finally. and I hope Abhay will change her decisions of not marrying Piya. he has to 😆 i have faith on Piya, she can change his mine. Entire Abhay Piya moments including their morning after and everything was so romantic. not mushy but very romantic just like i love and you did a very good job i mus say.

I hate mushy so avoided it as much as possible...thank god..thank you😛 i doubt piya will change his mind, maybe someone else will or maybe not?😉as for marriage...ahh..interesting u should say that😆

and headless corpse.. did Alina kill him? and now metz will be extra careful I suppose.. not a good news.

I like Sid Alina here and i didn like Sid attitude towards Dishu one bit 🥱 but im glad dishu gave it back to him.

last part was very funny.. but im more worried about abhay piyas future.

no Abhay killed and decapitated him..you forgot😆oh she will for sure. dishu actually didnt say anything, it was alina who shut the door in his face😆 dont worry, they are obviously in each other's future😛

P.s: haseena making he room soundproof was 🤣

hehe. thanks for the comment😃

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Dear Shreya,

Thank you so much for the update.

Its really nice that Piya showed great courage facing Kerath a sure death.

It felt really good to read instead of the routine "Please mujhe chod do" Not that you ever write that way.

She had the presence of mind to use the dagger (just like she attacked Sid in the show with her chain) and also she remembers Abhayendra's instructions. She did really ward off Kerath for some time before it was too late for Abhay or Alina to save her.

Yeah. I hate the chod do routine and I hate damsels in distress so...

And it was really thoughtful of Alina to use her spell to heal her broken wrist. Wish Alina would be more careful about Sid now. Abhay always knew Sid is danger to Piya.

Abhay then heals her and then and then they become one. How much he would have feared of losing her and he almost lost her. I can understand how much he would want to have her, to keep her with him under his protective glance always.

I could really feel Abhay's pain when he realizes that he cannot make her his for ever. He is allowed only few moments of like these.

And Piya does not even want to think about it at the moment and want to live the moment. Oh Shreya, hope they really get to know that they would spend time with each other much before the end of the FF. (ofcourse not like having someone to grow old with) but if not for eternity atleast for some good number of years.

Want to see them lost in love without worry of any kind.

She is careful enough for now...but there r some things in ur past u cant escape from😛

They will spend a lot of time- the FF is about them only na? I'm not sure if they'll grow old together though.

And oops- I can't do lost in love things...not with Abhay and Piya. They're too ...Idk, controversial is the word i guess.

The way you write a step by step improvement in their relation is really awesome. As if something triggers the next level.

It was also very thoughtful of Abhay to have some clothes for Piya. For some or other reason, he always seem to ask Haseena's help and now Piya would only be frequenting his place more.

Oh I do love Abhay a lot for everything.

thank you, that's a huge compliment. i guess its because i know the next bit of the story in my head. well he cant ask chand's help now can he😆

And coming to Siddharth, why do I feel, that he did not want Piya to get killed. Obviously he could not displease Maithili when she sent Kerath to kill her. But at the same time, he did leave a warning to Abhay. But then was that a warning or was he just like that teasing Abhay.

And he had the nerve to go and visit Alina. I dont know but Sid reminds me of Vampire Lestat . Please please dont hit me. As Sid's motive is still not unfolded, there cannot raise a question of any kind of comparison.

Lets see. He's getting to you, isnt he? *rubs hands gleefully*
Er. I dont know who is vampire Lestat. Which book? Wht's he like?

Wish Alina realizes that she cannot trust Sid any more and does not experiment with Piya again concerning Sid.

Now that Alina mentioned that sending Piya to the past had helped in Piya improving on her defenses.

Now that Abhay and Piya became one, is Reina's mission accomplished.

Is Alina done with Piya regarding Sid? Because there is nothing more she can do when it comes to Abhay now that Abhay is aware of Piyali's identity.

So what next for Alina/Reina? Will Reina confront Maithili again?

Alina never trusted Sid. even though she fell in love but she couldnt/

Reina's misson accomplished? Oh, no. Not yet.

Yes there is and she is not here just for Abhay and Piya as nice as that sounds.😳

And coming the results part, why am I so bothered about Misha getting 2nd rank. And I am breaking my head for feeling bothered about it. No no, its not definitely that Piya got 4th while Misha got 2nd. Infact of all that Piya underwent, she giving the exams itself is a big thing. Its not as if Misha is dumb. Misha was always smart. But an A grade and 2nd rank are two different things. Dont even bother to reply to this.

But Abhay allowed himself to come first. I thought, he was to keep a low profile when it came to studies or sports. He cannot afford to have his name on the top as it might be a challenge to erase it later.

I know a lot of people are surprised. But see people change and grow with time and circumstances and that's what I wanted to show. That tomboys can be toppers too.

And as for Piya, she is a scholarship student so otherwise she would have given tough competition to Abhay but with everything she cant concentrate. not humanly possible. so 4th. Abhay is not an uncommon name and the Raichands will change their surname in different city when they move. Erase kyun kare? he will hardly go to the same college again😳

Please do take your own time Shreya for the next update and All the very very very best for your exams. I am sure you will do very well.

Thanks- I have one left.

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

brilliant update...I could imagine all the scenes as if it was real...😳

Originally posted by: vmpy

shreya dhamakedar update.
at start piya fighting fr her life
alina fixing her fractured bone
abhay taking her to his place
then abhay n piya hot romance
misha second oye great
a v well written update.
all da best fr exames shreya
thanx fr pm.

Originally posted by: sukugeny

Sorry For late Shreya.

That was Marvellous ,Amazing,Hott n last cute update.really enjjoyed reading.u r all rounder now in ur writing from fight scenes to emotional to romantic n cute n those dailogs.even reporter too.u should really publish ur book yr.Great Update.
Wondering for Abhiya future...will pia turn or like Our pkyek..u will make abhay human...Waiting..bt vo...!!

Till at the end wht will happen to metz?i think sid alina will be together na...wish ye FF ka book 4 bhi nikle...again human to vampire ..aww gosh miss DFL PKYEK.waiting for nxt update.Dont want this FF to end..its my one of the most fav.from forum.

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