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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update


abhay-pia's wedding had been fixed...this was a shocker but a pleasant surprise.

i liked the light moments b/w abhiya coz normally they do have something to worry about. anyway but i still feel abhay agreeing to wed pia do have some twist .he is hiding something that's for sure.

maithili has fallen in luv with sid but i doubt if he really loves her now coz he does have a soft corner for alina but still she can't let go off the grudge she is holding in her heart for abhay and pia and that i guess would bring her downfall.

deepanita ucks big time as mother but who was the person who saved alina and turned her...is it natalya and did deepanita had some hand in killing her brother?

love dishu and alina's bonding..they both are always there for each other.true friendship.

loved it



Thank you Megha. As always, amazing insight into the characters.
Who saved Alina...yes, that is rather important. So I won't be revealing that just now.
No, Dipannita didn't do anything to kill her brother.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

Ohk , yipeee abhiya getting married or well due to marry in a month . It is the biggest breaking news of the month for me 😉😆 . plus i got this news on my birthday , this news made my day all more special .

What is with the last question ??😆 I think i resemble with misha the most .
i sincerely hope sadu raichand ki gut feeling wrong ho .
I am helpless in calculating - in which dimension u r going to steer the storyline but can only wait for the next chappy .
Wow finally maithali found herself deeply falling in love with sid after spending 200 onerous years of her immortal life with him
Wait... how did chand and haseena agreed for this marriage 😲 .



Oh I didnt know it was your birthday. happy belated birthday dear.

I love Misha. Thanks for answering😃 Naah his gut feeling is right😉
I hope you hang around for the next chapter, it's going to be interesting, if nothing else.
And yes, how Chand and Haseena agreed will be answered next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Its really tough to say which character I like most. You have retained the characters as is from the show all except Alina.


Even in the show, it was not just Abhiya, I like Misha, Kabir, Siddharth, Chandeena, Maithili. You not only showed them as they are but you are showing them in an improved light tying all the loose ends we had in the show.

Now Alina, Disha Gupta, Natalya, Luke I mean its really tough to say whom I like best. I like all of them in their own way I mean the way you put them.


I meant to ask which character you feel you are most like😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Coming to the current update :-


So Natalya created Luke, isnt it. Was it long ago? And what exactly is their relation - I mean Like the Raichands who not only pose as a family to outsiders but also feel like one.


No they are not like the Raichands. They are just different. Not every relationship has to be clearly defined. Natalya and Luke care for each other a lot.


So is Luke and Natalya dont live among humans, so is he like a protege or something like that. Now he does remind her of her brother, so does she treat him like a younger brother, the way Haseena treats Abhay as her son?


Difficult to say, really. She's much , much more reserved than Haseena.



Coming to sharing her past with Luke, I guess even Chand or Haseena would not have disclosed to Abhay about their pre vampire lives.

So a vampire killed her brother and took his powers. Could that vampire be Maithili. But was this even before she became a vampire, The vampire who turned her was killed , I guess with the help of Abhay , right.


  • Interesting question, there. No, Natalya was turned before her brother was killed. Lots of details, which will be revealed in a while.😃



Finally Maithili started to have real feelings for Siddharth She now things Abhay was a wrong choice. But still she has that love for him which is now replaced with such bitterness that she really wants to do away with him after enjoying the sadistic pleasure of his agony witnessing Piya's death. Oh Why Maithili, why. I thought its Siddarth who made her wayward because she was good when she was human. Is this the thirst for power which she might have acquired, made her this ruthless.




Well, what do you expect? That is the kind of person she has become. She loves Siddharth and hates Abhay.




And then come our beloved Abhiya - Oh my !!! did Abhay really ask for a kiss and he even made it a liplock 😲 😲 😲 😆 and she gave him tit for tat.




Yes he did and yes she did😆

Alina had a fight with Maithili - is this because of Kerath's attack on Piya. Why did she have to go alone?


Ah, but did she go alone? Don't assume too much😉


I felt sad at Abhay's pain of not wanting to turn her. How could he take the life out of her. And poor him - he now believes his love would bring her back to him. Oh Shreya, please please you said you are not sure if they will grow old together. But atleast make yourself sure that they will be together for many years if not for eternity.


Perhaps is all i can say.

And then the biggest shock - Raichands and Dobrials discussing Abhiya's marriage. I mean like now everyone around would have known that Abhay and Piya are really serious about their relation and Dobrials would want their daughter to get settled well

(Arnab ka memory kisine wipe kiya kya 😆 . I mean not that here, you said he had a doubt of their being a vampire, but he never had Raichands in his good books. May be he is changed because Abhay saved Piya a lot of times and had won his confidence. But I am happy. Dont want the nosy Arnab. He is good the way you are showing him)

But how could the Raichand's agree for an alliance with a human - A Vampire Human marriage. Abhay wanting to marry Piya makes sense because he cannot afford to have her away from his sight after all the attempts on her life and marriage might be the only solution to keep her with him always. Haseena always wanted Abhay and Piya together and perhaps convinced herself that this is the best way. But how could Chand agree to this. I mean is he not answerable to the vampire council for having a human in their midst.



Arnab has seen them together and surely he would want his daughter happy and settled. Though i have a feeling Madhu is more behind this.

Maybe Chand suggested the idea😆as for vampire council, did I not mention that it is Natalya who is going to be heading it? Whose- son, for lack of a better word- is on very good terms with Abhay? I doubt the council's a problem.😆




Still I dont want to complain. Because this is what I had always been imagining - the reason for Abhiya marriage and I am so so so thankful to you to bring it this way. Like I said before, you write a step by step improvement in their relation so amazingly.
The subsequent conversation of Abhay and Piya on their marriage - I would have read it 10-15-20 times and would read it even many more times. I always wanted it this way. Thank you so much once again.


Coming to Alina's flashbacks - so she was still a werewolf a couple of years back, when Abhay killed Gaurav to save his parents.

And is the lady in Black Natalya? But why did she want to turn her into a high witch just for the reason Dipannita tortures her. And what exactly is Alina's past that Dipannita so cruelly offered her when she was at a tender age of fifteen or so. It was a vampire who had killed Natalya's brother and another vampire who turned her and separated her from her father. But then why chose Alina who is a daughter of a Luna wolf?
What is Alina's past with Siddharth. Doesnt she remember him as one who saved her from her mother's punishment. Or is there more to Siddharth , when she saw his photograph? But Siddharth does not remember anything about Alina except that he is aware that he once saved her.




Yes. I probably did not write it clearly, but Dipannita would have killed Alina. As for Alina's past, it's still unravelling, but not all at once. as for the woman- I am surprised you didn't think of Haseena. Although, black is by no means a sure shot method of saying it's a vampire. I wear black myself at times.
As for choosing- the woman told Alina why, remember? Because she saw a survivor.

Yes Alina does remember him and that is why she recognized his photograph. That is also why she hates him now. Siddharth does remember the incident but chooses not to needle her over it.


I am sorry, but I am totally confused now about Alina's past, whom did she lose and in what way Maithili or Siddharth were responsible for that. If it was Natalya's brother whom Alina loved, then Alina is very young, right. I mean Natalya is like an elder vampire - many years old and she had a brother who died while he and she or he was still human. Then how could Alina have loved Natalya's brother?



You are confusing yourself. Alina's brother died thanks to Maithali and Siddharth. Why are you so quick to assume that Alina would have loved Natalya's brother? Not everything is done for romantic love. For Alina, who had always been alienated by everyone, her brother Gaurav's affection meant a lot to her and then he died. Should that not be enough motive for revenge?


Coming back to Abhay -

But Abhay's eyes stayed open, looking up at the ceiling and wishing to God his gut feeling was wrong. Because it was telling him that time was running out.

Why does he feel that time is running out? I mean is it the general fear of losing Piya as she is still a human and cant be with him for ever. Or is there some other danger he is sensing ?


His intuition is telling him right now I guess. Time is running out now but for what?




Why is Alina's full name Alina Reina ? Now please dont kill me for this question


Why shouldn't it be? answer me this one first.😆😆😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update shreya ...
oh natalya brother was killed by a vampire for his powers nd maithli is a vampire with xtra powers dan other vampires ... hmn is maithali killed mikhail ?
finally maithali falls in love with sid but what abt sid is he in love wih her only ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice update shreya ...

oh natalya brother was killed by a vampire for his powers nd maithli is a vampire with xtra powers dan other vampires ... hmn is maithali killed mikhail ?
finally maithali falls in love with sid but what abt sid is he in love wih her only ...


Very good questions. You will get some of your answers real soon especially about Sid😳 thanks for commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi.

I have never said much about this, but it seems that finally, I have to say something.
I have never actually said I would stop writing/updating this FF. Because other than the fact that its closest to my heart, I believed- most foolishly- that having 15-20 comments would be enough- more than enough for me to keep going. Never mind that the number itself is less than half of what it used to be. I have updated in the middle of my exams when I could simply keep a bank of updates and update it all together, and this is out of consideration for the people who might be reading and would find it difficult.

But seriously 6-7 comments a chapter? That's a horrible response. And deeply disheartening. I do not know why. Perhaps a lot of you have moved on, maybe you feel this is not worth your time, maybe the story is boring now that the leads are together, or maybe my writing skills have gone down drastically. I don't know because none of you have bothered to tell me. I would have felt better if some of you would have said, Ok I am not liking the story anymore so don't pm me. Well, anyway...



So the next update i.e. Chapter 47 will be the last one that will be posted on IF till the FF gets over. I will either keep my updates to myself or shift to a site in which I will only let people who actually read my stuff in. So for all intents and purposes, Chapter 47 will be the last chapter in IF till I finish the story- about 10 chapters are left- in some other portal. I am sorry if I have offended anyone, but there is only so much I can take.
Chapter 47 will be uploaded just as soon as I can finish it. So you lot can be relieved of any more PMs after that for about a year. Congratulations and thank you.

To the few people who bothered to comment- thank you for your time. I will PM you the updates when I can.


PS. Please do not think this is a decision taken in haste hence I can be swayed easily. I do not take decisions in haste nor do I change them quickly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
shreya zabardast update ,loved it,alina???n abhay n piya ki shadi n reports?wow amazing n thrilling,alina n sid b close agaye kafi.
Because it was telling him that time was running out.

this line ne meri curiosity aur b ziada bhada di.eagerly waiting fr next one
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Posted: 11 years ago


Its a disheartening fan fiction I had ever read. I don't felt a connection to the characters u described on your ff since so long. I numerously read the updates but can't felt a simple connection. Dragging a story since so long its not a good idea and now its proving to u. People really gets bored as well as reading the same thing again and again looks like a old wine in an new bottle. In India forums people like to read short story but with innovative ideas but some writers love to make it like long, boring stuffed book with nothing good in it. Maybe u should change your writing skills and try to improve to be a little better. I noticed u put a cooma in every two three words in a long line and probably u pen down short lines but its confuses the mind of reader as well as confused the story so much


It was only my opinion, if it look criticism than its your problem. A writer always faces criticism and u know that.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pkyek.rocks



Its a disheartening fan fiction I had ever read. I don't felt a connection to the characters u described on your ff since so long. I numerously read the updates but can't felt a simple connection. Dragging a story since so long its not a good idea and now its proving to u. People really gets bored as well as reading the same thing again and again looks like a old wine in an new bottle. In India forums people like to read short story but with innovative ideas but some writers love to make it like long, boring stuffed book with nothing good in it. Maybe u should change your writing skills and try to improve to be a little better. I noticed u put a cooma in every two three words in a long line and probably u pen down short lines but its confuses the mind of reader as well as confused the story so much


It was only my opinion, if it look criticism than its your problem. A writer always faces criticism and u know that.


Oh I see. Dragging, is it? Funny, I never noticed you commenting before. Anyway, thank you for the opinion. Like I said, the next chapter will be the last. If you don't like it then you are welcome to give it a miss, I wonder how you even stuck it this long since I obviously don't PM you...but thank you all the same.😛

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5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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