FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 41

Created

Last reply

Replies

839

Views

135.3k

Users

86

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update.

great to see pia fight that vampire instead of being a damsel in distress.
this is the best thing about pia's character here.
abhay is confused regarding pia and considering his character it's right on his part too. he never liked being a vampire so obviously he would never want pia to live like that but at the same time there would be a part of him that wants pia to be with him like forever. but since he is too good i am sure he wouldn't do it but i am confident pia would change his decision.
misha was second and ahead of pia..that indeed was shocking.
abhiya romance was hot.

all the best for ur exams.👍🏼




thanks a lot Megha... I know you like a go getter heroine and so do I :D let's see..am not sure if pia can change his decision...lol Misha shocked everyone I guess :)
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

😃Thanx shreya😊I was literally dying 4 dis 1. Wow! Superb update full of action, romance n fun . Piya showed real bravery by at least trying to fyt against a vampire . Abhay piya wer 2 hot 😳😃 I cud sense sum serious danger to abhiya relation with abhay thinking abt his being vampire n piya being human . Sid bac answering n Maithili feeling guilty was surprising , usually Sid was way to soft with Maithili n in return she was always dominating him . Sid seems 2 b concerned abt piya , why? It can't b just 2 attack her again, now Sid is taking advantage of Alina being in love with him😆😉 Misha coming 2nd😲



thank you Mahi!
hmm... I don't know about danger to their relationship at least. Abhay wouldn't be Abhay if he didn't worry lol.

Sid's not the angry type, but when he is, you gotta watch out. he won't get much from her, she's definitely stronger than she seems.
:)
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

Oh MY GOD Shreya!!!!! Here I thought I was being saintly not coming on line whole day and when i came at evening, OMG U blew my cover n besharam revealed🤣.

I m☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️,☺️!!!
Brilliantly written Shreya, I knew it our hero will save her n tukde karofy dat vampy😡, bt d part dat later followed was un expected☺️. Bt trust me, u managed it quite sensuosly yet sportingly n decently. Bt ye Abhay ko kya ho raha hai phir se? He is back to his self loathing mode? I just hope Abhay doesnt do something like this, now.

Results reminded me of 3-Idiots scene. Gosh Mish 2nd, I imagined d whole scene in front of my eyes. Kaash aisa scene humein show mein bhi milta, coz PKYEK mein sirf exams hote the, results nahi😆

Sid's behaviour wid Metz was shocking, well was i expecting this sooner or later? May be yes. Alina managed him in a damn good way 4 misbehaving wid Dishu😡.

Metz once again in her sinister planning mode. Means another trouble 4 Abhiya.

Once again, 2 remind u,☺️. Trust me I m still blushing. Continue soon.





Thanks Kirti.
Abhay is being Abhay! He cannot be in the blissful-in-love mode . Not within 5-6 chapters right? He will worry and he is right to worry.

Something like what? ;)


Why was Sid's behavior shocking? He is his own person after all.

The day AbhIya's troubles get over is the day the FF ends. :P

Lol u won't blush too much now. :p
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

OMG what a update beautiful update and wonderful cannot explain in words for the same



thank you so much!'
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

Abhiya were awesome Sidlina were great n Misha baby came 2nd😲😆



LOl yeah she did
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Shreya did I ever tell you I am your fan. If not then please add me to the list. You should have written PKYEK.

It was awesome catching up with this story. I still have some confusions but I am all up for waiting for this excellent piece of fiction.
Thank you for writing this.



If I'd written it, it wouldn't have ended :p
But, whoaaa...huge compliment. I am seriously speechless, but thank you. thank you so much for reading and commenting.
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

wooow amazing update shreya !!!!
loved abhiya scene and conversation...
seriously sid daring to confront alina about her feelings ... what about him so confused whom he loved?
wah misha got second position :)
hope abhay will remain stick near to piya now ...



thanks. Sid though, he's anything except confused. lol
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

What to say , short of words di

This chap felt so dreamy , it tugged my heart strings
loved all the scenes .Glad abhay wasnt much angry with pia on her careless act .Why has he started feeling that he is not able to keep pia happy for more than a few minutes . Why this sudden insecurity in him ?
loved the Abhay- Piya - Misha scene , mishareally went through a hardworking phase👏.
Then the moment he turns at the doorstep of her house to get a last look of her before leaving was so sweet .

Loved it loved it !!!!😳




LOL Abhay has always been insecure. there are certain things that don't change in the blink of an eyelash and this is one of them. He's always been afraid of not being worthy of her.

thank you for commenting.
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

😲Waooo Misha Second..Shreay u made Misha second...Kabir get jor ka jhatka😉Lovely update...love it



Thanks :)
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

This update was incredibly amazing shreya!! No i really truly mean it!👍🏼
You have done a fabulous job once again..and yet again i am in loss of words!
It's a wonder how you do this magic everytime with such ease and flamboyence!!
The magnitude of each setting manages to touch several notes. It reaches its aim in fulfilling the desired range of emotions with a variety of well chosen words. Excellent!!! 👏

personally i loved the jungle scene-abhay n pia's later convo..the little disturbed thought that had began to cloud abhay's mind watching a happy n then a sad pia. Then right after that sid's appearance and his words..and last the college scene where the unexpected surprise of misha coming second and abhay's extremely awesum humourous dialogue seals the update with a perfect ending!!
The last para where we see abhay watching pia silently while something probably already taking place in his head that results in a probable consideration in his future plans wth pia. I am nt sure..bt might be!

All in all though i dnt need to say bt i will that you're extremely amazingly an ace in bringing up such a variant shaded update!⭐️
p.s. Am really sorry for nt being able to comment in the previous update bt you knw i cnt comment just for the sake of commenting. My sincere apologies!
I was nt in a state of mind to concentrate. Hope you will understand.

anyway..keep writing dear! Knw that i dnt miss ur updates ever!😉
take care and carry on...🤗



Thank you so much Indu... i always love reading your views 😳
I am just grateful you commented, that's all I've ever wanted is for my readers to comment, how and what they write is their prerogative entirely.😳

Related Topics

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani Thumbnail

Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".