Abhiya- -Saason main tumhari hume samane do-edited on page-9! JAN-14th

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

aww that was lovely
you so beautifully explained abhay's thought.
i always like to read your insight view on characters and scenes specially on abhay. many times in the show pia's thoughts were explained but there was always lack of abhay's POV. i feel no one understands abhay in the way you do.
superb work
yes we rarely got to know his thoughts. that's why i thought to write this down. :)
thanks so much for appreciating anji..am glad you enjoyed my version.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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thanks for writing it Indu. you'r most welcome! 😳
it was OS but i loved reading it. it give me a feeling of i want to read more. i wish you could have written longer like this. i always do, just dont realize when your magical words have came to an end... its that mesmerizing. thanks for appreciating my efforts tanzie. your word means a lot. 😳
Nobody can write about Abhay's inner mind like YOU and Poco.. just nobody👏. you two are perfection and out mirror of Abhay's heart in words. About show's Abhay i never felt connected this much with any words about Abhay the way I always feel whenever you write about Abhay and of-course how Poco does. thanks again for the kind words tanzie. i dont know what to say..but you praise me too much. 😳 -which i dont know whether i deserve..😕 n about Poco-well she is Poco! -a complete writer i did say! -n i'm still a struggling newborn here...
How mixed feleing of Abhays heart and mind seeing pia's innocence. soo beautiful. i will read again and keep writing Indu.. 🤗

thanks. ya i have plans to write more such sneak peaks in future...😳 thanks again for reading n for the support. 🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
that was beautiful indu❤️
Just brilliant mindblowing...👏

thanks a ton Juhi...😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: --peehu--
Indu!! i just loved this...
it was written beautifully...the inner thoughts were portrayed in such an amazing way..i immediately realised what he is talking about in which situation...i really wish it was a lil longer but never the less...it was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G 🤗

hey peehu..🤗 thanks so much for appreciating dear n taking time to read it. 😳 glad that you enjoyed it. 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: captainplus
awesome ⭐️

lo❤️ed it !

abhay's thoughts were described beautifully thanks for reading dear.😊 happy to know that i could please you. 😳

tnnx 4r the pm 😊

most welcome! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
This was sooo BEAUTIFUL Indu
I always say u just increase d depth of d scene by ur description n u r always an ACE at describing Abhay n Abhiya. Once again u aced it. hey kirti...🤗 thanks very much for the compliment dear.😳
I personally loved this scene in d show. There weren't much intense or in depth dialogues there bt u described what their eyes n heart would have been saying at dat moment. Just perfectly etherealwell said kirti.😊 their moments are always ethereal...❤️ no matter if its filled with silence..they have their own magic.😳...that sadly now is so rare on t.v..!
Now u ve increased my thirst 4 more of ur descriptions of Abhiya. Plz do write more.

thanks.ya i have more scenes in mind. 😊w'll try to post as soon as i get time. 😉 n thanks for commenting..😳

Edited by Bleak_House - 11 years ago