Abhiya- -Saason main tumhari hume samane do-edited on page-9! JAN-14th

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awwweee Indu. You did it again. It did not for once seem like you were writing it but Abhay himself speaking it aloud. Abhay Raichand... Words can never do justice to describe him. Yet you speak perfectly on how he would have felt at that moment.

When it comes to Abhiya I think one can write pages and pages in their feelings.

Thanks a lot Indu, for taking us through Abhiya land once again. Thank you very much for this.

One request please... Can you also write his feelings after he sees the heart broken Piya when he proposes Alina in front of every one.

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Indu Its my one of Fav sceen...when I 1st time watch I felt Abhay pain ...as u write soo sweet...Love it🤗

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

wow...simply wonderful

u gave a deeper insight into abhay's mind and feelings than the show ever .

awsum

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Beautiful and I have no other words to express it.

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

amazing one dear...loved it ...

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

excellent writing , love the every scenes , it look like everyscenes moving infront of eyes , feeling sad for abhay n pia , really describe abhay inner termoil in brilliant way , thanks for pm
ps : pls write on 15 r 16 nov 2011 episode in which jeh stabbed abhay , abhay dying in pia lap n can u write on both abhay n pia feeling , this scenes really make me cry , its request 😊

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Indu I read both ur sneak-peak in one go and I am really at loss of words now!!! God I really do wonder that how u manage to describe each and every feeling of both Abhay and Piya so beautifully. Just wonderful piece of writings dear!!! So aesthetic and poetic yaar!!!
Both the scenes u have written about are my favourite ones but I never thought about them so deeply like u did. It was so expressive. I really felt those feelings again. I loved the way u chose each and every word and wrote everything so perfectly!!!
I would love to read many more such sneak-peak's from ur side
You are really a brilliant writer yaar!!!From now on I am a fan of ur writings so, plz do write more such stuffs whenever u get some free time😃And yea thanks for the PM :)

Edited by Rmuk - 11 years ago