Abhiya- -Saason main tumhari hume samane do-edited on page-9! JAN-14th - Page 4

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

awesome 👏 👏
love the every scenes , its really well written about abhay emotion , how he fight with his inner feeling
but all his stay away mission goes in water
u really describe his true feeling but thank god he got his true love in pia form
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ---Lizo---

It's beautifully written ... I enjoyed reading it 😉

Abhay can't stay away from piya no matter what .. 😳

Abhiya - made for each other

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

beautifully written indu.

abhay can never stay away from pia no matter how many times he says so to pia or to himself 😆

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

@mandy -look whoz saying!! 😲 😛 and when did u ever listen to me!?😛

Originally posted by: ifians

unres...

ooopsiee😛... first of all sorry for the late reply... a bit busy now a days... but at last managed to read the whole story...😊

another splendid piece of art after so long from you...😃...yes art... an artist paints his imagination in canvas... and u does so with your stories... ur words, sentence expression, style each and everything draws a clear picture of event in front of our eyes... i really really like the fact so much...😳

and the strong point... how flawlessly you can express the emotion of any person with words... even the words become alive in your stories... u are best in portraying emotion of any charecter... spacialy abhay...😉...i noticed that in your every story... the way you portray abhay's inner thoughts and compels ur reader to get connect with abhay's charecter... hats off...👏(di tomar story read karar samay amar always mane hay tumi chant kare abhay er bhoot ke call karo tarpar likhte suru karo...😆 sorry just kidding di... pls don't mind..😳...tomar story satti asadharon..⭐️) even i doubt that pkyek's story writer didn't go that deep while essaying this scene and abhay's charecter... u really rock di..👏...u just not re-writed that scene but i would say you give a new life to that scene...⭐️...

and last but not the list... mindblowing... and thank you for giving such a wonderfull story again...

will be waiting for another splendid work from you...😳

TAKE CARE..

RIA...

This scene was in itself beautiful dear,only that's why I could imagine it this way.else I would have never got the inspiration to write this. true it was never shown what abhay felt. but then this is what made abhay an enigma.

Originally posted by: hasinisid

Its melodicious update...ye melody itni testy n chochlaty kyon hai.A.W.E.S.O.M.E W.R.I.T.T.E.N. Its actually very beautiful.plz do write more .its very small too bt outstanding.

abhays feelings in this scene never shown jst his BG Music says everything like he is missing his maithli bt he got pia...he doesnt love her..hate her bt he cant hurt her or see her in trouble..he is always thr to save her...inspite of everything..

u wrote his true feelingz dear.*happpy* *big smile* *claps* fr ur work.wud love to read more.plz plz write on abhya.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

simply fab

lvd it.

wished we could have gotten something like this in show also.