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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Anon

@raintrifle

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Posted: 11 years ago

The sneak peak we had of abhay's mind and thoughts had been incredible to read , though i supposed it to be slight more longer 😒 till where abhay decides to tell the warden about Pia's unacceptable state ... but anyways it is indeed a highly memorable OS 😳 👏

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res. :D
1st of all srry 4 being late.. Cmp isnt wrkin :'(
it ws 1st proper abhiya scene in d shw rgt *lol* i jst luved it. It ws diff. 2 understand wht ws he thnkin at dat tym :P
each & every wrd hs b'fully written
keep writing :*

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Indu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 Ye le

U need this more than I do 😆

How on earth can u find this mediocre? 🥱 Go change the meaning of the word woman! 😵

It was so beautifully written Now please dont give me those disbelieving looks 😵 Just abt had enough of ur rants 😛

I have no words to describe it - All I can say is that u r the MISTRESS of WORDS! The blending of emotions with words is sheer perfection ⭐️ I don't care a darn if u choose to contradict me 😵 U do it all the time 🥱

U portrayed Abhay's emotions to perfection n I repeat - nobody can ever depict his feelings the way do 👏

I'll admit - I am so jealous of u right now 😆 How on earth do u weave this magic? 😲

Ye le, nazar utar le ab 😆

Edited by ..mandy.. - 11 years ago

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome 👏 👏
love the every scenes , its really well written about abhay emotion , how he fight with his inner feeling
but all his stay away mission goes in water
u really describe his true feeling but thank god he got his true love in pia form
thanks for pm

Edited by singhshailesh86 - 11 years ago

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Aliza

@Fierce.Dreamer

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's beautifully written ... I enjoyed reading it 😉

Abhay can't stay away from piya no matter what .. 😳

Abhiya - made for each other

Edited by ---Lizo--- - 11 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Post Updated!! 😳 pm's later...

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

unres...

ooopsiee😛... first of all sorry for the late reply... a bit busy now a days... but at last managed to read the whole story...😊

another splendid piece of art after so long from you...😃...yes art... an artist paints his imagination in canvas... and u does so with your stories... ur words, sentence expression, style each and everything draws a clear picture of event in front of our eyes... i really really like the fact so much...😳

and the strong point... how flawlessly you can express the emotion of any person with words... even the words become alive in your stories... u are best in portraying emotion of any charecter... spacialy abhay...😉...i noticed that in your every story... the way you portray abhay's inner thoughts and compels ur reader to get connect with abhay's charecter... hats off...👏(di tomar story read karar samay amar always mane hay tumi chant kare abhay er bhoot ke call karo tarpar likhte suru karo...😆 sorry just kidding di... pls don't mind..😳...tomar story satti asadharon..⭐️) even i doubt that pkyek's story writer didn't go that deep while essaying this scene and abhay's charecter... u really rock di..👏...u just not re-writed that scene but i would say you give a new life to that scene...⭐️...

and last but not the list... mindblowing... and thank you for giving such a wonderfull story again...

will be waiting for another splendid work from you...😳

TAKE CARE..

RIA...

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago