Abhiya- -Saason main tumhari hume samane do-edited on page-9! JAN-14th

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This wS just awsome...perfect feelings of abhay...superb girl

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hasinisid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Its melodicious update...ye melody itni testy n chochlaty kyon hai.A.W.E.S.O.M.E W.R.I.T.T.E.N. Its actually very beautiful.plz do write more .its very small too bt outstanding.

abhays feelings in this scene never shown jst his BG Music says everything like he is missing his maithli bt he got pia...he doesnt love her..hate her bt he cant hurt her or see her in trouble..he is always thr to save her...inspite of everything..

u wrote his true feelingz dear.*happpy* *big smile* *claps* fr ur work.wud love to read more.plz plz write on abhya.

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megha sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

simply fab

lvd it.

wished we could have gotten something like this in show also.

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Again a very beautiful update Indu please update more

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Indu awsomeee describe...Love it🤗

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Brilliant. Even without you tellling which scene this was, I knew it immediately...that's how well you wrote it.

As I have always said...you write Abhay too well..so well!

Pure pleasure reading this. I so love this one.

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It was awsm! Luved d way abhay was fighting wid his feelings! U should continue dis. Thax fr pm!

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

EDITED

thanks for writing it Indu. it was OS but i loved reading it. it give me a feeling of i want to read more. i wish you could have written longer like this. i always do, just dont realize when your magical words have came to an end... its that mesmerizing. Nobody can write about Abhay's inner mind like YOU and Poco.. just nobody👏. you two are perfection and out mirror of Abhay's heart in words. About show's Abhay i never felt connected this much with any words about Abhay the way I always feel whenever you write about Abhay and offcourse how Poco does.

How mixed feleing of Abhays heart and mind seeing pia's innocence. soo beautiful. i will read again and keep writing Indu.. 🤗

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 11 years ago