Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20-- - Page 9

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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Im extremely sorry for unresing so late but you know how my life runs now so again very sorry. Its alright tanzie.i know how busy you are.so no problem.😊 what a update. i love this OS so much.thanks so much tanzie.the story has made a place in ur heart-means a lot to me.😳 i told you many times and i donno even if i say again it would be justice with the standard of your work or not but the way you play with your words is always mesmerizing and poetic. poetic is the word apt for how you write, express the feelings of your characters.i don't know what to say.ur appreciation is a big thing.i feel grateful.😳 I felt so bad for Pia. she is living in where - nobody is close to her heart and she is in loneliness. poor her and nobody treats her much good. Yes pia ia a soul deprived of happiness since a long time. She is lonely n there's no one to care for her. We can only hope the future brings best for her.sonething she could hold to. i have tried to potray her despodency and am happy to see that the character hv made u feel.and Abhay, i really wanna know whats the real deal about him. why did he married her in the first place. Pia's reason understandable but im eager to hear about Abhay too.just wait a little more.u will know that. she sent her gifts and Abhays servant has kept all that. wow. that was really impressive.thank you. :) Adonis is a man with a heart! again saying the way you write about Abhay...nobody does Indu..nobody. i dont have words to praise you 👏

waiting for next update eagerly.. and sorry for the short comment..

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

awesome update , feeling sad for pia n u really described pia emotion in excelkent way , but i don't understand what problem with abhay , till now he not accept pia with bottom of heart , thanks for pm n continue soon
it was best gift on abhiya aniversary 🥳 🥳

Originally posted by: sukugeny

Aww Indu...tum itna mast kaise likhti ho yr...our each one writer is amazing...u ppl r fab!!

coming to update...its was fabulous ...well done n the way of writing feelings the inner darkness...each movment u wrote really awesome...i love ur way of writing Indu...!!thanks so much for liking the update geny.😳
m really feeling much sad for pia...she did everything for her family n now here...itni alone...no na...the only darkness is with her...n her mother-in law she is kind i think...

now abhay...samjta kya hai vo apne aap ko...y he is behaving like this with pia...is there any reson...kasm se...m angry on him...bechari pia... am glad you could feel her pain..whatever abhay is doing is nt right.
Though ya abhay does have a reason!
abhi kuch unfold nhi hua hai..m waiting to know the reason why abhay behving like this...n hope abhiya meeting is happening in next update...plz Indu...I want to see their interaction...kya bolenge vo...i want pia to confront him...!!

eagrly waiting for next update...Plz Indu update soon soon na...I want to read further...plz update soon!!

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

oh I feel so sad for Piya..you described her loneliness and desolation very well and also her disgust for the many men who saw her as an object.
Is the library in the west wing near Abhay's rooms?



Please update soon

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice update
i feel so bad for pia...why abhay doing this to her? pia definitly dsnt deserve this.as for abhay-u will know very soon!
n anita wants her to see abhay thats why she is asking her to go in west wing...right?hm..maybe nt..or maybe...bt she has a reason- yes!
waiting for abhiya meeting...whatever be the reason of abhay's behaviour but please make pia slap him tight for once for being like this
oops!thats a huge demand dear!😆 ok i shall see..what can i do..!😉
And thanks for reading n liking.😳

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia

very nice update eagerly waiting to read abhay real story

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome update...

Originally posted by: vijayarvi

omg wt an update👏..cant wait for long pls update soon😃..really it was so so so nice👍🏼..thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab update

pia's pain and everything she is feeling is portrayed so well by you..i really feel sad for her.

her b-i-l suck and it's shame men like him exists in real life also.ya men like them are everywhere and here 1 of them is after pia.

adonis looks like a nice men ...i do hope he would help reduce the distance b/w abhay and pia.I'm glad you did like adonis. He indeed is a nice man.😊

her m-i-l has tried to take a first step in bridging gaps b/w abhiya and therefore she is literally forcing pia to go to library.is she genuine or up to something.hm..megha you have made a good question here! As for nw she wants pia to go there. Why? Or whether she has or has nt any reason,that only time will tell!

all in all an amazing update.