Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20-- - Page 8

Beautiful update but still many things are still hidden and I think they will come out as the story progresses

Awesome indu, loved it. Thanks 4 such lovely gift for us readers😊 eagerly waiting to know abhay's side of story

Thanks for the update Indu, Even the second chapter is intriguing. So what was actually the condition laid before Piya that she consented to this marriage. If everything was going on as per the conditions laid in the agreement, then why is she feeling so bad. I mean not that she should not expect any care from her husband. But if that was what mentioned in the agreement that her husband would stay away from her, then ofcourse she will not be happy with her married life, but there is nothing like she being shocked right as she would have already known this.

really awesomeee update dear...

great update ...
poor piya why abhay is behaving like this way ... piya has to suffer so much becz of him and whose this jerk who humiliate piya
seriously why didn't abhay once talk to piya in a whole year ...

awesome updt indu :)
plz updt ur othr wrks 2

Originally posted by: withered

so so sorry for unresing this late
no issues dear.its alright. 😊
coming to the second. part
well it do cleared some of mine misunderstanding - So, here has to struggle for not losing her dignity in the ahnds of these horrible inhumans and the man who grabbed her hand wasnt abhay but his cousin . Nice developments and then there is her mother-in-law , is their anything special happened for which she is behaving so nicely an sweetly to her ?yes absolutely right.she has to fight every moment because being alone in this world is nt easy..especially when u hav no one to watch aftr u.her mother in law..well u will know the reason soon.
love abhay and adonis track . but what is with this abhay , if he doesnt had to do anything with pia then why the heck he even married her ?😡 your anger is justified dear. abhay is indeed wrong in watever he is doing.his belief..watever it is..is no doubt faulted.but there is a history which we will soon know.
and from the convo of pia and her mother-in-law i suppose pia never roam aroung the house as for she didnt even aknowledged the presence of the huge library in their house . she has bounded herself to only some parts of the house and her lifeless room .
pia likes reading , great 😆 she shuld drown herself in reading to cover up for her loneliness . waiting for the story to proceed 😃

Yes..her life is meaningless...like its said there..it has no reason..n without reason no human can survive.we all need a reason to live-- dont we? ya ..so its the same with her. 😔
thanks for reading n for such a wonderful comment dear.will updat next week.😳

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Well I am in office but still couldn help reading the update n commenting too 😉 Wanted to read this long time ago but my goal these past few days had been to finish my crappy update first no matter how long it took n hence the delay Am sorry its alright. no problem. i get to see ur comment always..that's what matters..isn't it? 😊

I am LOST - literally lost in the magic of your words 👏 Honestly what r u made of? I have lost count of the number of times I asked u this question 🤣 U have magic in ur hands n it reflects when u pen down ur stories breathing life into fictional characters. I am yet to come across a writer who can do that ⭐️ I wish I could use adjectives but they would sound lame. thank you very much mansa. i respect you as a person n as a writer. 😳 so your appreciation is always a big thing for me.😳 though i don't know whether i deserve this...or just that you couldnot say the opposite to hurt me?🤔 i don't know. but ya ur praise for me is often exaggerated. 😆 dn't kill me for this now.. 😛

And this time u have tried something different. For first time u have poured in so much depth into Pia's character. Not that u dont do but when u compare it with Abhay's, it defo not that intense, though its beautiful nonetheless. thanks.😊hmm...ya i have put a lot into her character. i don't know how much am i successful..but i have tried. i have tried to make her a woman of substance who does not break n crumble in front of adversities..

I can understand her situation - poor her her husband wants nothing to do with her and for the world she is a woman who has been forsaken by her husband available to all 😡 Men could be such disgusting creeps 🤢 I mean Abhay's cousin for instance. yes..the world is a brutal place n for a lone woman it is more terrible..things often end up horribly!

Poor Pia cannot even retaliate with a fitting reply 😭 A woman's greatest pillar of strength is her husband but if her husband only turns his back on her where is she to go? 😭 A woman should surely stand up for herself indeed but still nothing can be worse than having to put up with a loveless marriage n I guess thats good enough a reason to break u down. exactly. you have all put it wonderfully. ya that's what i intended to show.

She wants her answers but at the same time she also feels how can she demand them from a man who is no more than a stranger to her? I am more angry on Abhay right now 😡 You should be! he deserves it.

True, he may have his issues but that doesn't give him the right to treat his wife like trash. Atleast tell her y ur punishing her like this for no fault of hers and set her free! 😡 right..!

Anita seems to be a lovely person and I wonder whats there in the library? 🤔 my dear-what's supposed to be there in a library? =books😆 aur kia hoga! 😆

I am wondering something to do with Abhay's past that has made him so cold n distant hm..yes..well all i can say is- everyone has a past. and so does he! And I am waiting for Pia to goto library as well 😆 i know..me too. 😉

Whats with your fixation for Adonis? 🤣 I have come across this name many times now in ur works 😉 really?? is that so? 😲i didnot realise!😲 maybe..i suppose i caught it somewhere or as u hint i like it..maybe! 😆

And I guess I already like him 😆 i'm glad you like him!😳 i hope in future u'll like him more..😉

I am glad he inderstands Pia 😳 he -does yes! after all he is an human with emotions!

Nope, no adjectives

But I'd say:

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanks again for this beautiful detailed comment...🤗

Originally posted by: captainplus

nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

thank you. 😳

piya's emotions were beautifully xplained 😊

is the libray anywere near abhay's room 😕

mm...maybe..we have to wait to know that. 😉

wat xactly is abhay's problem ? 😡

like Adonis said- obsession!

update nxt part as soon as possible 😛

tnx in advance 4r the pm 😊

sorry for delay. am trying my best to update as soon as I can.most Welcome dear 😊