Raining Desires - An OS (part 2/pg10) 22nd june

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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simply amazing. I am glad that abhay was nice to her when they talked. He followed her around & i lvd how pia broke the barriers abhay had set forcing him to accept his forbidden desire. The last part was hot & i lvd how u described him in the last line as an unconventional prince charming. It was brilliantly written & u should write more.

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

OMG!!! In dreamland right now... Haaye my AbhIya...where were you all these days?
You need to write more such things on AbhIya you know! You're fab!

*runs off to read again*

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ThankYou sooo very much guys ! 😃 I'm glad u liked it since I'm very fond of vampires 😆

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
OMG!!! In dreamland right now... Haaye my AbhIya...where were you all these days?
You need to write more such things on AbhIya you know! You're fab!

*runs off to read again*

😆 btw I'm reading ur FF too .. Time and Again and trust me its fab !!! Please would u update sooon ??? 😳