Raining Desires - An OS (part 2/pg10) 22nd june - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Awesome and Freaking Hottt Update Zaru!!πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈI loved it alot!❀️
You are really such an Amazing writer Man.!!❀️⭐️⭐️Got me intrigued till the end,Though it was so long and Took me two hours to read.😲 😲Look like I was reading at snail's speed.🀣 πŸ€£πŸ˜†
Jealous Vampy was a treat. 😳
Kabir have had a crush on almost every new girl in colg even on that Creepy Shanaya Mam.!!🀣 πŸ€£πŸ˜†
And Loved the way Piya was strong and determined to accept Abhay even knowing his truth unlike the show.That was a lovely sight to see oops Read.πŸ˜†And The best part was Piya taking the lead.🀣Isne toh Tharkeypane me Abhay ko bhi maat de di.😲 🀣 🀣
And The last bed scene was ☺️ β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜†
The part in Red i.e the Ending was My most fav thing in the Update.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†Really A Vampire in Black BMU is to die for. ☺️ 😳 ❀️
πŸ€— πŸ€— for writing that Zaru.!!
Love you.!!❀️
Thanks for the PM.!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Keep Writing more on PKYEK yaar.!When you get time,Then Start an SS so that We can see more of other charachters too like Misha,Sid,Jeh,etc you know.!!😳 πŸ˜†
And Oh Ya!!I forgot,I was supposed to send you the links.πŸ˜†
Will send some of My all time fav FF's soon.Maybe you will love them.πŸ˜‰ 😳
Btw What have you readed till now Zaru and How did you find them?!😳 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
i dont want any prince charming coming on white horse rather than i can die 4 vampire coming in black bmw... nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
OMG!!!!WHAT IS THIS???U MADE ME ☺️LIKE HELLL...
a very beautiful piece of writting!!..passionate,sencious and streaming hot man.....i sware if u write like this i am surely gonan get crazy...
jokes apart...it was wonderfull one of the most beautiful abhiya story i read..😳
and i like how u ended the story leaving readers to imagine the rest part...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†β˜ΊοΈ
Zara_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
LOL thankYou all u ☺️ Abhiya fans !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
janvie di jaldi humare chatting place mein aajao.
Zara_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
@ janvie - ThankYou sooo muchhh for ur lovely comment πŸ€— Yeppp the update was long πŸ˜†
And yesss u have to send me links πŸ˜› I've read Indu's works .. πŸ˜ƒ I need more links :) thanks a lot Janvie !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

janvie di jaldi humare chatting place mein aajao.

πŸ˜†Mampi ruk ja 10-15 min,Mano ke OS pe comment karke aati hu.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Zara_92

@ janvie - ThankYou sooo muchhh for ur lovely comment πŸ€— Yeppp the update was long πŸ˜†
And yesss u have to send me links πŸ˜› I've read Indu's works .. πŸ˜ƒ I need more links :) thanks a lot Janvie !!

Your Most Welcome Zaru!!!😳
Ok I will send you links tonight.!!
And Yup Itna bada update tha yaar!!!😲🀣 🀣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: janvie


Your Most Welcome Zaru!!!😳
Ok I will send you links tonight.!!
And Yup Itna bada update tha yaar!!!😲🀣 🀣



πŸ˜† yayyy!!! ThankYou ! ❀️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zara_92



ThankYou so muchhh ! I read ur stuff as well 😳
Its amazinggg !!!!

And sure I'll be writing a part 2 :)

thats great!😊 please continue.
Oh..I never knew you read my stuffs dear.thank you. 😳
will await the next part. :)

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