Raining Desires - An OS (part 2/pg10) 22nd june - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Zara_92



OS is a one shot 😊 just a brief writing completed in 1 part !


it means this story is completed????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: saachi-



it means this story is completed????



It doesn't mean 'end' ...one shot can be just a brief writing widout a proper end or anything..just one part of a story !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
That was a beautiful OS. i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Awesome!!👏
Are u gonna continue😕
Plzz do!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: RknMadhu

Awesome!!👏
Are u gonna continue😕
Plzz do!!!😳



Thankyou !! And yes I'll continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
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Originally posted by: Zara_92



It doesn't mean 'end' ...one shot can be just a brief writing widout a proper end or anything..just one part of a story !


Thanks for explaining 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
omg!!! Zara its fab work dear... :) n the best was when abhay entered piya room and their kiss was super hot :D I was blushing... abhay was shirtless throughout the os :D ahahahahahahaaa... LOL I am wondering if he wore the shirt in college too? :P hehehehe... a very nice os. plz pm me also if you write more on abhiya :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ...mano...

omg!!! Zara its fab work dear... :) n the best was when abhay entered piya room and their kiss was super hot :D I was blushing... abhay was shirtless throughout the os :D ahahahahahahaaa... LOL I am wondering if he wore the shirt in college too? :P hehehehe... a very nice os. plz pm me also if you write more on abhiya :)



Thankyou sooo muchhh 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
wow ,abhiya story always treat to read & this raining desires-an os of abhiya brought old memory of pkyek & abhiya sweet moment
abhiya scenes were really beautiful & in well manered described
you really well described pia pov & waiting for abhay view
pls write second part also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

wow ,abhiya story always treat to read & this raining desires-an os of abhiya brought old memory of pkyek & abhiya sweet moment
abhiya scenes were really beautiful & in well manered described
you really well described pia pov & waiting for abhay view
pls write second part also



Sure I will 😊 Thankyou!

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