New Abhiya SS-The last Confidante.Updtd Pg-19,Feb-2nd - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Mysterious but interesting update..
Thanks for the PM.

you'r welcome! Hope u enjoy it in future as well..😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

very interesting update

</div><div>i feel as if i am reading a mystery novel of agatha christie.
lvd it

thanks so much megha.😊
I can never imagine myself to be anywhere near her! She is the queen of crime fiction.
I feel honoured though. 😳 n am trying my best..hope the story keeps u interested till the end.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: bellaaa

the update is quite interesting along with lot of mysteries
i just love the abhay and rachel bonding ... its seems they had not gud relation with their mom
whom piya is talking on phn?
cont soon

thanks for reading beenish. And thanks a lot for liking.😳yes theres lot of mystery yet to unfold! Glad u like the bond.u will know everything gradually.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice update, so much mystry
who called pia in d last

thanks hema. U will know that..soon!😊

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

<font color="#ff0000">sorry like button not working</font>

<font color="#ff0000">awesome part...</font>

thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Jarin04

I'm still a bit confused bt what's the fun if all the confusions r cleared? so i'll be waiting for u to disclose everything Nyc update.

[COLOR]thanks dear. you are absolutely right there! whats d fun if i unveil everythng at once? 😉[/COLOR]


Originally posted by: vmpy

a v v v interesting and amazing story.loved it.who was dat at da end??thanx for pm n continue soon.

thanks so much aqib.😳 You will know that very soon. Welcome. Will update within tomorrow.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

finally after a month I read and am commenting too😆 sorry for commenting so late Indu... well superb update ye wala to thoda sa samajh aya😛 Oh han wo kya nam hai uska...han some ADRNIS...is he villian????? pia kisse bat kr rai thi...??? abhay ki mom aur usme banti nai hai...abhay is so hurt...😭

thats ok juhi. I know u are busy.😊
thank god! Else i was seriously thinking what i wrote!😆
Hm..sorry dear bt to know that u have to keep on reading!😉 becoz thats where the suspence is..😛will update tmrw.
thanks for reading. And If there is any confusion in future don't hesitate, just ask me.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Indu man so many mysteries 😲 Reminded me of Steig Larsson. I couldn understand anything for first 60 or so pages but once the story set in its a roller coaster ride ⭐️ oh...i hope it doesn't take 60 updates for you to enjoy this story!😆 hope i havnt made things that much confusing.

and I am guessing it will be the same here. Is there anything tats not ur genre? U surprised us all by coming up with a dark love story n that turned out to be ur best work ever ⭐️ again you exaggerate!! 😛
And now a thriller? I can already say it will turn out to be one of ur best too ⭐️ I am already in awe of it. I am confused - hell yeah And I am sure I will get answers to my questions in the upcoming updates I guess I cant resist myself from posting it here. well..thank you! 😳 you will get some answers in coming chapters yes...i hope. 😛 but not all, sorry for that you have to read till end. 😛
Coming to the start, it was spine chilling The way a man was cold bloodedly murdered gave it an interesting start. Then we get to see Pia who is in Zurich. Y has she been sent here? 😕 And whom did she see? I guess she was in Paris when something happened but which guy is she talking abt? Abhay is in New York. So I feel it might not be him. And who was she talking to in the end of 2nd update? 😕 hmm...patience..patience dear...😆u will know everything gradually! 😉
Who is Adrian btw? As in how is he related to Abhay or Pia? I am guessing he is. maybe..maybe not! you will know. 😊
Maria seemed like a despo. Kinda 'T' 😆 glad you liked that part. 😆But well I loved the way he tackled her. me too. 😉
And on whom did he want the information? 😕 About the guy who was injured in 1st update, was he shot? yes he was shot! did i made it confusing? 😕 n about the info..i cant disclose everything now dear! 😛

He seems to be badly but he hasn sought medical help either 😕 Looks like he was in Zurich for some work n he was dragged into a nightmare. Hmmm I feel though he had no links to the incident that changed his life, he will surely play an important role in unravelling the mystery. hmm..will he? 🤔
Now coming to our blue eyed boy - Abhay 😊 He seems to share an amicable bond with his sister Rachel 😳 In the first update looks like a tragedy struck their lives Rachel and Abhay were speaking abt justice. I am guessing they have been wronged n want to avenge it. Also this seems to be the reason y Abhay's mom is upset with him. Has she sort of disowned him? Looks like tat coz Abhay refused to be a part of any activities in the family business but offered his help n guidance to his sister 😭 And what did Rachel get to know in the end? Something went wrong again? 😲 Seems like it. hm..not bad.you'r picking things fast! 😉
Wonderful update Indu n I am looking forward to read this FF 👏 thank you soo much for this detailed n wonderful comment mansa.😳 am glad to see you are liking it. hope it remains so till end. 😳 i missed reading ur comments so much. 🤗 happy to see u back!😊n once again thank you. 🤗
P.S - I have started catching up with all FFs/SSs now. Will read all of them n comment 😳

ok. am looking forward to that..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: sukugeny

Sorry my dear Indu...a re yr my lapi is nt with ..jb main bdi cmnt krna chahti hun..ab baki ki trh by mob...m s.o.r.r.y fr late cmnt. hey its okey Geny. no worries. 😊

U written update beautifully..u always do though...it was brillient. thank you! 😳
first chapy for intro wa gr8..so arnb kept pia to zurich..fr her sefty..abhay n rechel.loved bro sis bond..so chand died..n john got hurt...is arnb n abhay..enemy relation kya. u will know things soon dear..😊
who is caller fr pia...is any denger near her..watng fr abhiya lov story sorry u have to wait a little bit more for their meeting. 😳
updt soon..sorry again

updating now. 😳
Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indu ur answering questions or leaving more behind? 😆 But well tats good for me coz I love to guess anyways 😉 In the beginning we see Rachel and Abhay discussing abt a deal being cancelled coz of a murder n could it be the one that happened in the first update? 😕 And also they will discuss abt a 3rd person. Initially my first thought it was Rachel's boyfriend but then I thought y will he have any objection to wat Abhay does? Then I thought maybe its their brother 😕 and my mind flew to Adrian 🤣 But I am certain I might be wrong on both accounts here. Then comes the 'Doctor' who is Adrian's dad n looks like he is the Secret Nemesis. The guy who defied Adrian's dad defo spells trouble n for that matter Adrian's dad too Wat task was he talking abt? 😕 And Adrian left Zurich is it? Is he going to NYC? Pia is abt to elope n I am guessing watever she saw wasn disturbing in the sense she shd have been terrified rather than being curious n here its the latter. Whom did she text btw? 😕 And I am fine with Abhiya meeting after a couple updates provided I get some answers first 😛 Give some answers n some more questions later 😉 Good going Indu 👏 Looking forward to reading the next chapter 😃 Bring it on 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woaww .. a great update..
very goog written !!!!

Love the story.. thanks 4 d pm dear !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm. A lot of developments in this chapter...very interesting...
Who is the person Rachel and Abhay were talking about? Also, I have developed a strange liking for Adrian ;) I'd like to know which actor you'd choose to play him?

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