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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

a v v v interesting and amazing story.loved it.who was dat at da end??thanx for pm n continue soon.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Hmm...interesting...very interesting...

In the end, who was that who called Pia and why am I feeling she has mistaken the identity of the caller?

Awesome update Indu...I am really getting intrigued now...update sooon😃

thanks shreya. I thought the suspence was 2 much confusing..😆 bt u found it interesting so thanks.😳
well..u will get all ur answers gradually. 😉 And hope u stay intrigued till the end.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update
hmm...full of mysteries
it seems full action packed mysterious story...continue soon

thanks anji. 😊 Yes its mysterious..atleast am trying to make it so.! 😆 Dnt know har far i will succeed..bt yes action is there!😉

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
nice update
love abhay rachel bond , both share good understanding & perfect sis-bro relation
in last who call pia ? , something seems like some hidden meaning behind
thanks for pm & continue soon

thanks for reading dear. Am glad you like it.😳 you will knw tht in the next update..
Welcome!

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
nice update

thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Interesting...but till many thing confuse...hope next updates clear it...continue soon🤗

thanks dear...yes future updates will answer a lot of questions..hopefully!😊

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update
liked abhay-rachael convo. they have good understanding between them
who called pia? A friend or enemy?

thanks Anji.😳am glad you are liking the story dear. Hm..for now thats the mystery,so let us see whether its a friend or...😉

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Haha.very complcated.

😆 Well...the aim was to create mystery! So as per ur words.. i suppose..the attempt wasn't completely a failure!😉😆
and thanks for reading dear.😳

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

finally after a month I read and am commenting too😆 sorry for commenting so late Indu... well superb update ye wala to thoda sa samajh aya😛 Oh han wo kya nam hai uska...han some ADRNIS...is he villian????? pia kisse bat kr rai thi...??? abhay ki mom aur usme banti nai hai...abhay is so hurt...😭

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
nice update
so hard to understand all characters at a time

I hope with more updates things will clear up!
Thanks for reading.😊

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Nice Update the story is progressing slowly and I think their are many mistries in it there are yet to reveal

Thanks dear. Yes mystery there is...hope they will keep u intrigued till end.😳

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Indu man so many mysteries 😲 Reminded me of Steig Larsson. I couldn understand anything for first 60 or so pages but once the story set in its a roller coaster ride ⭐️ and I am guessing it will be the same here. Is there anything tats not ur genre? U surprised us all by coming up with a dark love story n that turned out to be ur best work ever ⭐️ And now a thriller? I can already say it will turn out to be one of ur best too ⭐️ I am already in awe of it. I am confused - hell yeah And I am sure I will get answers to my questions in the upcoming updates I guess I cant resist myself from posting it here.

Coming to the start, it was spine chilling The way a man was cold bloodedly murdered gave it an interesting start. Then we get to see Pia who is in Zurich. Y has she been sent here? 😕 And whom did she see? I guess she was in Paris when something happened but which guy is she talking abt? Abhay is in New York. So I feel it might not be him. And who was she talking to in the end of 2nd update? 😕

Who is Adrian btw? As in how is he related to Abhay or Pia? I am guessing he is. Maria seemed like a despo. Kinda 'T' 😆 But well I loved the way he tackled her. And on whom did he want the information? 😕 About the guy who was injured in 1st update, was he shot? He seems to be badly but he hasn sought medical help either 😕 Looks like he was in Zurich for some work n he was dragged into a nightmare. Hmmm I feel though he had no links to the incident that changed his life, he will surely play an important role in unravelling the mystery.

Now coming to our blue eyed boy - Abhay 😊 He seems to share an amicable bond with his sister Rachel 😳 In the first update looks like a tragedy struck their lives Rachel and Abhay were speaking abt justice. I am guessing they have been wronged n want to avenge it. Also this seems to be the reason y Abhay's mom is upset with him. Has she sort of disowned him? Looks like tat coz Abhay refused to be a part of any activities in the family business but offered his help n guidance to his sister 😭 And what did Rachel get to know in the end? Something went wrong again? 😲 Seems like it.

Wonderful update Indu n I am looking forward to read this FF 👏

P.S - I have started catching up with all FFs/SSs now. Will read all of them n comment 😳

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--geny--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Sorry my dear Indu...a re yr my lapi is nt with ..jb main bdi cmnt krna chahti hun..ab baki ki trh by mob...m s.o.r.r.y fr late cmnt.

U written update beautifully..u always do though...it was brillient.
first chapy for intro wa gr8..so arnb kept pia to zurich..fr her sefty..abhay n rechel.loved bro sis bond..so chand died..n john got hurt...is arnb n abhay..enemy relation kya.
who is caller fr pia...is any denger near her..watng fr abhiya lov story
updt soon..sorry again

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