New Abhiya SS-The last Confidante.Updtd Pg-19,Feb-2nd - Page 11

It was again brillient chapy with some mistries..ok.
Written well each scene..nice talk of bro-sis..they must b talking abt their bloved person fr whom they care..bt who?
tht murder n their deal..waiting mistry to unfold..then tht Doctor..jra akdu hai like his Son..Adrin..hum apne aap aaise akdu ki trf attract hote hai,kitne MOTION mai rehta-liked it..bt abt whom he is talking,nt official info bt find wht is he?jra wrkholic hai,bt liked his part to read.

bechari Pia baby alone alone..gng out na..was she talking abt abhay?Kitna time hai Abhiya meeting main..pations rkhe hai Indu...jaldi milva do unhe..waiting ha..i know its long so.k.

update soon ..u said it tht u r gng to update it soon n m waiting fr first rain also...again nice n limit ka writtten..yr chotu update tha..ha.

Wow seriously this is indeed a story full of suspense , horror , and thriller ⭐️

Iam not exxagerating but u are really an amazing writer 👏, the best things i love in ur writings 😳 are the use of different words 😉 which helps me academically too 😆😆

The chapter was really awesome and u have also disclosed many suspense but simultaneously created new ones too di 😲 .

And honestly i felt like yet after 3 chapters we havent been introduced by all the characters 🤔 , but that is what u want to do , right to keep us in breathtaking suspense 😆😆

Now , who is Adrians father what does he do exactly , who are those 17 men including adrians father i.e their supreme ' the doctor '🤔 . why was adrian so excited after receiving that mysterious call and who the caller was 😲? and about whom maria had to find all details as ordered to her by adrian . among the 17 who are keith and fredo ?😛

What happened in the raichands family 😲, why rachel distaste her mother so much 😲 and when are u going to introduce her in ur story 😉 , how did mr. raichand died , was he murdered ?🤔 who is john , is he a mere employee ? and who was '' HE '' they both were talking about ?

Who was the man who got a deep wound in his left arm 😵 , he was missing in 3rd chapter ?😭who was his doctor frnd ? 😲 did he too have a specific role in the story ?😉 who are the people wandering to kill him ?

where did pia is panning to elope 😲 , whom did she call 😕 , what was the incident she was talking about ? 😲
why did her father made her live in zurich away from her family 😡 ?

i am feeling my head spinning with all these questions hovering in my mind . plzzz di atleast reveal the link between all these characters 😛😉 .

nice chapter
one thing i like about mysteries, they keep you guessing till the end...now rachel n abhay were talking about whom?
btw liked their bonding.
when will abhiya meet?

Amazing update.
Mysterious and interesting story.love it.

Awesome chapter and waiting for the love story to start

amazing update

great update !!!!! well written piece of work
wonder who rachel and abhay talking about??? like it the way they share sibling bond ...
damn awsome conversation between doctor and fredo ... i like it
well i like adrain character in starting but depends on what will be he in future ... waiting for abhiya meeting

comment updated on pg - 15 😃. sry for late indu di 😔.