Passion of an Evil Lover:lst chpt,pg 37,jul28 - Page 31

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

I am first, I am first YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

Though both Abhiya die in the end u made sure the story didn get a sad ending 😳 Life would surely never let Abhiya unite. So they had to unite in death Abhay had certainly not chosen this life for himself as he was turned against his will but once ur into it, there's no backing out. Survival will always come above everything n to ensure it, Abhay had to let the monster take control Once he became a monster he embraced his immortal life with open arms though somewhere deep down he wasn happy abt it either. He longed for a companion n y wont he? Eternity is a curse in itself n u need a soulmate to share it with. Though he marked Misha initially it was Pia who was destined to be his soulmate. But Pia being a human, how could she allow the monstrosity to claim her humaity n soul? She knew Abhay was her true soulmate n she was always meant to be with him. But at what cost? She had seen with her own eyes how her friend, Misha who had been a gem of a person in her human life had mercilessly slain a child. Would she want that existance for herself? I suppose not So she gave a choice to Abhay knowing that Abhay too sought a salvation from this immortal life. He wanted to be at peace. So they allowed themselves to be engulfed into the waiting arms of death so they could be born again 😭 It was sad but inevitable.

The epilogue was cute 😉 A nerdy Abhay n badass Pia 😎 A new life, a new love 😳 Lovely ending 👏 This mini SS comes second to Chronicles in my fav list of ur works 😳 Thank u for writing it 🤗

And and and... I want a new story from u 😛 ur not running away anywhere I will hound u till u agree 😉

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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oh! god end ws unxpctable ... at 1 tym, I thought he would betray her 😛 bt nooo
dey wr truly soul mate
last bt nt d least dis is d bst epilogue i hv ever read :* dis ws a blockbluster updt dishu

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Res

Me third :'(
well, anyway...
The minute I read Pia was apprehensive about Abhay I had this funny feeling they were going to die...and then I was like no dishu wouldnt do it, but then you did...you killed them off, and you even justified it convincingly :'( well you convinced me anyway :P

And then of course you go and give that ah-dor-able epilogue. One of the best epilogues ever and dishu this is going down as one of your best in my book.
I simply loved this one.

PS. Epilogue ko continue karke sequel ka koi chance hai kya? :P

Originally posted by: --peehu--

dishu dishu dishu!!! ok..i had just read the chapter 1 and then i never read this fic further as many things came up with which i was dealing. but today when i saw your pm, i was like, cmon i have to read this anyway, so lets do it now..

OMG!! you have done such a amazing job..when misha was killed, i really felt bad, not because she dies, but because somehwere i felt she didnt deserve to die. her last parting words, were so true and hurtful and may be thats the reason i didnt want misha to die..

then piya got bitten. and abhiya became one. they realised that they are soulmates. that moment was so so beautiful. they may monsters as others were putting, but i could feel the love they shared.

and then there was kabir. i hated him for what he did to piya

piya still had her humanity intact. and the way she convinced abhay to let go their eternal life, was amazing. and when they killed themselves, though i felt happy that they would be back in a right way, at the same time i felt remorse

and finally the epilogue, that was just what we needed. they came back but as humans!!

dishu i loved this fic and you have done an amazing job.

P.S: ha! look i finally commented and i guess its been too long since i wrote an essay in my comment 😆

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

i am a bit surprised that this ff has ended.Anyway i lvd it but pia's plan was something that i could never think of.

in a way she was right and i am glad that they both did meet each other in their next birth also. the way they both drove stakes through each other's heart was painful but atleast they were together in their death.

lvd both of them in their next birth...abhay was too cute and pia was like a firecracker. lvd their cute banter.

amazing ss and i really wanted to read more .

it was simply superb.

Originally posted by: ifians

why it ended so soon..😭

well again another awsome update and a very good ending👏...i am expecting that at thae last part both of them will die together..but the epilouge was truly unexpected😛..i was all set for a sad ending😭..but got a real treat at ending😆..but man how can you imagine abhay as nervous boy😲..he always seems so confident😎 but ok..really enjoyed that..and don't forget to pm me for ur next..😳

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

excillent se bhi jyda excillent ending & epilogue
the way both abhiya died , it was very painfull to read but one thing good both were true soumate , in last moment both were together
& epilogue was brilliant
happy for abhiya in nxt birth finally they were together
Di , I'm happy you give this storya happy ending which is mindblowing
thanks for such a unique creation of abhiya lovestory
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: captainplus

nice bt sad ending

sad coz i love vampy abhay

tnx 4r the pm

Originally posted by: Achilles_Styx

AbhIya's ending was kind of unexpected,Dishu.True soulmates they were,are and will be always!I LOVED this SS.After seeing the word 'epilogue' I was like why it had to end so soon!But, am so happy that you didn't give this SS a tragic ending.
ABHAY-PIA forever.❤️
Ps: please ho sakey toh make a sequel of this one😉