Passion of an Evil Lover:lst chpt,pg 37,jul28 - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ady148

I have not read d novel but my sis says it is amazing. So read the prologue of ur story and looks quite intersting. So kabir know abhay is vampire n abhay is on mission to make an army of slaves. Hmm waiting for abhiya meeting

yup but I only took the background from Dracula, rest everything I changed 😳 Read it at leisure
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear your thiS ff iS alSo awsOme 😳 bt i mOstly love the Story Of "PRINCE ❤️ CHAAHAT" pleaSe Continue it if it'S pOsSible...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
unbeliveable epilogue dear.

and out of world update... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

That's right Mandy. Pia had seen how Misha became, and she could never allow herself to be the same monster and she had seen Abhay's mind, and felt his disgust over this life. and so she wanted both of them to be free of this curse and then let nature give them a second chance to be together

as for new story, abhi dur dur tak mere mine mein DFL ke alawa kuch nahin hain 😆 and DFL is about to see lots of crucial things now, so as of now my focus will be that only.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelyaleena02

dear your thiS ff iS alSo awsOme 😳 bt i mOstly love the Story Of "PRINCE ❤️ CHAAHAT" pleaSe Continue it if it'S pOsSible...😭

Prince and Chahat, 😲 no no, that's not possible as I write on Abhiya only 😳 aur kisi couple ke baare mein, i can't imagine a story at all 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Im late. Oh God Dishu it was soo unexpected. but when I started reading I remembered and i understood what you are gonna do.
Well trur their relationship was doomed and today or tomorrow Kabir would have found them and kill them. and instead of being eternally damned Pia chose to be eternally be together in life and death. that was so poignant and romantic but in a sad way. I also thought Abhay wont agree first, he just got her, his soulmate and offcourse he would want to live but he has lived too long already and he knows how this life could be. Abhay and Pia's convo was very beautifully written. Love freed them from the world full of malice and hatred.
epilogue was one of the best I have ever read. amazing. finally the soulmates meet again. it was beautiful. 👏
Do write a sequel na on it 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Sorry Im late. Oh God Dishu it was soo unexpected. but when I started reading I remembered and i understood what you are gonna do.

Well trur their relationship was doomed and today or tomorrow Kabir would have found them and kill them. and instead of being eternally damned Pia chose to be eternally be together in life and death. that was so poignant and romantic but in a sad way. I also thought Abhay wont agree first, he just got her, his soulmate and offcourse he would want to live but he has lived too long already and he knows how this life could be. Abhay and Pia's convo was very beautifully written. Love freed them from the world full of malice and hatred.
epilogue was one of the best I have ever read. amazing. finally the soulmates meet again. it was beautiful. 👏
Do write a sequel na on it 😛

You are right Tanzie, their relationship was doomed and today or tomorrow, they would have be finished off and probably in a way which may not have allowed them to be together again. But this way, they chose to leave the evilness of this life together with a hope to meet in next life and they did.
But, please dear, no sequel, I can't write on humans, as you already know it. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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oh..dishu..i simply heart the ending!!! What a beautiful way to unite them!!!👏
You know for once i thought there is only this one way how they can be together without being monsters bt then i never thought pia would be able to gather this much courage or think of something like this! I guess i underestimated her! Bt surely she here proved to be his light n in true sence!!
So For me this was the most mature n best characterisation of pia...ever!!!⭐️
Simply awesuum dishu. Loved it!! ❤️Please write more!!🤗
and abt the epilogue..well what to say..the way u presented abhay in new birth was too..too.. good!!!😆 Loved this diffrnt abhay!😳 and pia too rocked!!😉
please dishu..come up with another story..asap! Please!! You always represent them anew n so wonderfully!! 🤗
p.s. Thanks a lot for coming up wth a story like dis! Becoz u know already how much i love Dracula n an abhaiya version on it was the bestest thing!!thank you!🤗
and sorry for being late in unresing.

Hmm... I always try showing Pia as someone strong and here it was necessary for her to be mature too else no other ending would have actually been so justified.
and well abhay might be shy in next birth initially, but seeing pia he was back to his tharkeypana 😆 and ya i had to show pia bold here 😆
will write something new, when some idea strikes me, right now busy with DFL,
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Posted: 12 years ago
ya his tharkeypan was evident in the last line.😆
okay! Will wait...😳

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