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@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Res.

You updated! So soon! 😲 and I have not yet unreserved my previous comments!

Edited--'chapter--14

WoW!! I love Radhika's prompt replies! She is interesting and her gesture quite entertaining for a reader! Makes reading joyful. 😉

Aah...Arjun as I see...is not dumb! He seems good too. But this pairing up, no matter how curious it looks, will never happen I suppose--for obvious reasons of course! 😊

As for Piya--she hardly realize what she wants. Same with Abhay. Or maybe he knows but his stature is preventing him to express it ?! Maybe!

Well...

The scene of Antony was very impressive! Liked it a lot ! 👏

the entire conversation was richly crafted and thoughtfully executed! Very very well written! 👏 especially his boss--his dialogues--everything was brilliant!

But i'm curious to know whose side the boss is in. The mutant's or not! Though I suspect it's the former.

Now-- this boss appears to be no one else but Sidhharth!

And what is he doing with this mutant in his home? Is she in some way related to him? Or is she plainly a probable medium for reaching the princess and Abhay?

Sorry I couldn't help myself. Too many mysterious and I am so excited to know everything!

But I will have to wait of course.

Now I suspect Abhay has heard her conversation with Radhika. Was that why he was gloomy??

P.s. who is this new entry? The wolf girl?? And how does she and her brother comes in the picture?

Waiting for the answers to unfold...

An amazingly written--interesting update Shreya. ⭐️

Do continue soon...

and thanks for pm. 😳

P.s. The HP and SH quotes were well chosen, and very rightly placed! 😉 👍🏼

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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pal81

@pal81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

Sinister and romantic in the same update 😊

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Awesome update shreya, 😃 I don't lik radhika n y shez pushing pia towards Arjun Roy ? Aww... Shreya I loved dis , thanks for adding siddharth. I loved sid in pkyek n time and again. Hope Hez one of da main character in dis 1 too. It was kind of siddharth to heal da mutant taking such a risk . Abhiya moment got disturbed😡

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#634

I will have to read it again the Faye part, Its really really interesting.

What to say of Roy 😆. Kya tum wohi ho jo log kehte hain - "Tere aas paas mere aur mere paas , tu hai ke nahi" "Ask me for anything, I will give you anything"

Now what line from Hercule Poirot,. Though HP might have been my favourite, I seriously dont remember the lines 😔

Who is Mr.Knightly (did not read so much of Holmes though the name sounds so familiar)

The last part, was it really Abhay ? For a moment I thought Piya was dreaming. Abhay, kab tak apni feelings chupaoge, Time to let them out 😳 I will read the scene, imagine it and gush again and again.

Will read again and come out with my questions. Please please dont update so soon and promise I will be fast with my questions.

My questions now 😳

The first part, may be the first time Abhay saw Piya. So is the dream of Abhay or Piya? - recollection of memories?

And was Piya observed by someone from that time?

Is there any mystery around Radhika - Does she know who Piya is. Like she just started the subject of rumours going around about Piya and Arjun Roy and she did not take time to confront Roy about his feelings for Piya and also suggested them going out on a date and hinting Piya that she can take the initiative. Were there rumours going around really or is there something more to it, like Radhika wanting Roy to be close to Piya for some reason. If the rumours were really going strong, Abhay would have come to know of it. Ofcourse these would be restricted to the teachers section, still Abhay being a mutant and like his focus is on Piya, to protect her, he might have heard of something.

So Kraya is a werewolf and her brother is upto something and it seems that he does not share good relation with her. So are werewolves residing in Ricardia without the knowledge of the vampires?

The leader was talking to his people and how they fail to capture the Princess and Mutant Abhay. So is this the werewolf leader, brother of Kraya, capturing mutants for some purpose against the vampires. And that mutant strapped to bed, was he the human who was missing as per Juliana?

Or could this be the vampire who is responsible for the mutiny?

Coming to the Mutants's record

329 Mutants converted (created)

53 Mutants lost in various casualities

7 killed in Faye/Ricardia border skirmish

1 Missing (Abhay)

1 Out of Action (Aiza)

111 Missing without records

So where are these mutants ? Taken by the Vampires/Werewolves who are responsible for the mutiny. Or have they been taken for some kind of experiment.

Have Pierre Knox and Vir Saldani been irresponsible when it came to keeping control on the information about Mutants or are they responsible with this thing of Mutants going missing with no records of their disappearance?

Now I can see how Abhay and Piya being introduced as cousins and their being student and teacher is going to bring many twists with both of them becoming a part of different groups with different activities and engagement 😊

Abhay, kya kar raha tha tu...

Well Shreya, thats all for now. And please dont bother to answer them now as I will wait for your updates 😊

Edited by harinisriram39 - 10 years ago

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Mindblowing chapter👏 although I don't understand why abhay is avoiding getting intimate with piya? He loves her and its obvious she likes him back so whats stopping them?

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Wasn't expecting the update so soon , dear , and I wasn't even online. So forgive me for being late.

Lovely chapter , dear.

When Piya had seen Abhay for the first time , was it b4 they were friends or when Kabir was already in the picture ?

I like Radhika. Till now she has been a good friend to Piya. Setting her up with somebody is which any friend wud have done. Piya is a quick learner. She really replied to Radhika in ' Radika language ' . 😆

It wud be gud to see Abhay getting insanely jealous. Wud Piya really go out with Arjun ?

Humans were nice. Many of them had treated her with respect and liking.

Convey my regards to Piya , dear Shreya. Tell her I m also one of the humans that likes her. 😆

Kraya wants peace , right. Her brother is the leader of the werewolves or just one among them ?

Piya is the princess of Faye , so the werewolves are looking out for her. But which mutant was the leader talking abt ? Is it Abhay ? Why does he need the mutant ?

I think the man that the werewolves have captured is the one that went missing and Chand was informed abt , in the last chapter. I can just wait until u unfold his importance i.e. if i m correct.

I like Siddharth. Till now he is a good guy. And I hope it remains so.

The last portion where Abhiya wrestle (if that can even be called so) for the clip has to be my favourite.

Haseena has serious timing issues. 😆

This reminded me of Time and Again (u wud definitely knw which part) and I really felt sad that its over.

Keep writing dear. 😊

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#637

So far so gud.. I read till chap 6 and I loved what I read
The concept , the storyline and the characters all r so gud
We were in habit of seeing Abhay as vampy but for the 1st time reading abt him as mutant was gud experience and here Piya being vampy as well as healer and tht too wid brains is gud too😆😆

I dont knw why I desperately want Abhay and Vikrant to have some connection?

Plz cont and shreya u r one fab writer and how I m dying to knw ki ab aage kya but I guess for that I have to read further and I will do that as soo as I get time😃 Tb tak Pia enjoy kare apna FREEDOM

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Lovely Sherya Dear...wow Abhay jealous..Love it...God They search Abhay...Is that Shadow Sid who infrom Chand?continue soon DEar

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#639

I read the remaining chapters and shreya why u played with my emotions?
You made Abhiya cousin ? Why? Why? Why?
Ab toh they cant even do love khulam khula even if they confess

Your story is quite intriguing and I m loving it and hope sid remains positive throughout the story and I really wnt to knw wht relationship he and Abhay share

I guess mish and tanu are witches and they r upto something and I dont trust tht new guy Arjun

Radhika is quite eccentric and I m still confused abt her as of now
Ab yeh wolves ki kya story hai ?

Now cont and cant even say Abhiya ki love story aage badao coz u made them fake cousins and college mai inka luv will be awkward

Awesome work shreya
😊