FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106 - Page 66

Originally posted by: MistiAbhiya

Lovely Sherya Dear...wow Abhay jealous..Love it...God They search Abhay...Is that Shadow Sid who infrom Chand?continue soon DEar

Originally posted by: SheDevil

So far so gud.. I read till chap 6 and I loved what I read
The concept , the storyline and the characters all r so gud
We were in habit of seeing Abhay as vampy but for the 1st time reading abt him as mutant was gud experience and here Piya being vampy as well as healer and tht too wid brains is gud too😆😆

I dont knw why I desperately want Abhay and Vikrant to have some connection?

Plz cont and shreya u r one fab writer and how I m dying to knw ki ab aage kya but I guess for that I have to read further and I will do that as soo as I get time😃 Tb tak Pia enjoy kare apna FREEDOM

Originally posted by: 2Obsessed

Wasn't expecting the update so soon , dear , and I wasn't even online. So forgive me for being late.

Lovely chapter , dear.

When Piya had seen Abhay for the first time , was it b4 they were friends or when Kabir was already in the picture ?

I'll make it clear in the next chapter, but no, Kabir was not in the picture and no they weren't friends. I did hint at this earlier when Piya asks Abhay why he stopped meeting her.

I like Radhika. Till now she has been a good friend to Piya. Setting her up with somebody is which any friend wud have done. Piya is a quick learner. She really replied to Radhika in ' Radika language ' . 😆

hehe, you are an exception. I like her too and yes that is a typical girl thing.

It wud be gud to see Abhay getting insanely jealous. Wud Piya really go out with Arjun ?

Wait and see.😆

Humans were nice. Many of them had treated her with respect and liking.

Convey my regards to Piya , dear Shreya. Tell her I m also one of the humans that likes her. 😆

I will tell her that then😆

Kraya wants peace , right. Her brother is the leader of the werewolves or just one among them ?

Piya is the princess of Faye , so the werewolves are looking out for her. But which mutant was the leader talking abt ? Is it Abhay ? Why does he need the mutant ?

I think the man that the werewolves have captured is the one that went missing and Chand was informed abt , in the last chapter. I can just wait until u unfold his importance i.e. if i m correct.

Hmm...lots of questions. I'll let you wait.😛

I like Siddharth. Till now he is a good guy. And I hope it remains so.

The last portion where Abhiya wrestle (if that can even be called so) for the clip has to be my favourite.

Haseena has serious timing issues. 😆

This reminded me of Time and Again (u wud definitely knw which part) and I really felt sad that its over.

Lets see about Siddharth😆 LOL yes I do remember. I miss Time and Again a lot honestly. it's my baby😳 ❤️

Keep writing dear. 😊

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

I will have to read it again the Faye part, Its really really interesting.

What to say of Roy 😆. Kya tum wohi ho jo log kehte hain - "Tere aas paas mere aur mere paas , tu hai ke nahi" "Ask me for anything, I will give you anything"

Nahi bilkul nahi😆

Now what line from Hercule Poirot,. Though HP might have been my favourite, I seriously dont remember the lines 😔

The line about continuing to work in spite of stubborn people.😆

Who is Mr.Knightly (did not read so much of Holmes though the name sounds so familiar)

Hero of Emma by Jane Austen. There was a Hindi movie - Aisha where Abhay Deol played the part. honestly it was quite close to the book except for Sonam's acting, I love the movie.😛

The last part, was it really Abhay ? For a moment I thought Piya was dreaming. Abhay, kab tak apni feelings chupaoge, Time to let them out 😳 I will read the scene, imagine it and gush again and again.

Abhi kahan let them out😆

Will read again and come out with my questions. Please please dont update so soon and promise I will be fast with my questions.

My questions now 😳

The first part, may be the first time Abhay saw Piya. So is the dream of Abhay or Piya? - recollection of memories?

And was Piya observed by someone from that time?

It was Piya's memory. No, she wasnt.

Is there any mystery around Radhika - Does she know who Piya is. Like she just started the subject of rumours going around about Piya and Arjun Roy and she did not take time to confront Roy about his feelings for Piya and also suggested them going out on a date and hinting Piya that she can take the initiative. Were there rumours going around really or is there something more to it, like Radhika wanting Roy to be close to Piya for some reason. If the rumours were really going strong, Abhay would have come to know of it. Ofcourse these would be restricted to the teachers section, still Abhay being a mutant and like his focus is on Piya, to protect her, he might have heard of something.

Why not. what's there to disbelieve her. Arjun likes her and yes, it would be confined to the teachers, but as long as Arjun didnt do anything, Abhay wouldn't do anything. Even if he knew.

So Kraya is a werewolf and her brother is upto something and it seems that he does not share good relation with her. So are werewolves residing in Ricardia without the knowledge of the vampires?

Ricardia is a werewolf country. Rest assured vampires know they live there.😆

The leader was talking to his people and how they fail to capture the Princess and Mutant Abhay. So is this the werewolf leader, brother of Kraya, capturing mutants for some purpose against the vampires. And that mutant strapped to bed, was he the human who was missing as per Juliana?

Or could this be the vampire who is responsible for the mutiny?

Wait and see.😃

Coming to the Mutants's record

329 Mutants converted (created)

53 Mutants lost in various casualities

7 killed in Faye/Ricardia border skirmish

1 Missing (Abhay)

1 Out of Action (Aiza)

111 Missing without records

So where are these mutants ? Taken by the Vampires/Werewolves who are responsible for the mutiny. Or have they been taken for some kind of experiment.

Have Pierre Knox and Vir Saldani been irresponsible when it came to keeping control on the information about Mutants or are they responsible with this thing of Mutants going missing with no records of their disappearance?

where are they is anybody's guess😉 No Vir wasnt involved in it at all. He helped Anthony.

Now I can see how Abhay and Piya being introduced as cousins and their being student and teacher is going to bring many twists with both of them becoming a part of different groups with different activities and engagement 😊

EXACTLY. Now you see?😉I didnt want it to be a typical college -same gang- lets have fun type of story. so common you know 🤣

Abhay, kya kar raha tha tu...

None of your business. (Abhay voice)

Well Shreya, thats all for now. And please dont bother to answer them now as I will wait for your updates 😊

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

Chapter 13

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"Some of it," admitted Radhika. "The rest was Kandpal. Radhika Kandpal."

Haha...I loved this Radhika Khandpal! Unusual character with an equally opposite name. 😉 her quoting literature often is also something I enjoyed a lot! Terrific work there Shreya! 👏

Thank you! I'm experimenting a bit with Radhika. So glad to know she's being noticed anyway.

And oh...Abhay Piya--these two love to fight. Don'😆t they? But we love when Abhay makes up to her! :D

Oh yeah. me too.

"He took a wet piece of cloth and began cleaning off the dried blood from the mutant's face and body- it was imperative he not waste any of the medicine.

He was no healer, but he did have a working knowledge of how to treat field wounds. It had been decades since he'd used them however.

The blood removed, he began applying the medicine on her body. He would not allow himself to feel anything. Anything at all."

This is a turning point of the story I suppose! Although It raises a serious question - does Sidhharth know her? Could be!

But it's also astonishing to see him so sympathetic towards a mutant. Says also that he isn't that cruel maybe.

Well no. He doesn't know her, not beyond what most strategists know.

Well..I see the story getting interesting with every single update! 👏 kudos!

"We'll ride it out," she said to Tanu. "No point doing anything right now, anyway."

But Tanu was biting her lip. "Heartbreak and probable death. How do you ride that out, Mish?"

Hmm here I am curious as to what they were talking about! *thinking hard*

"I spoke to Juliana a few hours ago," said Chand. "She said a human went missing from her town. Six feet, male, Asian descent. Black hair, blue eyes."

The informer went still. "I see. I'll get what I can the next time we meet- we may not meet for a while now."

"Understood," said Chand.

This indicates not a very pleasant time that lays ahead for Piya. I hope her good times on earth dn't end too rapidly! :(

Not too rapidly. I'm not that evil, come on.😆

P.s. wondering who in the humans could be a harm to her! 🤔

You and a few others.😆

You are taking this story the perfect route it could have headed and so far there's been absolute elements that surprise the readers now n then. Amazing! ⭐️

Thank you that's a huge relief. I have to walk a tightrope - can't give too much or too little.

Sorry for late. But what to do. Workload and other things held me.

But I won't leave midway, that's for sure. And I think you too know that. 😳

I don't mind. That you are commenting is enough.😳

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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oh so Piya has saved Abhay before too. he has more than one reason to have a soft corner for her in his heard. Radhika and Piya became friends. I donno why I cant trust Radhika much. is it weird of me 😕 I have this gut feelings towards ppl in real life and even for characters in movie or books. im weird i guess 😕

Yeah. I did hint at this scene before, when Piya recognizes him in the Hospice. It's okay. Radhika is definitely unusual and that she is getting noticed right now is enough for me😆

anyways why she is trying to hookup Piya and Arjun. Abhay wont be very pleased with Arjun 😆 Piya thinks the same like me and with Arjuns thought she thought of Abhay first as well haha.

Because she approves of him as a suitable partner for her? Girls do match make you know😆 Yeah. Piya will consider Abhay obviously

😛

So Kraya and her brother are werewolves and whats their connection to the story?

Well...nothing much right now. But I have to set them up right now or the timeline will get messed up in the coming stories which I want to write.😆

Faye: when i was reading the head strategist asking Anthony so many questions about who has the authority to access all the data i thought he will kill him but he didn't but limit the access. which is good in my opinion, less people know and more good for them. so the head strategist is Sid which is a surprise to me. he seems kind towards mutant n i hope its not for information n for real.

I did mention previously that Sid is Head Strategist but I didn't elaborate on the power his position holds. As for that, we'll know when the the mutant wakes up.

Abhay and piya oh god 😆 both really think too much about each other. its nice though. their clip moment was nice too and i wanted them to kiss damn 😆 though how long can they hold this tension between them. one day or other it will come out and i will wait for that!! and good to see Abhay being a bit playful n not just worried about piyas protection or thinking too much.

LOL nahi nahi abhi nahi abhi karo intezaar😆 Yeah , that was how Abhay used to be before...

Originally posted by: SheDevil

I read the remaining chapters and shreya why u played with my emotions?
You made Abhiya cousin ? Why? Why? Why?
Ab toh they cant even do love khulam khula even if they confess

Chupke se chori karo,chori me hai kitna mazaa😉

Your story is quite intriguing and I m loving it and hope sid remains positive throughout the story and I really wnt to knw wht relationship he and Abhay share

Dekhte hain what he remains. LOL.


I guess mish and tanu are witches and they r upto something and I dont trust tht new guy Arjun

Radhika is quite eccentric and I m still confused abt her as of now
Ab yeh wolves ki kya story hai ?

Sab sawaalon ke jawaab milenge...time se😛

Now cont and cant even say Abhiya ki love story aage badao coz u made them fake cousins and college mai inka luv will be awkward

College me haan...ab dekho😉

Awesome work shreya
😊

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

ye arjun kahan se aya bich me...ye kya chakkar hai????? abhay to..well he already has feelings for her...but piya...usko kab realise hoga?

Originally posted by: bellaaa

grt updates shreya ...
what the hell why this radhika pushing piya towards that dumb guy arjun :(

Dumb? He's not dumb.😆

and when will piya starting to realize her feelings for abhay ..

What feelings?😆

ohhh everyone is behind abhiya .. now wolves ;(
T and misha are very mysterious ..
awww loved that abhiya scene ;)
waiting eagerly for next update

Thanks beenish😳