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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update
Why cannot Piya go college
I mean she is very eager to learn and explore like the periodic table
I hope soon she will b able to go
Sorry for late reply
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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thanks so much for writing this. i have been waiting to read this for so long. 😆
first of all, why cant Piya go to college if Abhay can? she seems more into studies at stuff and she will do great there i guess. because...oh, yeah, i'm supposed to be elaborating next chapter. sorry.😆
and Abhay got impressed with her intelligence. it was really nice part. and i loved how abhay tried to help her and also praised her to Chand and Haseena. i donno if i told you but you are the best person to write about Chand and Haseena and their equation. they write them wonderfully. 👏
No you didnt😆 really? it's not intentional 😛
Abhay and Piya are both way distant from each other and seems like they will slowly open up to each other. sounds great though. the dress parts were hilarious.and abhay taking photo of her. so cute 😆 and god she is trying to think of vikrant and Abhay is thinking if she hates his touch. no wonder i called them SLOW 😆 but this is how i liked them actually.
Well this pace is the only one that fits. making them go fast will upset everything😳
i didnt expect T and Misha will be here. so they will be in college with Abhay i guess and i think Piya will be there too soon. her envy for Abhay being in college and not her is completely justified and she wasnt awkward in humans but i still liked how Abhay helped her out. how piya will sit at home and think what abhay is doing considering he will surely be grabbing attention of a lot of girls.
yes they were always going to be there. as for abhay, lets see what happens to him😆
great going Shreya. i will be waiting for next one 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Brilliant update as usual! Abhay and piya are slowly progressing towards liking each other😉😳


Thank you!😃 yes they are.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pal81

Glad u updated.. really like this story and the way its progressing.


Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

I really like how abhiya story is progressing slowly. Speed would look unreal here.
I hope piya too joins college soon


yes it would. yes she will.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dowy

Finally u updated. Thanks for that.
And about the update it is simply awesome. Piya's intelligence and abhay's care. Her childish acts. The little kiss 😳. Her nightmares and his soothing ways, was she really thinking about vikram?

Abhay would like to know that, wouldn't he? lol
And when did piya host a party before? Will she not go to college?

I'm sure if you read the story back, you'll see where she's been to a party. not exactly hosted though.
As for college, she probably will.😛
Too many question and plz plz plz don't delay ur update much.


The next one is done already.😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

Oh Shreya thank u soo much for update... 🤗
I was waiting for this for so long
Anyway the update was totally outstanding
Luv PiYa's childish behaviour n AbHaY's care for her
Yellow combo 🤣
Aww AbHaY kiss her that was lovely
So Abhiya story is starting now
Luv it n luv u for update
Waiting for nxt update...

Plzz update soon


Thanks a lot Noor. So glad you liked😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

Well i dnt think i need to say about the wide variety of your choice of words! But still no harm if i mention it again! Yeah-as always their vividness and apt application had applied simply to the beauty of the update even more.👏

humor was subtle but very appropriate and well integrated.👏 especially this part--

Haseena sent him a quelling look. "You know she is not. She is purposely being difficult." Abhay got up from his seat and hurried to his room, picking up his mobile phone and returning to the drawing room. He'd found out how to work the camera a few days ago, but hadn't found a reason to use it. Now...he just knew he would. Piya came down forty five minutes, this time in a bright red frock, knee length red books, a ruby choker and her hair pushed back with a bright red hairband. She'd also applied liberal amounts of rouge to her cheeks and bright red lipstick. She grinned from the top of the staircase, fully aware of exactly how horrifying she looked. There was a khi-chakkk sound and a bright flash. Abhay was holding his phone up at her. For a second, she was puzzled, till she heard Haseena's warning voice. "Piyashree..." She turned and went back up to her room, checking the clock. She still had two hours left. Abhay hadn't enjoyed himself so much in years. Piya paraded in front of them in several blinding getups : bright pink and fluoroscent orange, then lime green and electric blue. She also wore a cropped top and a short skirt, at which it was Chand's turn to take umbrage. Abhay had to physically restrain Haseena twice.

It was really hillarious! I wonder why Pia did it purposedly?! Was it mere amusement?!

Piya is a rebel, as I have already pointed out! so yeah. Amusement, you can say.😆

And the party held every intricate detail it could have had. It was done so very efficiently!👏 loved that whole scene.

And oh the chemistry part--it was i must say a very intelligent thing to add! The marvellous representation of Piya's cleverness shown through it, was undoubtedly brilliant!

Hmmm...considering what she is, it would make her dumb not to be good at Chemistry. And if nothing, Piya isn't dumb at least.😆

Please please update this sooner! It is one intelligent and most imploring work of your's Shreya! Carry soon!
🤗 thanks a lot. it gets harder to update these days.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

Okay i dont get it , why abhay can attend college but piya dont ? I mean clearly piya had a good no. of days to familiarize herself to this new world . and wont this raise any kind of suspicion ?

The outbreak of similarity in the elements of our world and Pia's world was mind driving and masst 😆



No, actually she's only had a week. And there are definite reasons why she can't attend, which shall be discussed next chapter.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update


pia has impressed & surprised abhay with her intelligence & understanding. she learned the entire periodic table within hours..that was quite something. loved the way abhay was trying to help her like always by getting her more books.
She already knew them. it was a simply matter for her😆

abhay- chand-haseena scene was funny specially whenever he calls him dad. loved chand complimenting haseena too.they are really perfect for each other.

abhay & pia's relationship is progressing in baby steps.Both of them have some misconceptions about themselves and are oblivious to the fact that all they want is to impress each other.
pia dressing away in those dresses to annoy haseena was hilarious. only abhay could understand the reason for her doing that. loved it. they have to progress in baby steps. too much too soon would make both of them shallow.
pia is sad about the way abhay & others humans have been treated but i feel she feels guilty too for turning a blind eye just because kabir was the head. however i feel that whenever she returns to faye later on she would do something to change that.
she probably would.😳

i liked how abhay takes care of her. he was there to comfort her when she was sleeping and also when she was stuck during her conversation. the party has gone well for both of them amidst the awkwardness & attraction going b/w them.
abhay will have to take a lot of care for her here😆
so abhay is going to start college & i am sure he is gonna attract lot of attention..would be fun to see pia's reaction to that. hoping she would join him soon.
She will.😃

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